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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 1:19 pm


Read this! scream

A Metaphorical Description of Thinking

I'm lost in a garden
Singing to roses
Yes
They listen
Here in the garden

Hello
My friend
I'm writing you a letter

Im lost in a garden
Singing to Roses
And I don't know
When they're
Gonna sing back

They simply won't tell me
How to escape
And the fog is
Getting thicker

I can see you faintly
Over there
In the mist
But you don't see me

So I'm writing
You a letter
Please reply

For now
I will
Sing to the roses

I want to get
Out of the garden
But do I
After all
Its very pretty
PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 4:30 pm


Beautiful and melodic! Bravo! It paints quite the picture in the mind! ^_^

Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen

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