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 Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:27 pm
Escape
Hikaru Akumu AKA Wickedlyxinsane AKA NDL
Everbody's gone away--
Am I the only one left to stay--
Disappearing beneath the sky--
Why don't I just fade and die--
I don't understand this madness--
I don't understand why I should run away
[Don't understand, just don't understand]
I don't understand why I should stand here and say--
I'm not afraid
~Don't forget I am here
Don't forget I exist
Acknowledge my breathing body
and don't let me go
I'm not the only one lettin' this--
Cold hearted, deep sighted Madness-
Stay inside my mind and
Destroy my happiness--
Trying to run away
[Just trying to get away]
Find a place to live and stay
[Livin' though I want to fade]
Let me go and Let me fade
HELP ME ESCAPE
I can't make it fade away--
And just stay the ******** away--
I keep trying to run away
But it just won't let me go--
~Hear my screasm of torture
Hear my cries for help
Help me find a way to get
out of this damn place-
Everything is here to stay
It won't let me run away
I can't find a way
To just
ESCAPE
Trying to run away
[Just trying to get away]
Find a place to live and stay
[Livin' though I want to fade]
Let me go and Let me fade
HELP ME ESCAPE
[I don't really know where this came out from. Somehow when I first started it, it sounded like some rap Mike would do. Yes, the guy from Linkin Park. Kyaah~ I love him. xD Either way, I'm not exactly sure if this should be the final draft. Some thigns I might edit out. But for now, constructive critisism and comments please.]
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:49 pm
i love it!! i think its perfect the way it is!! it doesnt need help so you can go ahead and take that right outta the title!! it sounds like itd be something from flyleaf.... so cool!!!
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 4:21 pm
Hikaru Akumu Escape
Hikaru Akumu AKA Wickedlyxinsane AKA NDL
Everbody's gone away--
Am I the only one left to stay--
Disappearing beneath the sky--
Why don't I just fade and die--
I don't understand this madness--
I don't understand why I should run away
[Don't understand, just don't understand]
I don't understand why I should stand here and say--
I'm not afraid
~Don't forget I am here
Don't forget I exist
Acknowledge my breathing body
and don't let me go
I'm not the only one lettin' this--
Cold hearted, deep sighted Madness-
Stay inside my mind and
Destroy my happiness--
Trying to run away
[Just trying to get away]
Find a place to live and stay
[Livin' though I want to fade]
Let me go and Let me fade
HELP ME ESCAPE
I can't make it fade away--
And just stay the ******** away--
I keep trying to run away
But it just won't let me go--
~Hear my screasm of torture
Hear my cries for help
Help me find a way to get
out of this damn place-
Everything is here to stay
It won't let me run away
I can't find a way
To just
ESCAPE
Trying to run away
[Just trying to get away]
Find a place to live and stay
[Livin' though I want to fade]
Let me go and Let me fade
HELP ME ESCAPE
[I don't really know where this came out from. Somehow when I first started it, it sounded like some rap Mike would do. Yes, the guy from Linkin Park. Kyaah~ I love him. xD Either way, I'm not exactly sure if this should be the final draft. Some thigns I might edit out. But for now, constructive critisism and comments please.]
i wrote a poem similar to this
excpet it was called "crushed"...i think
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