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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:36 pm


The Horrible Hotel

Summary: Violet, Klaus, and Sunny hide from the police by taking a job- hotel sitting, in complete isolation. A family was murdered at the hotel, and Klaus is getting weirder by the day. Will the evil hotel drive him to chopping his sisters up?

Disclaimer: I don’t own Violet, Klaus, Sunny, Count Olaf, Quigley, Isadora, Duncan (did you know Isadora Duncan was a famous dancer who died from chocking on a scarf?), the Baudelaire’s fortune, Olaf’s henchmen, Kit Snicket, Jacques Snicket, Olaf’s victims, the Quagmire’s fortune, or Mr. Poe.

I also don’t own the plot - this fanfiction is based off of "The Shining" so the plot's owned by Stephen King and Stanley Kubric. I don’t even own the funny “Don’t read this” prologue! (Mad Magazine)

Rating: PG13, for a small bit of blood and gore, ghosts, and general safety.

Genre: Horror/Drama

Enjoy, and review please! Oh, and forget where we are in the books, just humor me and be random. The siblings are still hiding from the police, ok? And they know Quigley… who they lost. ENJOY!

Oh yeah, this fanfiction may be weird because the story is littered with small, one-paragraph episodes. Or one-line glances into different scenes. This is because it’s hard to turn a movie into a book. Writing it takes less time than acting it.

P.S. The story gets better as it goes along since when I started it I was quite young and the later chapters are written now.
PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:42 pm


1
(and back-of-book)

Getting A Job


“If you’re interested in happy stories, trust me when I say that you’d be far better off reading something else. You’d no doubt prefer one of those Harry Potter books, or Teen People, or even the back of a package of Lunchables.

Because the book you’re about to read is not happy at all. And that’s fine – but the bigger problem is that it is also not innovative, clever or particularly entertaining. In fact, it’s filled with one unfortunate, repetitive, derivative, tedious, repetitive twist of fate after another.

…By now, you know all about the Baudelaires- there’s the eldest, Violet, who’s always inventing things; then there’s Klaus, the middle child, who is constantly reading things; and, of course, there’s Sunny, the baby, who is always biting things. This is not a summary – this is actually the full extent of the character development after 10 novels’ worth of stories. You’re up to speed!”

-A Series of Uneventful Misfortunes, The Similar Sequel, by Mad Magazine.

P.S. This is a horror story. Don’t let the random Mad Magazine humor confuse you.

In this fanfiction, you’ll find an evil hotel, upset ghosts, rivers of blood, character deaths, Snocats, a hedge maze, Quigley, and REDRUM.

If you don’t like evil hotels, upset ghosts, rivers of blood, character deaths, Snocats, a hedge maze, Quigley, and REDRUM, then you should click the back button and look for something else.

Sincerely,

Arabella Snicket


~*~*~*~


Violet sat anxiously on the bed of the cheap motel they were staying in.

“You see,” she had explained to Sunny, “Klaus has enough knowledge up his sleeve to pretend to be a grownup, so that plus his new fake ID and his growth spurt should be able to get us the job.”

“Lasagna?” Sunny had asked, which meant something like, “Why do we want a job?’

“Because this job is hotel sitting in the middle of the wilderness, dead of winter. The police won’t be able to find us and we can think of ways to get rid of Count Olaf and gather our strength and just relax. We might even see the Quagmire twins fly by… although I doubt it.”

“I don’t want to go there, Miss Baudelaire.” Sunny said in a croaky voice. That had been what Violet believed Sunny’s way of coping with having her life just a SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS- an invisible friend.

An invisible friend who, according to Sunny, lived inside her mouth. And whom, although important to the story, is very weird to write about.

“Why not, Jane?” asked Violet to Sunny’s invisible friend.

“I just don’t.” said Sunny in her croaky voice.

“Well, I’m sure we’ll…have a good time.” Said Violet reassuringly.

~*~*~*~*~

Meanwhile, Klaus was in an interview.

~*~*~*~*~


“The winters can be fantastically cruel. And the basic idea is to cope with the very costly damage and depreciation, which can occur. And this consists mainly of running the boiler, heating different parts of the hotel on a daily, rotating basis, repair damage as it occurs, and doing repairs so that the elements can't get a foothold.” said the job interviewer.

“Sounds fine.” Klaus said nervously. He was waiting for somebody to shout, “Hey, that’s a kid!”

“Physically, it's not a very demanding job. The only thing that can get a bit trying up here during the winter is the tremendous sense of isolation. Five months, you know.” The interviewer avoided Klaus’s eyes.

“Oh, no problem for us, we’re looking for isolation. Lots of, um, peace.” Klaus fidgeted.

“But there’s something you should know about that hotel, Mr. Baudelaire.” The interviewer said.

“Ok.” Klaus said, trying to sound cool and grown-up.

“Well, my predecessor in this job hired a man named Charles Grady as the winter caretaker. And he came up here with his wife and two little girls, I think about eight and ten. And he had a good employment record, good references, and from what I've been told, I mean he seemed like a completely normal individual.” The interviewer loosened his tie before continuing.

“But at some point during the winter, he must have suffered some kind of a complete mental breakdown. He ran amuck and, uh, killed his family with an axe. Stacked 'em neatly in one of the rooms of the West Wing, and then he, uh, put both barrels of a shotgun in his mouth.” He cleared his throat, and Klaus’s eyes widened.

“Police, they thought that was what the old-timers used to call cabin fever. Kind of claustrophobic reaction which can occur when people are shut in together over long periods of time.”

Silence in the room.

“Well, um, that’s quite a story.” Klaus commented. He fiddled with his fake wedding ring.

“Thought you ought to know…”

“Well, you can be rest assured, that's not going to happen with me. And as far as my sist- um, wife is concerned, uh, I'm sure she'll be absolutely fascinated when I tell her about it. She loves horror stories.”

“If you’re sure….”

“Absolutely.” What choice had he? It was ideal. Safe. Besides, he and his sibling had dealt with evil before. And cold isolation. What could go wrong?

~*~*~*~*~


Sunny looked in the mirror as she was brushing her teeth. She was talking to Jane.

“Klaus has gotten the job.” Jane said. “He’ll call Violet now and tell her he got the job.”

Just then the phone rang and Violet picked it up.

“Hey Klaus. You got it? You’re ok? Thank goodness…”

Sunny turned back to the mirror.

“Why don’t you want to go there?” she asked Jane (I’m not going to translate baby talk and stuff. Just assume Sunny’s saying stuff like “booga booga.”).

“Not telling.”

“Tell me.”

Suddenly, images flooded into Sunny’s mind. Blood squeezing out around the edges of a door, flowing into a hall. Two twin girls in blue party dresses holding hands in a corridor. Blood in the hall again, so much that the furniture floated…

Mouth open in a silent scream of horror, Sunny fainted.

~*~*~*~*~

End Of Chapter One

Please review! ^_^ Critisism is fine; just don't flame.

~*~*~*~*~


“A random quote, if said aloud,
May soon attract a hostile crowd.”
-Edward Gorey

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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:54 pm


2

The Drive, The Hotel, And The Twins



“Sunny, are you alright? Sunny? Wake up, Sunny!”

Sunny opened her eyes.

“You OK?” asked Violet worriedly.

“Yeah.” Sunny said, blinking.

“Why did you faint?”

“I don’t know. I can’t remember.” Sunny rubbed her head.

“What’s the last thing you can remember?” Violet questioned.

“Brushing my teeth.”

“And then?”

Sunny thought for a moment.

“Nothing. I can’t remember anything.”

~*~*~*~*~

On The Way To The Overlook Hotel

~*~*~*~*~


They were driving up a long, twisting path into the mountains. Violet is about the right age to drive, and she read an instruction book or something, I dunno. She IS very smart. Maybe she made a special car that she could drive.

Klaus was brooding, it seemed.

“Hey! Wasn't it around here that the Donner Party got snowbound?” Violet asked Klaus, who had read a lot more than her.

“No, that was farther west, in the Sierras.” Klaus said knowingly.

“Donner party?” asked Sunny.

“They were a party of settlers in covered-wagon times. They got snowbound one winter in the mountains. They had to resort to cannibalism in order to stay alive.” Klaus explained.

“Klaus!” said Violet, scornfully.

“It’s ok, I ate a book on cannibalism once.” Sunny said. “I know all about it.”

“See? It’s alright.” Said Klaus.


~*~*~*~*~

At The Hotel

~*~*~*~*~


Violet and Klaus walked with the interviewer who was showing them the hotel; let’s call him John.

“Are these Indian designs authentic?” asked Violet, looking around at the walls.

“Yeah, I think so.” John said, his feet slapping against the polished wooden floor.

“This is the most beautiful hotel I’ve ever seen.” commented Violet.

It was indeed. The lobby had lots of Indian decorations. Hand-woven tapestries hung on the walls. Southwestern knickknacks stood on carved wooden tables beside comfortable couches. There was a huge beautiful rug in the center of the room.

“Oh, this old place has had an illustrious past. Four presidents have stayed here. Lots of movie stars, and royalty too.” John informed them.

“Wow!” Violet gaped at the huge ceiling, tapestries, and beautiful furniture.

Klaus said nothing.

Meanwhile, Sunny was amusing herself with a game of darts.

(High pitched whistle)

She sensed something, and turned around. There stood the two twin girls, in their blue old-fashioned dresses. They stared at her for a while, and she stared back.

Then the twins, hand in hand, turned around and walked away.

~*~*~*~*~

END OF CHAPTER TWO

~*~*~*~*~


"Death is the ONLY adventure you have left."
-Hook
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:41 pm


The Horrible Hotel

3

The Tour, and Quigley Returns


Quote:
Author's Note: -This is a telepathic comment. Don't ask.-


John showed Klaus and Violet their room.

“It’s very homey.” Klaus commented.

Then they were taken outside. In front of them was what appeared to be…

“A hedge maze?” asked Violet.

“Yes. It's quite an attraction around here. The walls are thirteen feet high and the hedges about as old as the hotel itself. It's a lot of fun, but I wouldn't want to go in there unless I had an hour to spare to find my way out.” John said.

“Hmm.”

“Construction started in 1907. It was finished in 1909. The site is supposed to be located on an Indian burial ground and I believe they actually had to repel a few Indian attacks as they were building it.”

“On an Indian burial ground? How awful!” exclaimed Violet.

“Yes, awful.” John said, unconvincingly.

Then he led them to something that looked like a red car on tank wheels.

“The Sno-Cat operates very much like a car and it won't take you very long to get the hang of it.” He said.

“Snow cat? Cute name.”

“Yes. It enables you to drive over snow. Hopefully you won’t have to use it, but it’s there if you need to get out.”

They were then taken back inside to a huge ballroom called “The Gold Room.” Made sense, the entire room was painted gold.

“We can accommodate up to three hundred people here very comfortably.” John said proudly.

“Looks like this place would be great for a party.” Violet said, her voice echoing off the high vaulted ceiling.

“I'm afraid you're not going to do too well here, unless you brought your own supplies. We always remove all the booze from the premises when we shut down. That reduces the insurance we normally have to carry.”

“We don’t drink.” Klaus said.

“Well then you’re in luck.” John said.

~*~*~*~*~

In the kitchen, Violet and Klaus found a shock.

“Klaus, Violet, may I introduce Derek Forrest, our chef? Derek, these are our new caretakers.” Explained John.

“Nice to meet you.” said a calm “Derek” to the shocked Baudelaires.

Then a maid came in, with Sunny in tow.

“I found her outside looking for you.” She said, then left.

“Derek, you show these people around the kitchen. I’m taking a break.” John left.

Violet stared at the man they called “Derek”.

“Quigley?” she whispered in disbelief.

Quigley put his finger to his lips, looked around, and leaned in.

“Don’t give me away. I’m working here as Derek until I’m 18 and I can get my fortune, before Olaf does.”

“Oh. Well, it’s nice to see you again, Quigley.” Violet whispered. She had to force herself to not throw her arms around Quigley in relief.

“Small world, huh? That we should meet at this hotel.” Klaus said.

“We’re very lucky. Will you stay with us, Quigley?” Violet asked.

“No, I’m going home for the winter. But we can keep in touch.” He replied.

Quote:
REMINDER: Humor me, books 11 and 12 sort of didn’t happen or whatever. They knew and lost Quigley. That’s all.


He cleared his throat loudly.

“Well, one thing for sure, you won't have to worry about food, because you folks can eat up here a whole year and never have the same menu twice."

“Really?” Violet asked.

Quigley led them to the fridge, which was the size of a small bedroom, and filled with meat.

“You've got fifteen rib roasts, thirty ten-pound bags of hamburger, twelve turkeys, about forty chickens, fifty sirloin steaks, two-dozen of pork roasts, and twenty legs of lamb.”

They moved into the storeroom. This was full of canned and dry foods.

“We've got canned fruits and vegetables, canned fish and meats, hot and cold syrups, Post Toasties, Corn Flakes, Sugar Puffs, Rice Krispies, Oatmeal...” as he continued, Quigley looked at Sunny.

-You like ice cream, Sunny?-

“…and Cream of Wheat. You got a dozen jugs of black molasses, we got sixty boxes of dried milk, thirty 12-lb bags of sugar...Now we got dried peaches, dried apricots, dried raisins and dried prunes.”

Quigley led them out of the storeroom, and locked the door.

“How would you like some ice cream, Sunny?” he asked.

She nodded silently, still dumbfounded from the telepathic comment…and yet not. She somehow knew… what?


~*~*~*~*~

END OF CHAPTER THREE

~*~*~*~*~



“To meet nevermore
Tears of sorrow overflow
Deep within my heart
What good this potion of life?
All is but dust in the wind.”

- Poem from InuYasha movie 2, The Castle Beyond the Looking Glass

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:43 pm


The Horrible Hotel

4

The Shining, The Maze, Room 237, and Klaus's Temper


“Well, that’s the end of the tour. Pretty soon you’ll have the whole hotel to yourselves- by five o’clock you won’t know anybody was here.” John said.

Violet twisted her skirt nervously behind her back. This was their last chance to get out of it, before they were past the point of no return. Still, Klaus seemed to like it, and it was a beautiful hotel. And she had met Quigley- surly a good omen.

Oh, Quigley… how glad she was that he was alive!

So why couldn’t she shake this feeling of uneasiness off?


-The Shining-



Quigley watched Sunny eat her ice cream thoughtfully.

“So… how long have you been able to do this?” he asked, finally.

“What?” asked Sunny evasively.

“Shine.”

“Shine?”

“Yeah.” He looked off into the distance. “I remember when I was younger- and my family was alive and I was with my siblings- I remember how me and my grandmother used to hold long conversations- without even opening our mouths. She called it “shining.” And for a long time, I thought it was just the two of us that had the shine to us. Just like you probably thought you were the only one. But there are other folks, though mostly they don't know it, or don't believe it. How long have you been able to do it?” He looked questioningly at Sunny.

Sunny was silent.

“Why don’t you want to talk about it?” Quigley asked.

Sunny looked up. “I’m not supposed to.” She said.

Quigley was surprised. “Who says you aren’t supposed to?”

“Jane.” Sunny said simply.

“Who’s Jane?”

“Jane’s the little girl inside my mouth.”

Quigley blinked. “If I looked in your mouth, would I see her?”

“No, she hides. She slides down into my stomach.”

Quigley thought a moment.

“Does Jane tell you things?” he asked.

“Yes.” Sunny’s ice cream was now finished.

“How does she tell you things?”

“ It's like I go to sleep, and she shows me things. But when I wake up, I can't remember everything.”

Quigley bit his lip. “Does Violet and Klaus know about Jane?

“Yes.”

“Do they know she tells you things?”

“No. Jane told me never to tell 'em.” Sunny licked her fingers clean.

“Has Jane ever told you anything about this place? About the Overlook Hotel?”

Sunny pondered a moment. “I don't know.”

“Now think real hard now. Think!” he stared at Sunny.

Sunny paused.

“Maybe she showed me something.”

“Try to think of what it was.”

Sunny looked at Quigley.

“Quigley, are you scared of this place?” she asked.

“No. Scared - there's nothing here.” He bit his lip. “It's just that, you know, some places are like people. Some 'shine' and some don't. I guess you could say the Overlook Hotel here has something almost like 'shining.'”

Sunny looked at her nails. “Is there something bad here?”

“Well, you know, Sunny, when something happens, you can leave a trace of itself behind. Say like, if someone burns toast. There’s a smell in the air.

Well, maybe things that happen leave other kinds of traces behind. Not things that anyone can notice, but things that people who 'shine' can see. Just like they can see things that haven't happened yet.

Well, sometimes they can see things that happened a long time ago. I think a lot of things happened right here in this particular hotel over the years. And not all of them were good."

Sunny looked Quigley in the eye. “What about Room 237?”

Quigley stiffened. “Room 237?”

“You're scared of Room 237, aren’t you?” she asked.

“No I’m not!”

“Quigley,” said Sunny, her voice dropping to a whisper, “what’s in Room 237?”

“Nothing! There’s nothing in Room 237! But you don’t have any business going in there anyway. So stay out! You understand? Stay out!” Quigley said forcefully.

Sunny said nothing.

A Month Later


Everything was going well. The hotel was fine. They watched TV, read books, invented things, talked, played board games, and explored the hotel. Klaus had even started writing a book to pass the time.

At this moment, while Sunny is riding around the hotel on one of those serving trays on wheels, Violet is bringing breakfast upstairs for her and Klaus.

“It's really nice up here, isn't it?” Violet said with a pleased sigh.

“I love it. I really do. I've never been this happy or comfortable anywhere.” Klaus said, over the top of his book.

“Yeah, it's amazing how fast you get used to such a big place. I’m telling you, when we first came up here, I thought it was kind of scary.”

“I fell in love with it right away. When I came up here for my interview, it was as though I had been here before. I mean, we all have moments of 'deja-vu,' but this was ridiculous.” He looked up. “It was almost as though I knew what was going to be around every corner.”
Klaus was bored. He picked up a tennis ball and began bouncing it against the wall, trying to think.

Meanwhile, Violet and Sunny were trying out the hedge maze.

“I know that if you follow one wall of a maze, you can get out, but I think it would be fairer- and quicker- if we tried it the old-fashioned way.” Violet told Sunny. Sunny nodded, smiled, and began to chew on a hedge.

They weaved through the maze, trying to find the center.

Klaus looked down at the small miniature version of the maze on a table (wish I had one).

For a moment he thought he could see Violet and Sunny walking through it, like little dolls- but the moment passed.

Tuesday


Violet was cooking lunch andwatching the news,keeping an eye outfor signs of Olaf.

Sunny was wandering around, looking for stuff to chew.

She wandered around the silent, empty corridors. The carpets was soft and cushy under her little feet. She turned the corner, looking at the long hallway. The was the door. She walked up to it, and looked up at the room number. 237.

She looked at the knob, tempted. She was afraid, but excited too. She reached for the silver knob… she turned it.

It was locked. Sunny turned away, defeated. She looked up. There were the two girls. The two blondes in blue party dresses, holding hands, devoid of smiles.

Sunny turned and ran away down the hall.

~*~

Klaus, tired of being bored, tried writing. The hotel had a computer and printer. Perhaps the unfortunate adventures he and his sisters had had. Or fiction. He didn’t tell Violet or Sunny.

Violet came in.

“How’s the book going?” she asked. “get a lot written today?”

“Yes.” Klaus said coldly. Violet grew worried. He’d been acting very strangly, almost since he got the job.

“Hey! Weather forecast says it’s going to snow tonight.” Violet said, trying to lighten the mood.

Klaus clenched his teeth.

“What do you want me to do about it?” he growled. Violet was so shocked she took a step back.

Could Klaus - her little brother - really say something like that?

“What’s wrong? Why are you so angry?”

Klaus continued to stare at the screen, but his fists clenched. “I’m not grouchy. I’m just trying to not lose my concentration!” he waved at the computer, and looked at her. His eyes were cold and angry.

“Ok, ok… I’ll make you some sandwiches and come back later. Maybe you’ll let me read something then.”

“Violet, let me explain something to you. Whenever you come in here and interrupt me, you're breaking my concentration. You're distracting me.” He hit his desk with his fist, ripped up a few already printed pages, and threw them onto the floor. “And it will then take me time to get back to where I was. Understand?”

Violet stared, scared. She managed a small nod.

“Fine. I'm going to make a new rule. Whenever I'm in here, and you hear me typing,” he typed a few keys to demonstrate, “whether you don't hear me typing, whatever the hell you hear me doing in here, when I'm in here, that means that I am working. That means don't come in. Now do you think you can handle that?”

Violet nodded shakily. “Y-yeah.” She said. “Sure...”

“Good. Why don’t you start right now and get out of here?” he turned back to the computer.

Violet ran out of the room, back into the kitchen, sat on a chair, and buried her face in her hands.

What was wrong with Klaus?
PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:40 pm


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