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 Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:36 pm
... it just is what it is...
This is my new.. callin it like I see it section... I'll do this for many battles not just my own.. but this is gonna be me at my most analytical...
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:37 pm
C Teezy You can find most of my lyrics under PsalmsBlack but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle TomFirst line means I'm a guy in a high placeSo if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son) When it comes to this competition man something's missin Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God) Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master pieceI got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos) My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ* Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious Now from what I see here… it’s another solid effort from your truly… Every line that I have has a meaning that is linked to something… and there is a reason I color lines… now watch closely… Uncle Tom… and Myspace are in brown… I wonder why… hmmm… Now… think about that… and now the third and first line… Third line tells you that the first line tells you I’m a God… and my verses are Psalms… duh.. But… That’s why I would have the authority to kick you off of MySpace… or my space.. Tom and God respectively… Now the sig line.. It’s for those that really enjoy the English language to the point that they can realize that smart used to mean painful… so umm yeah… WORDPLAY! Add with me reiterating dope rhymes with me saying “face this piff” and “spittin dope lines” it’s a smash hit right there… the love/hate relationship is just icing on the cake.. Now the next line is obvious if you do your research… he felt eager to face me… so I’m like I guess he wants to get raped again… now think about it… The Lil MC thing is hella obvious for all the regs out there… so I wont bother explaining that for the newbs… Now for the controversial line… Now if you have known me for the past year… I’ve been playing and fiddling with my rhyme schemes for a while now… case in point… I purposely over rhyme and not rhyme end words A LOT… example.. Competition, missin’, dissin, hittin… And… check closely newbs… I want you to REALLY PAY ATTENTION TO THE FLOW THAT IS ABOUT TO COMMENCE IN THIS LINE: When it comes to this competition man something's missin When it… COMEs to this COMpetition man SOMEthin’s’ missin… When it comes to this COMPETITION man SOMETHIN’S MISSIN It’s called flow points.. That gets mad flow points… internal mulites.. Read em and weep… if you read it aloud… it’s a game over… Now… the next lines… oh my… this is the tie-in line right here… from the jump I say that I am the God… right? Okay… that would explain why I would say that Mak is so wack he named himself after me.. MAK WACK AFT… btw way… so many rhyme schemes… *smh at the newbs again* Vicious and Capricious… that’s nice.. And then the masterpiece rhyming with after me thing… is nice Now… All the keys… another DOPE line… see how I keep bringing in variations of dope and god during the WHOLE VERSE! It’s called skill ppl… it’s called skill And yeah… Falling trees hit pretty hard there mayne… I’m sure they do… And no I do it for a purpose… I diss him by saying there just ain’t no use in dissin the guy.. Cause he’s boring so decide to liven up the battle by talking about me… But I was sure some newbs was gonna get mad at me for doing that so I decide to talk about him again… and how boring he is… as I will describe thoroughly in a second… but first… the end… Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious Unconscious… it’s called wordplay… sleep is a state unconsciousness… so in essence I was saying that I could beat him sleeping… or beat HIM to sleep… WORDPLAY!!! And now… *yawns* Jaiden Stryker Ay yo, Teezy’s rhymes are so plain and overlookable, he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. On top of that, your bad luck got your a**s pierced by Cupid’s arrow, so now you use that excuse to explain why your booty got taken by Jack Sparrow. Screw the theatrics and the-wack-tricks of your wordplay. Cuz I’ve seen better s**t shitted after a Tacobell turd-spray. Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual? I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. You need to recollect and check your introspect and dissect the inner-Teez to find some self- respect. Cuz if you had it, you wouldn’t find it so delectableto have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable. You were wack, so claimed to retire to make an escape, cuz your s**t is more pathetic than a Screech <******** with Stryke? I’ll cause you strife that’ll burden your life, by robbing you of your manhood like having Lorena Bobbit for a wife. Teezy spits a lot, but his s**t makes you cringe like eatin’ a lemon, with a flow less in demand than a razor to French women. I spit sick with easily felt rhymes without fail, even when the path is tedious. But even if Ray Charles tried feeling Teezy’s, he’d go, “Good Georgia, that’s hideous!” He started off wrong… you can just start off NOT rhyming man.. You can’t… it ain’t right… two wrong rhymes don’t make a right… like I’ve said before… wait… I’ll say it different to make my point very obvious… detect and overlook don’t rhyme… see? It was a nice try to take a stab at me bolding… but… it’s kind of hard to pull off when you bold (though not for the same reasons) as well… But then again… Spyder and Ceaz also bold if you haven’t been paying attention… Next bar… I’ll ask this… Is Stryker calling himself Jack Sparrow? If he is, than that’s a nice line saying that what I thought was mine (the 50k) is now his… If not… then… the whole bar makes no sense whatsoever… and the flow of that line was horrible at best… I’ve seen worse.. But that doesn’t make this any better… you really think you could say 21 syllables and still be in rhythm? Next bar… s**t shitted? Really mayne… s**t shitted? Coulda said spit shitted… could have said just “s**t” or you could said anything but s**t shitted… that’s just redundant… and turd-spray? Yeah… that was “nice” man…sounds a bit… forced… even for my tastes… How is metrosexual a diss to my intelligence? That isn’t witty… at all… AND NOW For the guy whose always pullin out the dictionary links.. Analyze this… INTROSPECT IS NOT A NOUN!!!! in·tro·spect in·tro·spect [ìntrə spékt, íntrə spèkt] (past in·tro·spect·ed, past participle in·tro·spect·ed, present participle in·tro·spect·ing, 3rd person present singular in·tro·spects) VI examine feelings: to undertake a detailed mental self-examination of feelings, thoughts, and motives [Late 17th century. Directly or via Latin introspectare , literally “to look into repeatedly,” from introspect- , past participle stem of introspicere “to look into,” from specere .] Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. Meaning.. This “Jaiden Stryker” You need to recollect and check your introspect Is not possible… yet another knock on your (as well as Shenco’s and Phoenix Fist’s) intelligence My introspect? xp And again like in the first bar… it comes up… it would have been a nice line… if it wasn’t for tha fact that none of it rhymed and it just sounded lame… as in was worded in an unattractive manner… Delect and Huxt does not rhyme… The Lorena Bobbit line was prolly the best line you came up with… but the wording was just so… meh that it made it not so humorous… And yeah your last bar… DIDN’T RHYME AGAIN… Tedious and hideous do not rhyme… just cause it has -ous at the end does not mean it rhymes… TEDI And HIDE- Don’t Rhyme… Oh and the next to last bar was okay… but yeah.. It really wasn’t all that good man.. It really wasn’t… there is just no way it was…
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:39 pm
Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable...
THATS THE POINT STRYKER
for instance...
and this is for you to answer, Stryker..
does atrocious rhyme with outrageous?
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:29 am
You love starting s**t, don't you? Typical. Are you SO desparate to win, that you address this in a separate topic? p***y move, man. I was just going to let it all go so we could have a decent voting process. But if you want me to stoop to your level to play your little games, fine. Rhyme: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/RhymeQuote: 1. identity in sound of some part, esp. the end, of words or lines of verse.
2. a word agreeing with another in terminal sound: Find is a rhyme for mind and womankind. To rhyme, the endings are the same. What's in the middle doesn't matter. Look at example 2. The original word is "find," so they're looking at sounds that end with "i-n-d." They selected "mind" and "womankind." In "detectable" and "Huxtable," I was rhyming "able." Not with "tect" or "hux." Those aren't even the ending sounds... if they were in the end, they wouldn't be rhymes. "able" was in the end. Just like "ind" was for "find," "mind," and "womankind." Understand now? "Able" is doing the same thing as "ind." If you still don't get it, I don't know what else to tell you. I broke it down as best as I could. Since I can't explain it better than this, there's no more need to go on anymore. That's what a rhyme is. Your silly definition of it is flawed. Learn it, and learn it well. Ceaz and Spyder bold. Fine. But you know what? If I don't bold, people can STILL tell it rhymes. I bold my rhymes just because it's something I do. You bold your punches for reasons I already explained. Let me break the rest down in simple terms for you: You have HEARTS around youe avi. Hearts are a symbol of love. Cupid is involved in love. Cupid is said to fire arrows at people to cause them to fall in love with people. So I said that you got hit with Cupid's arrow. With the concept of you being in love now established, many people MAKE love when in love. So I said that your BOOTY was taken by Jack Sparrow. Jack is a pirate, and pirates have been known to refer to treasures/goods as BOOTY. It's a double meaning. Booty = treasure/a**. Simple, yes? Turd/s**t: What I compare your rhymes too. Introspect: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Introspect1. to practice introspection; consider one's own internal state or feelings.
–verb (used with object)
2. to look into or examine (one's own mind, feelings, etc.).
[Origin: 1675–85; back formation from introspection] Your introspect is what I'm telling you to look at. Things from deep down. And once you search yourself, maybe you can find self-respect. It's so damn simple! What's with you? Recollect what was once there, check the REAL you, pick things apart to see what's what, and regain that specific thing. I had no idea that I'm spitting way over your head. I had assumed everything was simple. I hope to God you know what intellect is. I'm belittling yours because I feel that only a FOOL would allow themselves to be dressed by those Queer Eye people. Again, a simple concept. Quote: just cause it has -ous at the end does not mean it rhymes… Lmao! Stay in school. Recollect(recall/reflect/remember) the definition I provided from dictionary.com. Call it like you see it? Lol. Cut the crap. You know exactly what you're doing here.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:42 am
Quote: Rhyme: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Rhyme1. identity in sound of some part, esp. the end, of words or lines of verse.
2. a word agreeing with another in terminal sound: Find is a rhyme for mind and womankind. To rhyme, the endings are the same. What's in the middle doesn't matter. Look at example 2. The original word is "find," so they're looking at sounds that end with "i-n-d." They selected "mind" and "womankind." In "detectable" and "Huxtable," I was rhyming "able." Not with "tect" or "hux." Those aren't even the ending sounds... if they were in the end, they wouldn't be rhymes. "able" was in the end. Just like "ind" was for "find," "mind," and "womankind." Understand now? "Able" is doing the same thing as "ind." If you still don't get it, I don't know what else to tell you. I broke it down as best as I could. Since I can't explain it better than this, there's no more need to go on anymore.That's what a rhyme is. Your silly definition of it is flawed. Learn it, and learn it well. Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable... Quote: Ceaz and Spyder bold. Fine. But you know what? If I don't bold, people can STILL tell it rhymes. I bold my rhymes just because it's something I do. You bold your punches for reasons I already explained. They bold the same way, I bold.. NOT for rhymes.. BUT PUNCHES! Quote: Let me break the rest down in simple terms for you: You have HEARTS around youe avi. Hearts are a symbol of love. Cupid is involved in love. Cupid is said to fire arrows at people to cause them to fall in love with people. So I said that you got hit with Cupid's arrow. With the concept of you being in love now established, many people MAKE love when in love. So I said that your BOOTY was taken by Jack Sparrow. Jack is a pirate, and pirates have been known to refer to treasures/goods as BOOTY. It's a double meaning. Booty = treasure/a**. Simple, yes? Duh... But my explaniation sadly was better than yours... Why? Because Jack Sparrow should be you or else it would be meaningless... I would THINK that the BOOTY would REFER to the PRIZE i.e. THE FIFTY GRAND PRIZE... however YOU DIDNT EVEN ATTEMPT AT REFFERING TO THAT... *smh* Quote: Turd/s**t: What I compare your rhymes too. That's some mighty fine wordplay you got there... Quote: Introspect: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Introspect1. to practice introspection; consider one's own internal state or feelings.
–verb (used with object)
2. to look into or examine (one's own mind, feelings, etc.).
[Origin: 1675–85; back formation from introspection] Your introspect is what I'm telling you to look at. Things from deep down. And once you search yourself, maybe you can find self-respect. It's so damn simple! What's with you? Recollect what was once there, check the REAL you, pick things apart to see what's what, and regain that specific thing. I had no idea that I'm spitting way over your head. I had assumed everything was simple. If INTROSPECT is a VERB then it can not be used in the manner that you used it... i.e. I cannot posses a VERB... I can possess a NOUN... I COULD check my INTROSPECTION(that would be the noun form)... duh! Quote: I hope to God you know what intellect is. I'm belittling yours because I feel that only a FOOL would allow themselves to be dressed by those Queer Eye people. Again, a simple concept. Ummm... technically... they dress people in a fashionable manner... in a way that gets you the girls in the club... you'd be a fool NOT to want them to get you an outfit... they wouldn't GAY you up.. they would just make you look better... duh!! Quote: just cause it has -ous at the end does not mean it rhymes… Lmao! Stay in school. Recollect(recall/reflect/remember) the definition I provided from dictionary.com. Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable...
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:56 am
Quote: They bold the same way, I bold.. NOT for rhymes.. BUT PUNCHES! I'm pretty sure I brought that up in my first bar. So... why are you pointing out what I already pointed out now? Quote: Duh... But my explaniation sadly was better than yours... Why? Because Jack Sparrow should be you or else it would be meaningless... I would THINK that the BOOTY would REFER to the PRIZE i.e. THE FIFTY GRAND PRIZE... however YOU DIDNT EVEN ATTEMPT AT REFFERING TO THAT... *smh* In your opinion, it was better. Personally, I like my things to be relevant. I brought up the Cupid part to set up for the line about you getting ********. That's what I meant by "taken," BTW. Apparently you didn't pick up on that whole thing. You fell in love and got ********. That sums up my first bar, basically. If I was talking about the treasure exclusively, relevance flys out the window. Another thing that separates us. Quote: That's some mighty fine wordplay you got there... It was a direct insult. I was accused of being to vague in my last battle. I made sure to be blunt this time. Quote: If INTROSPECT is a VERB then it can not be used in the manner that you used it... i.e. I cannot posses a VERB... I can possess a NOUN... I COULD check my INTROSPECTION(that would be the noun form)... duh! Uhh... to use something IS a verb. Use = verb. Look it up. DUH! Just like if I were to tell you to "use your intelligence." You know exactly what I'm telling you. Or do you want me to look up intelligence for you too? Quote: Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable... Again, if the end sounds sound the same, then it's a rhyme. Doesn't matter what's in front, doesn't matter what's in the middle. The ending is what makes it rhyme. I really hope you're just playing around with me and not being dead serious.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:13 am
i know that i contributed to certain things. my reason? i just found some things hilarious. i've got no problems with vicious. i know he beefs with some other people, but i'm only teasing him. but this chain reaction is pretty gay. it was vicious and i, then shenco got involved because vicious dropped his name, now you two are going at it. let's just drop this whole thing and let people vote before LG ends up wack like every other rap guild. since my tendency to screw around with people contributed to this, my bad. alright? let's just end this. no evidence. biggrin
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:22 am
Through that anti-capitalization, there was a decent point. Lol. But yes, s**t's gotten out of hand. I hope you now know why I refrain from jumping into people's business. Anyway, people will think what they think. And many times wont be budged by your reasoning. Not just here, but life itself. But this has gotten stupid.
I agree with that "no evidence" bit too. Up to deleting the s**t that'll spark trouble, Teez? Or would you rather have this continue? To be honest, I'd rather be writing more rhymes over debating over an opinion.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:39 am
NOT TO GET IN DHA MIDDLE BUT CAN YALL GET BACC TO THIS AND VOTE ON MACS AND YV BATTLE
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 11:39 pm
Quote: They bold the same way, I bold.. NOT for rhymes.. BUT PUNCHES! I'm pretty sure I brought that up in my first bar. So... why are you pointing out what I already pointed out now? Because dissing my bolding style... would be dissing CEAZ AND SPYDA'S BOLDING STYLE... do you really think that would be an effective punch... that's like dissing someone for using commas to show breath marks... Quote: Duh... But my explaniation sadly was better than yours... Why? Because Jack Sparrow should be you or else it would be meaningless... I would THINK that the BOOTY would REFER to the PRIZE i.e. THE FIFTY GRAND PRIZE... however YOU DIDNT EVEN ATTEMPT AT REFFERING TO THAT... *smh* In your opinion, it was better. Personally, I like my things to be relevant. I brought up the Cupid part to set up for the line about you getting ********. That's what I meant by "taken," BTW. Apparently you didn't pick up on that whole thing. You fell in love and got ********. That sums up my first bar, basically. If I was talking about the treasure exclusively, relevance flys out the window. Another thing that separates us. Quote: That's some mighty fine wordplay you got there... It was a direct insult. I was accused of being to vague in my last battle. I made sure to be blunt this time. I'm not even gonna touch that one...Quote: If INTROSPECT is a VERB then it can not be used in the manner that you used it... i.e. I cannot posses a VERB... I can possess a NOUN... I COULD check my INTROSPECTION(that would be the noun form)... duh! Uhh... to use something IS a verb. Use = verb. Look it up. DUH! Just like if I were to tell you to "use your intelligence." You know exactly what I'm telling you. Or do you want me to look up intelligence for you too? in·tel·li·gence [in téllijəns]
(plural in·tel·li·genc·es)
n
Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.
See how intelligence is a NOUN and introspect is a VERB???
s**t...Quote: Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable... Again, if the end sounds sound the same, then it's a rhyme. Doesn't matter what's in front, doesn't matter what's in the middle. The ending is what makes it rhyme. I really hope you're just playing around with me and not being dead serious. okay... like I said before...
DOES ATROCIOUS RHYME WITH OUTRAGEOUS?
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 12:02 am
C Teezy Quote: They bold the same way, I bold.. NOT for rhymes.. BUT PUNCHES! I'm pretty sure I brought that up in my first bar. So... why are you pointing out what I already pointed out now? Because dissing my bolding style... would be dissing CEAZ AND SPYDA'S BOLDING STYLE... do you really think that would be an effective punch... that's like dissing someone for using commas to show breath marks... Quote: Duh... But my explaniation sadly was better than yours... Why? Because Jack Sparrow should be you or else it would be meaningless... I would THINK that the BOOTY would REFER to the PRIZE i.e. THE FIFTY GRAND PRIZE... however YOU DIDNT EVEN ATTEMPT AT REFFERING TO THAT... *smh* In your opinion, it was better. Personally, I like my things to be relevant. I brought up the Cupid part to set up for the line about you getting ********. That's what I meant by "taken," BTW. Apparently you didn't pick up on that whole thing. You fell in love and got ********. That sums up my first bar, basically. If I was talking about the treasure exclusively, relevance flys out the window. Another thing that separates us. Quote: That's some mighty fine wordplay you got there... It was a direct insult. I was accused of being to vague in my last battle. I made sure to be blunt this time. I'm not even gonna touch that one...Quote: If INTROSPECT is a VERB then it can not be used in the manner that you used it... i.e. I cannot posses a VERB... I can possess a NOUN... I COULD check my INTROSPECTION(that would be the noun form)... duh! Uhh... to use something IS a verb. Use = verb. Look it up. DUH! Just like if I were to tell you to "use your intelligence." You know exactly what I'm telling you. Or do you want me to look up intelligence for you too? in·tel·li·gence [in téllijəns]
(plural in·tel·li·genc·es)
n
Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.
See how intelligence is a NOUN and introspect is a VERB???
s**t...Quote: Oh and for future reference... if you are gonna rhyme two words... the accented syllable must rhyme as well as the end syllable... Again, if the end sounds sound the same, then it's a rhyme. Doesn't matter what's in front, doesn't matter what's in the middle. The ending is what makes it rhyme. I really hope you're just playing around with me and not being dead serious. okay... like I said before...
DOES ATROCIOUS RHYME WITH OUTRAGEOUS? your words fly over their heads like airplanes man...nice topic though i can explain all my votes thoroughly, thats all i'm doin for a while i guess unless i get like called out or something
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:27 pm
C Teezy Because dissing my bolding style... would be dissing CEAZ AND SPYDA'S BOLDING STYLE... do you really think that would be an effective punch... that's like dissing someone for using commas to show breath marks... That's a pretty bad comparison. Not that I expected any different. I'm shocked that you still fail to understand. I said YOU bold your PUNCHES because that's the only way for them to be detectable. I, Stryker, pointed out that YOUR punchlines are so plain, they are overlooked. And in order for one to go, "Oh... that's supposed to be a punch" is for you to BOLD them. Ceaz and Spyda's punches can be noticed without being bolded, therefore it doesn't make a difference whether it's bolded or not. Yours in your more recend disses have been dependant on being bolded. So stop trying to act like I dissed anybody other than you. Unlike you, I DO know how to stick to dissing the designated person. Not relevant? Any diss towards you is relevant. It's a battle. On top of that, you have no business trying to tell me about what's relevant. You started talking about Mak, Silver, and yourself more than me. XD Yours doesn't even qualify as a diss to me. Quote: in·tel·li·gence [in téllijəns] (plural in·tel·li·genc·es) n Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. See how intelligence is a NOUN and introspect is a VERB??? s**t... u_u How about I just do you a favor next time, and use smaller words and phrases you can understand? Quote: DOES ATROCIOUS RHYME WITH OUTRAGEOUS? O-U-S and O-U-S. Well gee, since they both make the "us" sound in the END, then dictionary.com says yes. You really need to stop with the bullshit and hypocrisy. You clearly don't rhyme in a lot of things, but want to accuse me of not rhyming. I was clear when I said you bold your punches because that's the only way they're detectable, then you try to make it into something else. You go directly against definitions from dictionary.com, you accuse me of not being relevant when you're the one talking about other people, and try to cover up the fact that my s**t went straight over your head. On top of that, you make this silly as topic in hopes to save your own a**. Pathetic.
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 9:29 pm
Jaiden Stryker C Teezy Because dissing my bolding style... would be dissing CEAZ AND SPYDA'S BOLDING STYLE... do you really think that would be an effective punch... that's like dissing someone for using commas to show breath marks... That's a pretty bad comparison. Not that I expected any different. I'm shocked that you still fail to understand. I said YOU bold your PUNCHES because that's the only way for them to be detectable. I, Stryker, pointed out that YOUR punchlines are so plain, they are overlooked. And in order for one to go, "Oh... that's supposed to be a punch" is for you to BOLD them. Ceaz and Spyda's punches can be noticed without being bolded, therefore it doesn't make a difference whether it's bolded or not. Yours in your more recend disses have been dependant on being bolded. So stop trying to act like I dissed anybody other than you. Unlike you, I DO know how to stick to dissing the designated person. Not relevant? Any diss towards you is relevant. It's a battle. On top of that, you have no business trying to tell me about what's relevant. You started talking about Mak, Silver, and yourself more than me. XD Yours doesn't even qualify as a diss to me. Quote: in·tel·li·gence [in téllijəns] (plural in·tel·li·genc·es) n Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. See how intelligence is a NOUN and introspect is a VERB??? s**t... u_u How about I just do you a favor next time, and use smaller words and phrases you can understand? Quote: DOES ATROCIOUS RHYME WITH OUTRAGEOUS? O-U-S and O-U-S. Well gee, since they both make the "us" sound in the END, then dictionary.com says yes. You really need to stop with the bullshit and hypocrisy. You clearly don't rhyme in a lot of things, but want to accuse me of not rhyming. I was clear when I said you bold your punches because that's the only way they're detectable, then you try to make it into something else. You go directly against definitions from dictionary.com, you accuse me of not being relevant when you're the one talking about other people, and try to cover up the fact that my s**t went straight over your head. On top of that, you make this silly as topic in hopes to save your own a**. Pathetic. how the hell does your s**t go over anyone's head, it's downright remedial at points. but dude delectable and ******** huxtable DO NOT rhyme there is no way of slurring your words to make that sound feasible at all, thats basically what he is trying to get across. i mean why would you want to put those two words together and rhyme with them anyway? when there are so many words that could rhyme with delectable or detectable. GOD, it didnt even need to go that far. i mean the verse was below average anyway, s**t
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 9:37 pm
Quote: That's a pretty bad comparison. Not that I expected any different. I'm shocked that you still fail to understand. I said YOU bold your PUNCHES because that's the only way for them to be detectable. Wait for it... stare Quote: I, Stryker, pointed out that YOUR punchlines are so plain, they are overlooked. And in order for one to go, "Oh... that's supposed to be a punch" is for you to BOLD them. Wait for it... Quote: Ceaz and Spyda's punches can be noticed without being bolded, therefore it doesn't make a difference whether it's bolded or not. There... Right there... Do you see this? Double standard... either that... or somebody lacks the intellegence to see an actual diss... which means someone really doesn't like themselves... Quote: Yours in your more recend disses have been dependant on being bolded. So stop trying to act like I dissed anybody other than you. Unlike you, I DO know how to stick to dissing the designated person. haha... this is weird.. because usually.. I'm the best at personals... blaugh Quote: Not relevant? Any diss towards you is relevant. It's a battle. On top of that, you have no business trying to tell me about what's relevant. You started talking about Mak, Silver, and yourself more than me. XD Yours doesn't even qualify as a diss to me. Well for one... that wasn't even relavent to the point presented! lol The point was that.. I said the Jack Sparrow line was rather irrevalent in comparsion to what I saw as an improvment... for two... Quote: I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** Duh! Quote: Quote: in·tel·li·gence [in téllijəns] (plural in·tel·li·genc·es) n Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. See how intelligence is a NOUN and introspect is a VERB??? s**t... u_u How about I just do you a favor next time, and use smaller words and phrases you can understand? See what's sad is... the definitions of rhyme, introspect, and NOW INTELLIGENCE... are in clear view.... and yet you continually manage to misconstrue all three definitions.. case in point... Quote: Quote: DOES ATROCIOUS RHYME WITH OUTRAGEOUS? O-U-S and O-U-S. Well gee, since they both make the "us" sound in the END, then dictionary.com says yes. I'm going to conduct a poll on this...
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 9:42 pm
A pretty shameful display on your part, Teezy. You start s**t in the thread itself, then you brought it to another topic. You really need to grow up. It's an internet rhyme battle, and you took it THIS far? And for what? Lol. 50k in Gaia gold so important to you, that you shame yourself? Pathetic.
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