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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:29 am
No min 10 bar(ish) max
No feeding recycling and all that jazz
Whoever accepts goes first
mmm'kay?
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 2:19 pm
I ant touching this one... Even when I was back at my best I don't think I beat you, or if I did it's not by much. So ima sit this out...
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:24 pm
i accept. i'm not that good when it comes to thinking up things, but i guess i can only get better. lol.
you think Unlucky Lucifer can scare Phoenix?
please, that's a more ludicrous fantasy than Square-Enix.
i got this "devil" more fidgety than a b***h with herpes
cuz this spectacular flame got you sweatin and searchin for a Slurpee.
burnin you up 'til you're darker than Wesley Snipes at night
at a temperature to make you look like a shadow even in daylight.
this Phoenix ressurected cuz there's a problem i left uncorrected.
with my strength collected, i'm robbing your hope like the AIDs infected.
so bring it Satan, so this Holy soldier can squash you like a bug,
and humilate you by shoving your pitchfork up your a** like a butt-plug.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:26 pm
yo lucky you the new chaos?
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:31 pm
Congratulations. This is the VERY FIRST rhyme that I liked from you, Phoenix. Not that you're out of the water just yet since Lucifer has to reply. But it at least looks like you've been practicing.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:37 pm
thanks. smile that was actually me at my current best.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 9:01 am
Phoenix Fist i accept. i'm not that good when it comes to thinking up things, but i guess i can only get better. lol. you think Unlucky Lucifer can scare Phoenix? please, that's a more ludicrous fantasy than Square-Enix. i got this "devil" more fidgety than a b***h with herpes cuz this spectacular flame got you sweatin and searchin for a Slurpee. burnin you up 'til you're darker than Wesley Snipes at night at a temperature to make you look like a shadow even in daylight. this Phoenix ressurected cuz there's a problem i left uncorrected. with my strength collected, i'm robbing your hope like the AIDs infected. so bring it Satan, so this Holy soldier can squash you like a bug, and humilate you by shoving your pitchfork up your a** like a butt-plug. Demonic and dominant ruling with an iron fist Spit fire hot enough to burn phoenix to a crisp Who are you nelly futardo? This is downright absurd I'm tryna battle, this dude thinks he's a bird You need to set your sights and rise up through the gears I'll bring you down to earth cos you've been winging it for years* For a guy named phoenix fist, you really lack a punch Sloppy with your hands I wonder, can you even pack your lunch? I've got a hunch, infact I have an idea Improve before you bring those shitty rhymes back here You lack fear to face me, an ignorant trait Pre judged you could take me but defeat was you fate. *He has wingin it trousers. I never ever remember seeing him with another pair.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 9:50 am
Lucky Lucifer Phoenix Fist i accept. i'm not that good when it comes to thinking up things, but i guess i can only get better. lol. you think Unlucky Lucifer can scare Phoenix? please, that's a more ludicrous fantasy than Square-Enix. i got this "devil" more fidgety than a b***h with herpes cuz this spectacular flame got you sweatin and searchin for a Slurpee. burnin you up 'til you're darker than Wesley Snipes at night at a temperature to make you look like a shadow even in daylight. this Phoenix ressurected cuz there's a problem i left uncorrected. with my strength collected, i'm robbing your hope like the AIDs infected. so bring it Satan, so this Holy soldier can squash you like a bug, and humilate you by shoving your pitchfork up your a** like a butt-plug. Demonic and dominant ruling with an iron fist Spit fire hot enough to burn phoenix to a crisp Who are you nelly futardo? This is downright absurd I'm tryna battle, this dude thinks he's a bird You need to set your sights and rise up through the gears I'll bring you down to earth cos you've been winging it for years* For a guy named phoenix fist, you really lack a punch Sloppy with your hands I wonder, can you even pack your lunch? I've got a hunch, infact I have an idea Improve before you bring those shitty rhymes back here You lack fear to face me, an ignorant trait Pre judged you could take me but defeat was you fate. *He has wingin it trousers. I never ever remember seeing him with another pair. the cool thing about this battle was the two of you both played off of each other's name. the only thing is, everyone does that to lucifer, therefore it made phoenix sound a little less original. however lucifer had a superior flow. his rhyme scheme was in tact, punchlines were very consistent. well, both verses were rather consistent. lucifer's lines were just stronger, hands down. lucifer was orignal overall, his metaphors ripped through phoenix's similes Quote: I'll bring you down to earth cos you've been winging it for years this line was the killer right here, it played off of phoenix's name and got personal with his avatar at the same time. it was virtually a combo Quote: burnin you up 'til you're darker than Wesley Snipes at night this line wont hold up, it's just too overused and simple. it's too weak. you definitely have to come with some stronger material. it dont hurt to a little research before you spit or whenever just so you can make your metaphors endless. it helps to know a lot of s**t. VOTE: Lucifer if you need more reasons why lucifer won i got em BITE ME
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:59 am
Lucky Lucifer Phoenix Fist i accept. i'm not that good when it comes to thinking up things, but i guess i can only get better. lol. you think Unlucky Lucifer can scare Phoenix? please, that's a more ludicrous fantasy than Square-Enix.i got this "devil" more fidgety than a b***h with herpes cuz this spectacular flame got you sweatin and searchin for a Slurpee.burnin you up 'til you're darker than Wesley Snipes at night at a temperature to make you look like a shadow even in daylight. this Phoenix ressurected cuz there's a problem i left uncorrected. with my strength collected, i'm robbing your hope like the AIDs infected. so bring it Satan, so this Holy soldier can squash you like a bug, and humilate you by shoving your pitchfork up your a** like a butt-plug. Demonic and dominant ruling with an iron fist Spit fire hot enough to burn phoenix to a crispWho are you nelly futardo? This is downright absurd I'm tryna battle, this dude thinks he's a birdYou need to set your sights and rise up through the gears I'll bring you down to earth cos you've been winging it for years*
For a guy named phoenix fist, you really lack a punch
Sloppy with your hands I wonder, can you even pack your lunch?I've got a hunch, infact I have an idea Improve before you bring those shitty rhymes back here You lack fear to face me, an ignorant trait Pre judged you could take me but defeat was you fate. *He has wingin it trousers. I never ever remember seeing him with another pair. Both started strong in the first bars... but Phoenix fell off hella hard... case in point... why would fire make you search for a Slurpee? it's like... a slurpee is halfway melted... why would he search for something that's halfway melted... and the line before.... the herpes thing.. didn't make much sence either... it doesn't do a good job of showing someone why he would be figety With LL... The last two lines.. were some of the wackest lines I've seen in some time... cause they were barely even slaps... much less punches.. and a line like... thinking he's a bird... is something could have been worded and utilzed better... saying that he was "like a bird" like the song name... frees it up... like... Who are you nelly futardo? This is downright absurd We cut p***y 'round here you'll get chopped like a bird something like that... the bolded lines were the lines I thought were hot... and... with that... My Vote is going to Lucky Lucifer
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 10:28 pm
C Teezy case in point... why would fire make you search for a Slurpee? it's like... a slurpee is halfway melted... why would he search for something that's halfway melted... the heat from the flame has him sweating, which is why he's looking for a Slurpee.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:42 pm
Phoenix Fist C Teezy case in point... why would fire make you search for a Slurpee? it's like... a slurpee is halfway melted... why would he search for something that's halfway melted... the heat from the flame has him sweating, which is why he's looking for a Slurpee. IT'S A DAMN FIRE, PHOENIX! If a wildfire is coming towards you are you gonna be head for 7/11?
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:58 pm
C'mon now... We don't need TWO topics with this kind of bullshit in it. Especially when it's become personal. Time to grow up, folks.
Phoenix, I think your best line was better than anything LL said. But you declined while he remained consistant. Scare Phoenix/Square Enix = excellent. Not to mention the Final Fantasy reference in there. I also liked the visual quality you gave to add to your humor. We've heard Wesley Snipes jokes before, but the fact that you added "at night" made it hilarious. Shadow in the daylight? XD Also great. But I think you concentrated more on being funny than coming up with s**t that works great. You weren't very consistant. To be honest, I liked that Slurpee line. When something is making you sweat, you want something cold. Phoenix's are known for that whole fire element, and you played well on that. But that herpes part in front of it kinda... killed it.
LL, yours was nice. As I mentioned before, you were more consistant than PF. You got on him for those Wingin' it pants, and it was actually true. That's what makes a personal even better... truth. I've never seen him with any other pants. Your last line was a bit weak, but not bad. You used his sig against him. Wasn't bad.
I'm giving this to Lucky.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:34 am
aww! lol. alright. congrats lucky lucifer. i'll get ya next time. twisted
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:15 am
Glad you aren't giving up.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:34 am
of course not!
but i am going to sleep for the night though... lol. bye.
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