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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 5:15 pm
OK!So, I changed the topic and anyone can delete the old one. Oh and this is PG-13 for Cussing and um...other things I might throw in..x.x DISCLAIMER: This is a compleatly fictional story. I do NOT own MCR, nor anyone else I may portray in this fic. I have no clue if they would act this way in this situation or not, so it is NOT a reflection of their beliefes. Oh, and I do not promote America becoming a monarcy. ~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~> Prologe: I started at the river, skimming against my feet. I guessed I looked depressed, but I didn't care. I was sitting on the bank of a river, trying to re-think what was comming up later tonight. To hell with what anyone thought. I should probably introduce myself, even thought this is going on in my head and I know who I am. My name is Gwendalyn Peirce. Most people call me Gwen. Well, no, most people call me Princess Gwen, but Gwen nonetheless. I live in Newark, New Jersey, of America, town of lust and really annoying prepatory kids. You get used to it. Anyway, why do I look depressed? Because in public I have that little habbit of wearing black. Yeah, I like the color. So what? Does that suddenly make me suicidal? No. So there. I'm trying to think, and people usually leave me alone here. Think about what, you might ask. Well, about my life, and mostly, the ball I'm forced to go to with this sleezy guy I want nothing to do with. Yet, I have to, because since my step-father came around, I've had to do whatever he says. But, I guess thats ok as long as he doesn't ask me to kill anyone. I look at the ground. I figure I should get back to my house and attempt to avoid my mother. Chances are, my mom will make me wear pink tonight instead of the red dress I picked out. Yay me. I put on my shoes and try to take a few back ally ways back to my house. Ok..palace. Man, I wish I lived in a house. Unfortunatly, there is no allyway that leads to the "house" so, I have to get onto the main street. Que the preps that live here. "OMG!!!!1111oneone. It's P.G!! Lets all laugh at her!" Ohh, yay. The laughing preps! My favorite part of the walk. I flip up the hood of my hoodie and look at the ground. I silently approch the house and make a left, for the kitchen. Taking off my hood, I walked throught the kitchen door and to the dinning room. Now, my goal was to be silent, but I'm a klutz. So, in an attempt to get to my room, I slam into several doors and trip up the stairs. Oh...and into my mother. Oh joy. "OH! There you are, Gwenie!" She says. She apparently still thinks I'm five. "You need to get ready! And don't worry, you can still wear the red dress." SCORE! I still have to go to the ball, but atleast I don't have to wear pink.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> So, there's the prologue, which is the only thing I have time to type right now. ^^;;
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 5:16 pm
OK! Revamped Chapter One. Much more Info. You need to read it. >> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~?
Chapter One: I waited as my mother did my jet-black hair into a bun. Then she made me put on dark red lipstick, which only made my pale skin more obvious. She told me I looked "beautiful" even though I knew she was lieing. She never called me beautiful or pretty or cute since my real father passed away. Of couse, now it was important for me to look pretty, so my mom told me I was. I had to meet Kyle in the parlor before the ball. It was there I gave him, "the talk." "No talking to me," I stated, "No laughing at any joke I make , and most of all, Don't Touch Me." I tried to make it clear, but the boy just stared into my eyes and nodded. He disgusted me sometimes. After rehashing what I had said to him, we walked to the main staircase to the ball room. The huge, mostly red, ballroom. It was red mostly because of my step-father, Noland's, profession. He was a vampire hunter. I just realized I didn't mention that before. The America's are "infested," as Noland would say, with vampires. Thus, vampire hunters are needed. And their rich, cheap, bastards. Kyle is a hunter too, which is why he smells like garlic. He could have atleast put some sort of..somthing on. However, it was too late to ask him. We where at the top of the stair case now, having our names announced. As people cheered, or jeered I couldn't really tell, I walked down the staircase next to Kyle. Half way down, he grabbed my hand, I guess for his "image." I really don't give a damn about image, but I'll let it go anyway. Everything was fine until we got to the thrones. I knew Noland was going to make me dance with this hack, so i made my skillful escape. "Um, I'm going to use the bathroom." Ok, maybe that wasn't skillful, but it was ok for what I was doing. There was an exit and bathrooms under the grand staircase, so it would be easy to leave without anyone knowing. I made my way through the crowd, past the old women and rich 20-something husbands and was almost home free. Untill He caught my eye. He had balckish hair, like mine only lighter, and pale skin. I don't see many pale skined people around, so I followed him. He wandered all over the room, and seemed to be looking for someone. I didn't think it was anything important, but he suddenly dissapeared. "Damn," I muttered, "he might have actually been interesting." So, I made myself turn around, only to lock lips with the guy I was following. Ok, more like slammed faces with him, but he still kissed me. That b*****d. I glared at him and stormed off to the bathroom, since, if Noland or my mom saw me, I'd be dead. When I got to the bathroom, I sighed at the blank spot on my lips where lipstick had been. I didn't have any with me, so I just whiped the rest off. Not like it mattered. I was going to leave right now anyway. I turned out of the bathroom and snuck out the door. Pretty easy, considering how many people know me, and that would be everyone. I spaced out as a walked down the steps, remarking on just how bad the air seemed to be tonight. Then, I heard it. The loud niegh from a rouge horse and rider. and I happened to be inthe middle of the road. I screamed and closed my eyes, waiting for the imminate death that was to come. Fortuneatly, it never came. I took a blow to the side, possible from a rabid fanboy or someone who actually cared for my safty. But, no. It was lover boy from earlier, and he was glaring at me. He hit me softly on the head once I had fully opened my eyes. "Whats your problem?" he said. "Walking out into the middle of the street like you don't know where you are." I should have said, 'how dare you talk to your princess like that?!' but I didn't. I was staring at his mouth. Kind of rude, I know, but he had large K-9s. Deffinatly a vampire. He didn't really realize that I was staring at him untill his rude comment went unnoticed. He quickly shut his mouth. "Well?" he said, as if expecting something. I looked him straight in the eye. "Well, what? Do you expect me to let you suck my blood or ask your name? Cause let me tell you, the first isn't going to happen." I almost glared at him, but I didn't have the heart. He did save me, after all. Then, he did the unthinkable. He laughed. "Your weird." He managed to get out. "If you want my name, It happens to be Gerard." I looked at him again and stood up, offering him my hand. "Well, my names Gwen. No lets get out of the sidewalk."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> There! done! Yay! I should post the second chapter tomorrow.
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 5:25 pm
Much Better! I still think that he should be her knight in rock star clothing....
... then again he could be her vampire knight (in rockstar clothing cool )
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 5:27 pm
I'll be sure to include the rockstar clothing.. whee
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 6:33 pm
YAY! 4laugh *Happy Dance*
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:52 pm
OH HEY LOOK!! Demon is updating!!! YAY!
Ok, Chapters from now on Will have PARTS. Like.... now. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> Chapter Two: Part 1
Gerard and I walked down the street, mainly staying in allyways. Anyone seen with a vampire gets a fine. The vampire gets killed. Not exactly a fair deal, but all my attempts to get it reformed failed misserably. Politics suck in my opinion anyway. So, back to walking. Gerard was leading, which was odd, but I really didn't care. Anything was better than the ball. So, we walked till we reached a bridge over the river.I had been remarkably quiet, and non-clumsy the entire trip. So it was time for me to do something stupid! Yay me! I walked up to the edge of the bridge, while Gerard lit a ciggarett.((Authors note: Ewwies. Cancer stick!!))I leaned over the edge slightly, triing to judge distance from here to the bottom. Of couse, I failed to pay attention to me. I leanded just alittle to far. I let out a small yelp, but felt two arms wrap around my waist and keep me from falling. "You really are absent minded, aren't you?" He said, clenching his ciggarett in his teeth. I stood up and smiled stupidly as he put it out. "Heh, well, I don't pay attention to everything all the time." I said in a half muttered tone. Gerard smiled. Geeze, he had a great smile. Good eyes too. But, that was beside the point. "I'm glad I didn't bite you." He said, still smiling, "You're too interesting the way you are." The way I was. Someone liked me for who I was, not just for being "princess". I couldn't belive it. "Well, I'm glad too. I value my blood thank you very much." Gerard laughed. Unfortunetly, it was rather loud. "I HEARD SOMETHING!" Someone yelled. s**t. I had lost track of time, and now people were looking for me. Gerard and I turned around and we saw torches and people getting closer. I paniced and went to tell Gerard something, but he wasn't there. Now I was alone, so I turned and made it look like I was looking at the horizon. "GWEN!" I heard my mother yell, so I turned to face her. She hugged me really tight. "I thought you'd gotten kidnapped!" She said, slight hint of tears in her voice. But I took it differently. "What? So suddenly I can't take care of myself?!" I was pissed now. And that wasn't a good thing. My mom stared at me. "What do you---" "JUST SHUT UP!!" I screamed. "LEAVE ME THE F.UCK ALONE." I stormed off through the crowd, feeling myself lose control. I needed to get to my room fast, or I'd endup killing someone. Why? Because I am A witch. And when I get pissed off, I lose compleat control and end up doing really horrible things. I was barly holding onto myself and felt my mind let my Anger and Hatred takeover as I entered my house. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> YAY! Ok. So...Comment. Pwease?
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:56 pm
MORE! NOW! RIGHT NOW! HURRY UP AND UPDATE! WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU?! I SAID UPDATE!...... ^^
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 5:51 pm
o.o Ok ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>Chapter Two: Part 2: Gerard's Point of View I'd seen the entire thing from the tree I was now hanging upside down from. That girl had blown upo in somepersons face, and was now storming off to the palace where the ball was held. Hehe. The great thing about being a a bet is following those who don't know your there. Anyway, I had to find out her name. She never gave it to me...No wait..It was Gwen. I remember now. I flew off in the direction Gwenhad gone, staying almost directly above her once I caught up. She seemed glaringly mad, but even more than that, I could smell blood. Alot of it. And it definatly wasn't coming from that mob either. I managed to fly into the house before Gwen slammed the door. I hung onto a pole out of sight and managed to get a look at her eyes. They where glazed over and compleatly black. Now that scared the s.hit out of me. Not only that, but there was a large pool of blood around her ankles, which moved with her as she walked upstairs. "This could be bad" I thought. I changed back into human from and followed her upstairs. This was easy, since the stench of blood was now stronger than it was outside. On the top floor is when it happend. Gwen turned around. I stopped cold as she stared at me with her now black eyes. I inched forward slowly, makeing sure not to startle her. Untill she nearly killed me with a whip of blood with a stake in it! I found that to be the first and last straw. I needed to calm her down, and quick. I got as close as I could to her, and tackled her into a hug. Gwen's eyes started to slowly unglaze and she closed them half way. I moved her quickly to what I assumed was her room and hid out in the wardrobe. I hoped no one was coming anyway, but better safe than sorry. What a story I had to tell the guys. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> HA! I went all PoV change on y'all! ^^
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 7:00 pm
Haha, Gee is sort of a dumby there seeing as she told him her name! Just thought you should know.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 5:09 am
Alex The Homicidal Maniac Haha, Gee is sort of a dumby there seeing as she told him her name! Just thought you should know. Ahhh shiz...x.x I forgot to re-read ch. 1 and screwed up..x.x*goes to fix* *note! I wrote this at like...10 pm...and I was tired..x.x
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 6:35 am
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:41 pm
OH KAY! Updation! wOOt. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> Chapter Three: Part 1: Gerard's PoV
There was a slam and I heard two sets of footsteps enter the room. I had been sitting, staring at the wardrobe door for what seemed like hours. Now, there was finnaly something to eavesdo---I mean do. I poked the wardrobe door open to the point were I could make out two people, standing near Gwen's bed. "I'm telling you, she was just a little mad." I heard one figure say softly, trying not to wake up Gwen. The other voice wasn't so concered with the sleeping girl. "Well, I'm telling YOU that your daughter is going to start attracting Vampires, and that's when everything I've done will go down the drain." Woah, egocentric man. "So, Gen, what are YOU going to do about miss, 'I'm going to ditch the important Ball I have to be at and then blow upo at my mother in front of all Jersey' ?!" The other figure, who I assume is a male, nearly screamed at the other. The other figure went defensive. "but..b-but Noland...She was just..." The other figure, who I assumed was Gwen's mother, didn't seem to know how to stand up to her husband. "S-she was just a little mad, that's all! She didn't plan this out to ruin you. Gwen may be Princess, but that doesn't make her perfect." That sounded better. 'So, the other person was Noland, huh? And wait...Gwen is PrincessGwendalyn?! Holy shizz what did I get myself into' I thought to myself. "I don't care if she was being an emo little b***h. Do something about her, or I WILL!" There was a slam again. Hopfully, that Noland person left. I poked the wardrobe open alittle more, so I could make out Gen, Gwen's mother, sitting on the bed. She had Gwen's hand in hers, and seemed to be crying. "Please control your anger Gweniee. If you don't...you're ..well..you could be..." I heard crying, meaning that Mrs. Gen had started to sob. She quickly stopped, however, and got up. She planted a kiss on Gwen's forhead and left, still a tad teary-eyed. I stepped out of the wardrobe quietly after Gwen's mother had left. I walked over to the bed. "Leave out some details about yourself, eh, Gwen?" I muttered, poking her in the side. She yelped softly and turned to face the wall. It was hard to belive she'd tried to kill me. I smiled and looked over at the window. The sun was starting to peek up over the city. My que for panic. So I took my que. There was no way I could get out of the house without someone seeing me. I paced the room for a second. Then I remembered the wardrobe. I ran over to it and jumped in. Closing the door quiuetly, I turned into a bat. Hopfully, the maids would avoid Gwen's room. I really didn't feel like dying today. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> OK! Coment chalange time! 3 comments will win you... The next part of the chapter. 10 and I'll write the entire Chapter! ^^
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:46 pm
Dude, entire chapter or the cupcake gets it *holds a gun to the cupcake*
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:55 pm
NOO! Not the cupcake!! cry
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 3:13 pm
Oh yeah..I still need 2 more DIFFERENT peoples's comments..x.x Oh and the offical song for this Fan Fic is Bleed It Out by Linkin Park. Why? Because it's kick a**.
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