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 Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:36 am
 [ RULES arrow 3-0 KO VOTES UP TO 4 arrow 10 (2 line) bar battles arrow NO feeding arrow NO recycleing arrow NO DICKRIDING arrow 48-hours to drop I fliped a quarter, Ct goes first Copyright 2007 H.O.B/LOC All rights reserved.No portion of H.O.B may be duplicated redistributed or manipulated in any form. By accessing any information beyond this page, you agree to abide by the H.O.B Privacy/
Your California Privacy Rights and Terms of UseC Teezy You can find most of my lyrics under PsalmsBlack but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle TomFirst line means I'm a guy in a high placeSo if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son) When it comes to this competition man something's missin Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God) Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master pieceI got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos) My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ* Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious Jaiden Stryker Ay yo, Teezy’s rhymes are so plain and overlookable, he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. On top of that, your bad luck got your a**s pierced by Cupid’s arrow, so now you use that excuse to explain why your booty got taken by Jack Sparrow. Screw the theatrics and the-wack-tricks of your wordplay. Cuz I’ve seen better s**t shitted after a Tacobell turd-spray. Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual? I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. You need to recollect and check your introspect, and dissect the inner-Teez to find some self- respect. Cuz if you had it, you wouldn’t find it so delectableto have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable. You were wack, so claimed to retire to make an escape, cuz your s**t is more pathetic than a Screech <******** with Stryke? I’ll cause you strife that’ll burden your life, by robbing you of your manhood like having Lorena Bobbit for a wife. Teezy spits a lot, but his s**t makes you cringe like eatin’ a lemon, with a flow less in demand than a razor to French women. I spit sick with easily felt rhymes without fail, even when the path is tedious. But even if Ray Charles tried feeling Teezy’s, he’d go, “Good Georgia, that’s hideous!”
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 12:52 pm
You can find most of my lyrics under Psalms
Black but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle Tom
First line means I'm a guy in a high place
So if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!
My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff
So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship
Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine
I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time
Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC
Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son)
When it comes to this competition man something's missin
Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious
Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God)
Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master piece
I got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos)
My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees
I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ*
Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches
Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:51 pm
C Teezy You can find most of my lyrics under PsalmsBlack but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle TomFirst line means I'm a guy in a high placeSo if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son) When it comes to this competition man something's missin Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God) Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master pieceI got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos) My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ* Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious lucky mutha ********
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 10:11 pm
I'll write mine up tomorrow. I've been feeling sick all day. Came on to check messages.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:03 pm
C Teezy You can find most of my lyrics under PsalmsBlack but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle TomFirst line means I'm a guy in a high placeSo if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son) When it comes to this competition man something's missin Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God) Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master pieceI got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos) My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ* Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious Sorry about that. Work has been pure bullshit, and not helping me get better at all. u_u Ay yo, Teezy’s rhymes are so plain and overlookable, he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. On top of that, your bad luck got your a**s pierced by Cupid’s arrow, so now you use that excuse to explain why your booty got taken by Jack Sparrow. Screw the theatrics and the-wack-tricks of your wordplay. Cuz I’ve seen better s**t shitted after a Tacobell turd-spray. Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual? I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. You need to recollect and check your introspect, and dissect the inner-Teez to find some self- respect. Cuz if you had it, you wouldn’t find it so delectableto have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable. You were wack, so claimed to retire to make an escape, cuz your s**t is more pathetic than a Screech <******** with Stryke? I’ll cause you strife that’ll burden your life, by robbing you of your manhood like having Lorena Bobbit for a wife. Teezy spits a lot, but his s**t makes you cringe like eatin’ a lemon, with a flow less in demand than a razor to French women. I spit sick with easily felt rhymes without fail, even when the path is tedious. But even if Ray Charles tried feeling Teezy’s, he’d go, “Good Georgia, that’s hideous!”
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:06 pm
Jaiden Stryker C Teezy You can find most of my lyrics under PsalmsBlack but spittin dope lines they call me Uncle TomFirst line means I'm a guy in a high placeSo if you step up on my level I'll kick you off my space!My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Opponents selected you were so anxious when you heard mine I guess you ain't had d**k this good in a long time Spyder's right you are the new Lil MC Judging by the fact that your win column's damn near empty (agaisnt me son) When it comes to this competition man something's missin Your dissin... I might as start hitting Mak and Yung Vicious Mak is so wack that he named himself after me (The God) Vicious can't ******** with Capricious, this a master pieceI got this game on lock and and I'm holding all the keys (dope kilos) My punchlines hit way harder than falling trees I'm talking about me cause describing you is boring as ******** fallen asleep and can't get up I'm snoring and stuck! *ZZZZZ* Multi-faceted doesn't matter which hand I use for punches Cause either way I can still beat you unconscious Sorry about that. Work has been pure bullshit, and not helping me get better at all. u_u Ay yo, Teezy’s rhymes are so plain and overlookable, he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. On top of that, your bad luck got your a**s pierced by Cupid’s arrow, so now you use that excuse to explain why your booty got taken by Jack Sparrow. Screw the theatrics and the-wack-tricks of your wordplay. Cuz I’ve seen better s**t shitted after a Tacobell turd-spray. Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual? I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. You need to recollect and check your introspect, and dissect the inner-Teez to find some self- respect. Cuz if you had it, you wouldn’t find it so delectableto have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable. You were wack, so claimed to retire to make an escape, cuz your s**t is more pathetic than a Screech <******** with Stryke? I’ll cause you strife that’ll burden your life, by robbing you of your manhood like having Lorena Bobbit for a wife. Teezy spits a lot, but his s**t makes you cringe like eatin’ a lemon, with a flow less in demand than a razor to French women. I spit sick with easily felt rhymes without fail, even when the path is tedious. But even if Ray Charles tried feeling Teezy’s, he’d go, “Good Georgia, that’s hideous!” I have to go with teezy on this one hands down. Stryker killed himself in like fourth line when he talked about teezy's BOLDING something that Jaiden does all the time even when his words have no meaning, Jaiden is still just rhyming words at some points. What makes Teezy such a hard opponent is the fact that every line has a reference and means something. That's one quality that would make him the best rapper in the haven. Like Mak's ability to find truth in all of his verses which would be a quality that would make him the best rapper in the haven. The only thing that stands out about Jaiden is his bolded lines, which serve no purpose but show that he rhymed which he failed to do a couple of times Quote: Ay yo, Teezy’s rhymes are so plain and overlookable, he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. Quote: Cuz if you had it, you wouldn’t find it so delectableto have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable. Teezy is just overall better all in all, and I suggest that Jaiden watch his choice of words so that his verse will make more sense and actually be feasible but then again he is alot better than that shenco guy, who calls me gay but revels in talking about d**k all the time but thats another story someone who will probably never improve because he cant get over himself and d**k. But anyway VOTE: Teezy
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:13 pm
I bold my rhyming words. Whether it's bolded or not, you can see that it rhymes. But I bold them anyway because they rhyme. I pointed out that he bolds his punches. We bold two different things for two different reasons. Both examples you chose rhymes with "able."
Anything better to use against me?
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:19 pm
i'll vote later. i liked both.
edit: i'm inclined to agree that that last post... that reasoning kinda sounds like BS. no offense, Vicious.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:39 pm
I'm used to it. XD I'm not trippin off of votes for other people or anything. I just hate bad reasoning, you know? For an example, here's one of my lines from another battle, and a voter's critique to it:
My line-
"You made me think you'd come strong, but I'm feeling more disappointment
than Magic when he was told of his AIDs in a doctor's appointment."
Voter reason for voting against it-
"Than magic when he was told of his aids?"? Kinda made you sound like some kinda immigrant from Afghanistan, you know? "Yesterday I was told of my Greencard! Hurrah!"
WTF kind of excuse/reason/explanation is that? rofl
Not winning is fine. It just means I'll come stronger the next time around. But some of the "reasons" I've seen to vote for someone else in my battles as well as other people's battles(usually other people's) are downright hilarious. Sad, but hilarious.
But that's just how it is sometimes. Just gotta roll with the punches. It's all good. cool
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 10:45 pm
i believe that's call dickriding.
also, the topic title said "2 round." is that supposed to mean that there's two rounds, or that this is just the 2nd round of the tournament?
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:56 am
Phoenix Fist i believe that's call dickriding. also, the topic title said "2 round." is that supposed to mean that there's two rounds, or that this is just the 2nd round of the tournament? ummm... if he gave that much of a reason... it's clearly not... 2 round.. meant round 2 the line that Vicious pointed out... DIDNT RHYME so that's what I got for it... and the link thing... I was the only one doing that... then all of the sudden lol... delectable and Huxtable don't rhyme... just cause it has an -able suffix doesn't make it rhyme... and even if it did, that's just weak and ******** lazy neutral and unless Ray Charles sounds like Triumph the Comic Dog... Tedious, which possesses a hard E sound in the first syllable and Hideous, which does not possess a hard E sound in the first syllable DON'T RHYME... Now When Raskit was talking about that line that made you sound foreign.. .it makes sense... all he or anyone else has to go by is words and IMAGINATION... if your words make someone think of that.. it's partly your fault.. but the thing is.. that in the same explaination, he gave plenty of other reasons for his vote... In my honest opinion, Stryker, your verse, for a "21 year old" wasn't hot.. like at all it wasn't weak as ********... but it wasn't average at all mayne... for example... if you gonna take a line to just rhyme to be rhyming.. make it a chance to show a bit of skill rather than just waste the line (and my time) ex. ******** with Stryke? I'll cause you strife that'll burden your life... Oooo... wow... you know? And don't say something about the Lorena Bobbit thing being tight... many people have come up with that punchline before... it wasn't special... With what Raskit was talking about, and I think Spyda would agree, there were a couple of punches that lost the effect because of some very obvious wording conflicts... ex. to have tasted more “pudding pops” than Dr Huxtable with a flow less in demand than a razor to French women. 1st one... reword it... 2nd one simplify... This punch... Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual? I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. Was redundant... but also a conflict of interests... The metrosexual thing was poorly linked to the Queer Eye thing... if you didn't say anything about a "cast" you could have made ME MYSELF look gay... rather than.. metrosexual... and that (being metrosexual) is not an detriment to intellegence neutral Your second line he gotta bold his PUNCHES for his “wit” to be detectable. is a testament to my ability.... like I've said and proved many times before... if I don't bold... my s**t goes over heads with the amount of wordplay I'm able to fit... I was talkin to Vicious after I threw that JAPAN line... He didn't know what I was talking about... until AFTER I bolded the J-A-P-A-N and the Tokyo Tech... And..Now..for..the..final..reason..why..you..lost C Teezy My punches hard and smart, sir, you can't face this piff So judging by your sig we got a love/hate relationship Jaiden Stryker Your avi was dressed by the Queer Eye cast, but you’re an intellectual?I guess that goes to show us the mentality of a metrosexual. Basically.. the only reason you questioned my intellegence... is cause I said the line about me being intellegent... this also proven by the fact that i don't overtly put out the fact that I'm intellegent... so umm feeding GAME!
P.S. Phoenix Fist... you is being a big b***h right now dude... You obviously didn't read Vicious's reasoning as evidence by the fact that Vicious only said the bolding the thing for the 20% of the explaination... because the main point was that he sucks at rhyming (basic s**t) You were influenced by the fact that Jaiden only defended the bolding... meaning...
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 9:19 am
Phoenix Fist i'll vote later. i liked both. edit: i'm inclined to agree that that last post... that reasoning kinda sounds like BS. no offense, Vicious. B.S.? b***h i wrote a damn essay up there, explaining why Teezy won. It's a ******** no-brainer, exactly yo a** has no brain if you cant clearly see that Teezy won this battle, read the ******** quotes that s**t didnt rhyme and if you think it did, take that a** back to damn second grade and learn some damn syllables. You can say that dickriding jazz all you want, this battle shouldnt even have a second round, i just read the title and i am a bit upset that i have to pull something else out of my a** to battle the mighty mos. so ******** you man, I couldve simply said Teezy was better which it is damn clear to see. But nooooooo I give a damn legitamite reason to why he beat him and YOU say it's B.S. if anybody is riding d**k you are, so get the ******** off my nuts and make up some flimsy a** reason why jaiden won
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 12:26 pm
bu Quote: t then again he is alot better than that shenco guy, who calls me gay but revels in talking about d**k all the time but thats another story someone who will probably never improve because he cant get over himself and d**k. But anyway why do you keep metioning Shenco in non-Shenco related stuff?Are you that obsessed with Me?Hey my #1 fan Yung_Vicious.Don't worry kid I'll get around to giving you that autograph one day
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 12:48 pm
teezy, even for the things that you feel didn't rhyme on his part, you can't overlook the fact that the majority of yours didn't rhyme neither. with his, you can at least slur it. i'm not trying to take anything from you, because i acknowledge you as a decent lyricist. but i'm saying that it's not fair trying to dock points from one person for doing one thing, when the other person did the exact same thing. dickriding is dickriding.
@vicious.
WTF is your problem? i never came out to disrespect you. i even said "no offense" to let you know that i wasn't trying to attack you. despite that, you have a b***h fit. and I'M dickriding? what a dumb a** b***h. look at the last battle between you and stryker. i voted for YOUR retarded a**. but i'm dickriding? i didn't want to believe it since i don't like jumping on bandwagons, but the board IS right about you- you're a p***y. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 1:20 pm
Phoenix Fist teezy, even for the things that you feel didn't rhyme on his part, you can't overlook the fact that the majority of yours didn't rhyme neither. with his, you can at least slur it. i'm not trying to take anything from you, because i acknowledge you as a decent lyricist. but i'm saying that it's not fair trying to dock points from one person for doing one thing, when the other person did the exact same thing. dickriding is dickriding. @vicious. WTF is your problem? i never came out to disrespect you. i even said "no offense" to let you know that i wasn't trying to attack you. despite that, you have a b***h fit. and I'M dickriding? what a dumb a** b***h. look at the last battle between you and stryker. i voted for YOUR retarded a**. but i'm dickriding? i didn't want to believe it since i don't like jumping on bandwagons, but the board IS right about you- you're a p***y. 3nodding ugh... majority (if you go to school here in America) means 51% that means... at least 5-6 of mine doesn't rhyme... the only thing that I can see.. that possibly didn't rhyme in mine was... Vicious-missin... I made up for that... with all the other internal rhymes... and by NOT bolding what I think are rhymes... that is unecessary... we know what a rhyme looks/sounds like... I didn't do what stryker did at all... it's OBVIOUS... I had better flow/rhymes in the verse.. not thinking that emphazises the bias that only a true dickrider can posses... Right now.. that's what you are making yourself out to be.. by trying to politic and fence ride the issue instead of being straight up... and you are making yourself out to be a dickrider by paying attention to what the BOARD is thinking to the point that you would referece that source as a means of relation... in other words... VOTE OR DIE!!!! (you haven't voted yet)
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