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 Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 12:23 pm
i dotn fancy myslef a writer to muhc but heres an example o a rough cut of sometihng a wrote at 12 in the morning one day...
[charecter walks into local mall..scopes out a couple of places and finds a seat directly placed in the middle of the mall and all its cutsomers.]
i come here to be alone....
-chuckles-
a bit ironic....of all of the places to be alone in. the mall is not a good one to choose.
but then i guess it is and it isnt in a way. sicne everyone has there own hidden agenda and reason boe being...just oblivious of the crowds that suround them. everyone is just in there own state of eternal world of amusment and joy.
most of the peopel who come to the mall really only coem to the mall to be fake. they come to buy a personia..to buy a personality so they can venture in the world like everyone else. i on the other hand am part of the un herd of group of peopel who just coem to the mall to be alone. a peopel who just sit and soak in the dispare of all the commerce amongst us.
now i dotn knwo if my small rant has left you confused at all. and if it has your probably still thinking well why are you in a mall to be alone..thats kind of contradictory of what your point is.but as ive already explained, i am alone in the mall. theres nothing more than the mindless dribblings of the mundane every day. nothing more than the neanderings of zombies all abotu me. but im the one who dines on flesh not them............
.to be continued.
well trulyl it isnt thats all i wrote andi may come back and change some stuff and add some stuff later in the future.....
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 9:04 pm
I suggest that you use spell check or something before you post things up. It makes your writing a lot easier to read and understand. Otherwise, people often lose the meaning. 3nodding
I like the idea you've put forward of being alone in a crowd. It's a very perceptive way of thinking.
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