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Sanity Stops Here

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:47 pm


mk here are my top 3 songs(yes i wrote them all!) tell me what you think and if you see something that can help wiht the words or whatever to make it sound better


Untitled(yes that is really the title)

Could this be the truth that you seek?
Do you want me to say that I'm weak?
I can't carry on this way
So carry me away
(Please stay..)

You look at me and laugh
And my heart still feels your rath
Can't you see
you're killing me
(Today)

Why stay here with me
When you could be With the man you love
Why be with me
Just to tease me
Can't you see I'm in pain
And my life fades away in vain

Can't you see
You like to be with me
Although your mind says no
Your heart says so
(Don't go) (Don't go) (Let's go)




The Judge

You give everyone those evil eyes
Just to let them know they're dipised
But there's one thing you must know
And that is your judging shows

(Chorus smile
Who are you to judge me?
Who are you to judge--
Who are you to judge me?
Who are you to judge... anyone?

(Who are you to judge me?) Why do you bother?
(Who are you to judge me?) You killed your own father!
(Who are you to judge me?) You can't trust yourself,
(Who are you to judge me?) With the razor on your shelf!

You arn't the judge of me!
Yet your eyes see
All that I do
Is for you!


(Chorus)

(Chorus)

(Who are you to judge me?) Who are you to judge me?
(Who are you to judge me?) Who are you to judge me?
(Who are you to judge me?) Who are you to judge me?
Cause I'll judge back!




Yes, I promise

I promise to leave,
Yes, I promise to leave
I promise to leave if you go away! (just go!)

(Chorus smile
Just leave me alone!
I am grown, so go!
Leave and never return again
Because this is the end.
My friend

I turn my back on you
I forever forget you
And yes, this is true
That I never what to see you again.

(Chorus)
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:10 pm


please?

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