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Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 12:55 pm


C Teezy
Shenco
Man I hate goin first,but i don't want to waste anytime
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Heard this guy retirin gave him time to get his rhymes betta
had to be a trendsetta whip a** like def jam vendetta

Last time we met you was blastin tokyo teks
gotta spit perplex and complex rhymes that'll leave ya a** vexed

Ya see i'm Puttin Hits In Like A-rod Dodgin Emmigration,Losin Population Headed In Awkward relations of intimidation

Have ya girl and ya mom in the house rubbin my hot bod
I hope ta god they raise excitement level like the hot coffee mod

And speakin of ya mom tell her to shave her tits,they hairy,
It's scary wouldn't ******** those even if i was Leisure Suit Larry

Eat up all my rhymes i hear that they're very nutritous
this is ridiculous he's not a thug jus a real life Gangstalicious

Let's define Capricious-bum,wack,trash,and sleazy
Don't teez me I'm just as good as teezy's mother is easy

when i'm done shockin his heart he gon need a defibrillator
Infectin ya rhyme style wit a Vyrus like 28 Days Later

Or maybe one from silent hill,see this is another kill
you took a spill now ya career is going lyrically down-hill

You think that ya HHH,well I think that's a bummer
Betta be a fast runna or get hit wit a stone cold stunna

hahahahahhaha,gotta go weak on ya lost interest quick.And seeing as though I knew you were going to try something like that japan thing i decided to beat ya to it,but now you're probably going to use some color thing or whatever,and everyone will be amazed by the pretty colors


You're style is like Puddle of Mudd your yay deep (not deep man)
You're like a prostitute, you suck when you face me (heads up)

You're strategy is self-battery add a D (my d**k)
Take away your "Thunder Storm" and now that's a tragedy (it's a riddle)

I'm the one that's making it rain so hazardous (brainstormin)
I bring the flow down in torrents ***** I'm Azureus

This ***** taking steriods and tryna bite ya man (check his verse)
But like Floyd Landis I ain't worried bout re-cycling (Tour de France)

Man I take on all comers send ya best three (check his sig)
I'll ******** 'em up like the last episode of SC (Champloo)

The Yaoi Guild? What the ********? Man how dare he push me? (f**)
Unlike you, C-Teezy ain't scared of p***y (Fujin)

This a*****e is too tight for you to bone or probe (dame)
I beat this dude everyday man I'm a homophobe (True story)

You is trash so much so I'ma stop battling (Sanitation)
These bastards know that I can beat you in 2 bars babbling (2=bi)

Figgity midget... ribbet we give it a smidget (wtf?)
Of blid-dips fli-dips spitzits ta miserable pigeons...(aljaslkdhfakj wink Next time you see me be like Alzheimer's and just forget it (game over)


This was a PSA to all you rookies man...
I checked that wack a** battle between Jaiden Stryker and Shenco dog... That s**t was not hot...
I ain't a damn mod anymore so I'ma tell ya the biz from now on..
How the hell you gonna be scared of someone that ain't been here... and yet your hottest battler got destroyed by me... in the first round... ya'll niggas is ******** up round here...
Gotta be kiddin me... how ya'll scared of Fujin and I just came thru whoopin everybody a** man... for real...
lol
Shenco gonna come at me weak... ***** do ya homework... don't come in my classroom unless you've done ya homework first
xp

It's Teezy ********... takin this place back over... ******** what ya heard man...

EASY!


Explain confused

I just love constructive criticism
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:00 pm


I posted it in that tournament thread

Shenco


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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:33 pm


I'll underline what the rhyme scheme was... since you started the explaination by missing anything that rhymed dude...

Shenco
not trynna diss or anything you got full respect for beating me twice,but we just have to look at ya verse,okay let's examine it up.I'll bold all the rhymes to make it easier

Quote:
You're style is like Puddle of Mudd your yay deep (not deep man)
You're like a prostitute, you suck when you face me (heads up)

You're strategy is self-battery add a D (my d**k)
Take away your "Thunder Storm" and now that's a tragedy (it's a riddle)

I'm the one that's making it rain so hazardous (brainstormin)
I bring the flow down in torrents n***a I'm Azureus

This n***a taking steriods and tryna bite ya man (check his verse)
But like Floyd Landis I ain't worried bout re-cycling (Tour de France)

Man I take on all comers send ya best three (check his sig)
I'll f**k 'em up like the last episode of SC (Champloo)

The Yaoi Guild? What the f**k? Man how dare he push me? (f**)
Unlike you, C-Teezy ain't scared of p***y (Fujin)

This a*****e is too tight for you to bone or probe (dame)
I beat this dude everyday man I'm a homophobe (True story)

You is trash so much so I'ma stop battling (Sanitation)
These bastards know that I can beat you in 2 bars [b]babbling (2=bi)

Figgity midget... ribbet we give it a smidget (wtf?)
Of blid-dips fli-dips spitzits ta miserable pigeons...(aljaslkdhfakj wink

f**k that s**t, one more punch for extra credit (overkill)
Next time you see me be like Alzheimer's and just forget it (game over)
basically all that stuff was simple and were like 1-2 syllable rhymes and consisted of rhymes like "me and deep" or "D and Tragedy" and "Man re-cyclin" it was hot,but like all ya stuff was simple,like you really didn't take the time to find rhyming words and just used some generic and basic rhymes


anyways... dude... that wasn't basic... not the least... and that's just rhymes... anything else "simple"?
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:41 pm


C Teezy
I'll underline what the rhyme scheme was... since you started the explaination by missing anything that rhymed dude...

Shenco
not trynna diss or anything you got full respect for beating me twice,but we just have to look at ya verse,okay let's examine it up.I'll bold all the rhymes to make it easier

Quote:
You're style is like Puddle of Mudd your yay deep (not deep man)
You're like a prostitute, you suck when you face me (heads up)

You're strategy is self-battery add a D (my d**k)
Take away your "Thunder Storm" and now that's a tragedy (it's a riddle)

I'm the one that's making it rain so hazardous (brainstormin)
I bring the flow down in torrents n***a I'm Azureus

This n***a taking steriods and tryna bite ya man (check his verse)
But like Floyd Landis I ain't worried bout re-cycling (Tour de France)

Man I take on all comers send ya best three (check his sig)
I'll f**k 'em up like the last episode of SC (Champloo)

The Yaoi Guild? What the f**k? Man how dare he push me? (f**)
Unlike you, C-Teezy ain't scared of p***y (Fujin)

This a*****e is too tight for you to bone or probe (dame)
I beat this dude everyday man I'm a homophobe (True story)

You is trash so much so I'ma stop battling (Sanitation)
These bastards know that I can beat you in 2 bars [b]babbling (2=bi)

Figgity midget... ribbet we give it a smidget (wtf?)
Of blid-dips fli-dips spitzits ta miserable pigeons...(aljaslkdhfakj wink

f**k that s**t, one more punch for extra credit (overkill)
Next time you see me be like Alzheimer's and just forget it (game over)
basically all that stuff was simple and were like 1-2 syllable rhymes and consisted of rhymes like "me and deep" or "D and Tragedy" and "Man re-cyclin" it was hot,but like all ya stuff was simple,like you really didn't take the time to find rhyming words and just used some generic and basic rhymes


anyways... dude... that wasn't basic... not the least... and that's just rhymes... anything else "simple"?
well first off yay deep and face me still don't rhyme it comes close,but doesn't,but I have some of that in my stuff so I'll let it go.Bite ya man and re-cycling definitely don't rhyme at all.Yea' for the most part it rhymed,but like i said it seemed like the words were just too easy to come up with like anybody could have done that I just expected more coming from teezy

Shenco


Shenco

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:46 pm


You got it though I'm just trynna figure out why Im so unlucky to kep getting placed in battles with nothing,but heavy-hitters,I' mean i had to batle Raskit and you in the first rounds of the two tournaments,it's like I'm set-up for elimination from the start
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:52 pm


Shenco
C Teezy
I'll underline what the rhyme scheme was... since you started the explaination by missing anything that rhymed dude...

Shenco
not trynna diss or anything you got full respect for beating me twice,but we just have to look at ya verse,okay let's examine it up.I'll bold all the rhymes to make it easier

Quote:
You're style is like Puddle of Mudd your yay deep (not deep man)
You're like a prostitute, you suck when you face me (heads up)

You're strategy is self-battery add a D (my d**k)
Take away your "Thunder Storm" and now that's a tragedy (it's a riddle)

I'm the one that's making it rain so hazardous (brainstormin)
I bring the flow down in torrents n***a I'm Azureus

This n***a taking steriods and tryna bite ya man (check his verse)
But like Floyd Landis I ain't worried bout re-cycling (Tour de France)

Man I take on all comers send ya best three (check his sig)
I'll f**k 'em up like the last episode of SC (Champloo)

The Yaoi Guild? What the f**k? Man how dare he push me? (f**)
Unlike you, C-Teezy ain't scared of p***y (Fujin)

This a*****e is too tight for you to bone or probe (dame)
I beat this dude everyday man I'm a homophobe (True story)

You is trash so much so I'ma stop battling (Sanitation)
These bastards know that I can beat you in 2 bars [b]babbling (2=bi)

Figgity midget... ribbet we give it a smidget (wtf?)
Of blid-dips fli-dips spitzits ta miserable pigeons...(aljaslkdhfakj wink

f**k that s**t, one more punch for extra credit (overkill)
Next time you see me be like Alzheimer's and just forget it (game over)
basically all that stuff was simple and were like 1-2 syllable rhymes and consisted of rhymes like "me and deep" or "D and Tragedy" and "Man re-cyclin" it was hot,but like all ya stuff was simple,like you really didn't take the time to find rhyming words and just used some generic and basic rhymes


anyways... dude... that wasn't basic... not the least... and that's just rhymes... anything else "simple"?
well first off yay deep and face me still don't rhyme it comes close,but doesn't,but I have some of that in my stuff so I'll let it go.Bite ya man and re-cycling definitely don't rhyme at all.Yea' for the most part it rhymed,but like i said it seemed like the words were just too easy to come p with like anybody could have done that I just expected more coming from teezy
bout the unlucky thing... iono.. that is pretty funny xd

but... about my verse... you are concentrating on the wrong thing if that's why you think it was simple dude...

like... first... the whole verse complements itself... the rhymes work in sync with the wordplay and the flow... that's the point...

and also...

cy cle in
bite ya man

I could do tha audio... and it would rhyme dude...

but anyways... that point is... if you just look at rhymes... you have yet to have a hot verse... a lot cats would have had a long between hot verses...

but complexity is not just limited to rhyme scheme.. it's what was actually said... like the punchlines... and how everything builds up to the bars...

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Shenco

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:59 pm


Well you still need one vote and I have sen greater upsets,never know what can happen
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:13 pm


Yer, shen, his words rhyme if you imagine a southern a** accent on em xd

Like...Over here in NY, we would rhyme shenco with pencil...

Syllvurr


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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:23 pm


SilverSpyder
Yer, shen, his words rhyme if you imagine a southern a** accent on em xd

Like...Over here in NY, we would rhyme shenco with pencil...
pretty much xp

I really can't see that... like the accent is on the first syllable so it's like.. huh?

Shen

Pen... I can

cil

and

co?

cil.. sounds like sill

co.. sounds like well.. co

I can see how it works if I pronounce cil.. like sol

but... the cil is so underpronounced that... it just doesn't seem right lol
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 4:08 pm


Too busy for this s**t man...I recorded this, now I'm workin on something for Vicious, AND I gotta drop 10 bars

http://media.putfile.com/Chiwww-Swqaaaaa

Syllvurr


Vicious_da_Cannibal

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:33 pm


SilverSpyder
Too busy for this s**t man...I recorded this, now I'm workin on something for Vicious, AND I gotta drop 10 bars

http://media.putfile.com/Chiwww-Swqaaaaa


since when did i become so special. god i am begging you not to do anymore audios. you sound horrible...if you gon diss me, just do it in text, i mean atleast your keystylin is aight
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:35 pm


Silver>Yung Vicious

I'm better looking than you.

Syllvurr


Vicious_da_Cannibal

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:44 pm


SilverSpyder
Silver>Yung Vicious

I'm better looking than you.

that has nothing to do with your sucky a** audios though
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:48 pm


Yung_Vicious
SilverSpyder
Silver>Yung Vicious

I'm better looking than you.

that has nothing to do with your sucky a** audios though


Yeaa...But

I look better than you.

Syllvurr


Shenco

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:48 pm


SilverSpyder
Yer, shen, his words rhyme if you imagine a southern a** accent on em xd

Like...Over here in NY, we would rhyme shenco with pencil...
I know probably cuz we all got different styles and come from diff.regions.Like In Philly we have all of our rhymes like match right up with each other,and it shows in my verse how i got to match up.But i can understand th accent thing
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