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Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:14 pm


...+introduction

Hello and welcome to my [Lab 305] quest thread! I've been a super-secret stalker of the thread since, I think, around the time Kalec's fel essence was introduced. I'm a major fan of the shop and artwork, to the mental point where ideas for a concept kept poking me in the brain if I didn't record them on something.

*ahem* Anyway, this concept won't be started on, gold-wise, until I finish another quest I started waaay back in October. So this concept will more or less be in the idea/edit/critique stage until further notice. I'm going to use that time to spruce up the concept to make it sound...presentable! ^^;;

Now then, take a look around if you've stayed with this far. Constructive critisism is always welcome. But please be sure to follow any and all rules of the guild while you're at it biggrin


Concept is in the: Working Stage. (Yeah, I went down 2 stages. razz )

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Random Note: Atti has had 6 sex changes since she was first thought of xD Poor Atti...
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:15 pm


...+navigation

1. Intro
2. Navigation (You are here)
3. Fel Essence
4. The Rock and the Bone
5. The Spider and the Stone
6. The Guardian
7. Information, Credits and Thank You's
8. Extra Stuff

Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:16 pm


...+fel essence

Electric Flame
A bright, burning flame that gives off static discharges. Electricity ripples through the flame every so often, but the flame itself still gives off a warm, cozy heat.

Description:
-Kept in a bottle
-Flame is red and orange; the discharge is blue and yellow
-Glows red; but when it discharges, turns a fait yellow
-May cause static cling/static electricity



Petrified Fair Wing
A stone that seems to show the form of the left wing of a fairy. The stone's color is mostly black, with flecks of white, red and yellow. It shines a pretty white light, but the aura it gives off is obviously onimous. Not to say that the reason for petrifying the wing was evil, but the fairy itself wasn't such a...good person.

Said fairy was one of the mischevious types who liked to cause trauma and mayhem to humans by tricking them into believing that it was harmless and good. One day, however, it tricked a very powerful wizard without knowing so, and in a panic of escaping, had its left wing completely petrified. The anger from the fairy is felt whenever it's held by someone too long, although the 'good' light that emits from the wing is caused by the fairy's false appearence.

Description:
-Medium-sized stone shaped, mostly black, jagged on the edges
-Looks like a fossilized wing...and some sort of body part in it? O_o
-Enclosed in a bottle
-Glows white light, but gives off a terrible feeling when held for too long.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:17 pm


...+the rock and the bone (Concept 1)

Name: Alana
Guardian: Rhinnanon Siv
Gender: Female
Fel Essence: Electric Flames
Soul: Molten Rock
Hair color: Black, with an IndianRed1 (#FF6A6A) streak in the front
Hair style: Long, all (except the streak) are in a braid that goes to the waist.
Eye color: Heterochromatic: Good example on wikipedia.
- Left eye: Firebrick1 (#FF3030)
- Right Eye: SteelBlue2 (#5CACEE) with DarkGoldenrod2 (#EEAD0E) iris
Skin color: Misty Rose (#FFE4E1)
Markings on skin: Clump of lava rock on the forearms and hands, various red tattoos around the neck and shoulders. A lightning bolt tattoo that goes through the right eye, with a larger lightning bolt near the middle of her chest.
Clothing style: Armoured islander
Wings: This sort of style; the color scheme is a mix of blue, yellow and red. Wings are frayed at the edges.
Horns: N/A
Ears: Ears? What ears? Elven ears, only pointed downward instead of to the side.
Other Distinguishing Traits: Small pieces of lava rock stuck on various places of the body and in her hair.
Accesories: A tropical flower somewhere in the braid, little flame earrings
Personality: Ahahaha. Come back later for this...
Alignment: Lawful Neutral - I don't want to hurt you, but I will if I have to.
Diet: Electricity...um.


Possible Powers:

- Lava Rock: Able to form rocks from fire or other burning substances. Can control the shape of the rock in later stages.
- Static: Can form static electricity into a solid form; can be used as a weapon
- Integration: Can combine fire and electricity together; combinations vary with amount and size of the flame and electricity.
- Heat Resistance: Resistant to any type of heat.

*She could make harden the lava? Or make it ooze, as a defense mechanism?
*Lava spit?

References:
A look inside the bone

Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:18 pm


...+the spider and the stone (Concept 2)

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(Closest thing I could make. A better doll in the future?)
Name: Attilyn
Nicknames: Atti, Kiddo, Shorty
Gender: Female
Fel Essence: Petrified Fairy Wing
Soul: Black Widow Spider
Hair color/style: Bright blond with black and red streaks; Style is very long past the waist and free.
Eye color/style: Heterochromatic:
-Left eye: Blood Red with daffodil iris
-Right Eye: Daffodil iris with dark iris
Skin color: Fleshy, healthy
Build (Body/Torso): Hourglass-type of body. Small hourglass, that is.
Markings on skin: Complicated swirls on her arms, body art covering her chest and her neck. A black spiral that circles the left side of her face and ends going into her eye.
Clothing style: She wears the stereotypical fairy outfit, only a little modified: color scheme is a dark blue-green, the style mirrors Tinkerbell's outfit (except it has a bit more 'Oomph' in it, and shows a little more leg),
Wings: Grey gossamer wings, with flecks of red, black and green in it. Slightly blackened and rough around the edges.
Horns: N/A
Ears: Pointed, elf-like
Other Distinguishing Traits: Pointy teeth, a little on the small side, leaves of different sizes stuck in her hair
Accesories: Dark blue-green leather bracelets, leash-like choker that connects to both her bracelets (black or red) with 2 spikes protruding from the sides
Personality: Sugar and spice. She's not afraid to act defenseless and weak just to get what she wants, which may be most of the time. She shows some amusement in playing tricks on people. Her curiosity is borderline annoying and can be downright rude sometimes. Not like that would bother her. She doesn't really give a damn about what others think of her. Her mannerisms are reflected from Gail Carson Levine's fairies, with an evil touch.
Alignment: Neutral Evil or Lawful Evil - Looks can be very decieving.
The "diet": Her diet is based off of how Levine's fairies are 'born': by a baby's first laugh. So, therefore, her diet will be laughter. The younger the person, the more full she becomes.

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:19 pm


...+the guardian

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Full Name: Rhinnanon Iridoala Siv'Aurouch
Nicknames: Rhinn, Risa (Her initials)
DOB: October 21st
Gender: Female
Looks to be: 21
Actual Age: 27
Martial Status: Single (and wants to keep it that way)
Sexual Preference: Straight
Race: Human
Religion: None
Occupation: Scientist & Inventor

Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Waist-length, bangs parted, worn down
Eye Color: Blue (...atleast that's what Rhinn tells everyone >>)
Skin Color: Caucasion
Height: 7'1" (Her brother is about 7'6".)
Weight: 136 lbs.
Distinguishing Physical Traits: Sunglasses (They never come off. Not even when it's nighttime.), small scar on her left hand from when she was little
Blood Type: B Negative

Parents: Deceased for over 12 years
Siblings: Demetrius Adolies Siv'Aurouch, Age 29
Relatives: All deceased by natural causes
Children/Offspring: None

Personality: Secretive. Snarky. Cynical. Mature. Too blunt sometimes. Not afraid to speak her mind. Looks shady, but can be reliable. Easily amused.
Likes: Men, the colors black and white, computers, inventing illogical devices, velvet curtains, satin bedsheets, four-poster beds, her brother's company, soft rain, her sunglasses, piano players (can't play it herself, though), observing art
Dislikes: Bratty children, smart-mouthed people, dumbasses (sorta goes w/smarth-mouthed people), uncleanliness, itchy clothing, alcohol (and other drugs), annoying girl scouts, sweet food, brussel sprouts, preppy bitches, moodiness, paperwork, hangnails, spiders
Hobbies: Collecting & inventing weird stuff that defies the laws of human (and maybe magical, but she doesn't believe that magic has very many) nature, reading, recording data about anything and everything, polishing her 367-and-counting lighter case collection

Tattooes: None; she doesn't like them.
Piercings:
-Right ear: Pierced twice on the bottom, 1 large gold clamp on the side
-Left ear: Pierced twice on the bottom, has 3 small gold clamps along the side
Weapons: Usually has a butterfly knife somewhere on her, sometimes a magical invetion (depending on the situation)
Strengths: Some knowledge of magic, combat skills are adequate
Weaknesses: Staminia is below average, firearms

Ideas on how Rhinn got the soul

-Deme's pet spider, which happens to be a Black Widow Spider, is slowly dying. Deme can't bear to put it out, so he puts his sister in charge. Rhinn is in charge of 'putting it to sleep', but forgets to do so and accidentally leaves it near the soul bottle. The rest is history, or pre-history.

-Deme smuggles a half-dead spider from work. Rhinn doesn't like it, but accepts its presence. Later that day, Rhinn leaves the soul bottle near said spider's cage, NOT on accident but because she didn't know what would happen if she put it near something that was almost dead.

-Rhinn and Deme go on a tropical vacation! Deme thinks its funny when he smuggles the bone essence in Rhinn's bag, but Rhinn doesn't think so. Coincidentally, while the siblings are at the island, their hotal is next to an active volcano. Rhinn decides to take some of the rocks from said volcano back home with her.


Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:32 pm


...+about spiders

Spiders (in General)
Black Widow Spider
Spider Silk
Neurotoxin (venom info)
Spider Webs

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...+credits

All info from Wikipedia

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...+thank you's

-To the staff, for letting me join the guild in the first place
-To anyone who took some time out of their busy lives to glance at this thread.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:33 pm


...+extra stuff

UM. Come back later!

Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:38 pm


Okay, my thread is officially open for critique ^^
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 2:28 pm


Working on:

-Pictures: Banners are out, since I can't find the link to the program I used to make banners. Trying to find some references to gray elves, and trying (but failing) to make dolls that will have somewhat a resemblance of Lafmaeruil.

-RP Fix-up: Thinking of putting up an example of my rp-ing style, but can't find time to do it *shakes fist at school and short attention span* Will try to work on it during last week of school (cause I get out early). Dunno if aunt has a cpu though, so that will be a problem. (But I am so gonna write up a response to the big blow up of the lab *dork*)

-Fel essence: Will have to change essence around because another Gaian, Ro Chan, has an essence similar to mine. I know I've had my eye on something moon-related, but I don't want her to think that I copied her idea >_< (If you're reading this Ro Chan, just wanna let you know about this.) So, I have decided to change the essence. Possible ideas for another essences are: (Bold = Considering to use)

-Mother Nature's Blood (Might rewrite soul as well if it comes down to this)
-Harpy's Talon
-Seed of Life (2nd pick, if nothing else pops into head)
-Petrified Fairy Wing (A theme of magic and fantasy going down...I sorta like this one)
-Abyss of Darkness (Good soul + bad essence = confused Raevan?)
-Puff of Cloud Nine
-Death's Last Breath (Hmm....I could work with this...)

-Funds: Uhh....no comment on that ^^;;;;

Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 4:01 pm


Okay, have decided on changing the essence AND the soul.

The essence will be the Seed of Life.

And the soul will be...wait for it...THE GRIM REAPER biggrin biggrin *bonks self*

But a problem for me is to choose which version of the grim reaper I should use @_@ I might just mix them all together, to mkae things easier for me. But then, I hafta think of a way how IC!Rhinn captures the soul of the Grim Reaper...that will be tricky. But I like myself a challenge. It gets my imagination gears working.
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 3:44 pm


Hokay, have come up with a way Rhinn catches the Grim Reaper. Only it's not really the Grim Reaper, it's a replacement sweatdrop

Small Summary: Rhinn tricks the Grim Reaper('s replacement) into coming to "get her", but must stall for time (she asks for him/her to place the bottle around his/her as her dying wish (the limit is about 2 days, right?)) before she gets to Limbo. After 2 (?) days, the replacement dies, leaving the soul in the bottle and enables Rhinn to escape.

...That will be some story, if it ever actually gets written xD But it'll be interesting, nonetheless.

Yume Matsuri


Yume Matsuri

PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 6:24 pm


To Do List (for this Sat.):
-Explain essence more
-Work on the Grim Reaper's replacement story
-Imagine some sample RPs with some Rhinn & Attilyn interaction.
-Do any homework that needs to be done for next Monday -_-
PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 8:56 pm


Just a little thing. I was thinking of using the soul of Death (/The Grim) too, but I realized- if it is used for a raevan, then how will people die? Also think about the powers of the raevan. The ability to kill people just like that....
It sounds cool, yeah. It just doesn't seem like a smart soul to choose, but thats just my opinion.

`ShivA

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