I know there is not much Bob in the first chapter but this is the setting chapter. hope you like it.
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The 1,000 year love
It's good, but I'm just going to make a few little adjustments that you don't have to follow. Kay?
A girl, who looked about 25, with straight brown hair, held back by a denim bandanna and wearing a red peach dress with matching heals and a little denim jacket that match her bandanna and backpack. A tarnished copper locket hung from her neck, with matching hoops hanging from her ears. She had electric blue eyes, that shined of magic, covered by sunglasses, that glinted as she walk down the street. She stopped at a door that read Harry Dresden, Wizard. She heard bells as she opened the door. There was a man standing there, as if to leave. He held the door open and extending his arm in a welcoming gesture.
“Are you Harry Dresden?” the girl asked looking up a him because of the one step difference and moving the sunglasses to her head.
“Yes, I am,” he said still holding the door open.
“Are you really a wizard?” she asked with an inquiring look.
“Yes.”
“Oh!” in a voice of satisfaction as she finally walked inside.
Collapsing on a couch she said, “You have to help me! I have no where left to go. My doctor said I am fine but…”
“How ‘bout I make tea while you calm down?” asked Harry.
“O-okay, thank you." She said in a kind of embarrassed voice
*I hope I can get hired before Murphy comes to take me to the crime scene* Harry thought while glancing at the clock and putting his tea in front of him. “Here’s yours.”
“Thanks.” said the girl.
“What's that you’re working on?”
“It is my character sheet,” holding it out so Harry could look at it. “She just leveled up, so I was picking her new spells. My friends an’ I play D&D once a month.” Harry glanced at the sheet, uninterested.
“So, what's your name?”
“Jennifer.” she replied, putting her sheet and the Players Hand Book away in her backpack.
“Jennifer, huh. So, Jennifer, what is the …” at that moment Murphy came busting through the door, interrupting Harry, “All right let’s go Harry! Hey, who's that?”
“ A soon-to-be client.” said Harry, making a palm-down, hushing motion.
“I should go.” declared Jennifer.
“No, don’t go!” interjected Harry. “Wait here, I’ll be right back. Murphy let me get my coat and we’ll go.” said Harry as he headed to the backroom. “Bob!” Harry called, but not so loudly that the people in the front could hear.
“Yes?” replied Bob in a voice dripping with sarcasm.
“Look I need to go with Murphy, but I don’t want to lose my client.”
“ You have a client?” interrupted Bob.
“Yes, just make sure that she doesn't do any thing stupid while I'm gone.”
“But Harry,” but it was too late, Harry had already left.
Jenifer was sitting alone on the couch *Maybe I should leave.* she thought, but when she tried the door, it was locked. “I guess not.” she said out loud and decided to do her homework while she waited. Thirty minuets later she was done and decided to explore the stuff in the front of the shop. She was going to smell the contents of a bottle when she saw something glinting in the air. To her bewilderment it was a sentence floating in the air. It read: 'I wouldn't do that if I were you.'
“Ho!” she said in surprise and instantly put the bottle down. She examined the words clearly. “Um, so he is a wizard. Nice warning system.” She mumbled to herself she walked back to the couch. “Hey, I wonder if I can find his staff...” she mumbled to herself.
*This can only be trouble.* thought Bob, who was still invisible.
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The 1,000 year love
It's good, but I'm just going to make a few little adjustments that you don't have to follow. Kay?
A girl, who looked about 25, with straight brown hair, held back by a denim bandanna and wearing a red peach dress with matching heals and a little denim jacket that match her bandanna and backpack. A tarnished copper locket hung from her neck, with matching hoops hanging from her ears. She had electric blue eyes, that shined of magic, covered by sunglasses, that glinted as she walk down the street. She stopped at a door that read Harry Dresden, Wizard. She heard bells as she opened the door. There was a man standing there, as if to leave. He held the door open and extending his arm in a welcoming gesture.
“Are you Harry Dresden?” the girl asked looking up a him because of the one step difference and moving the sunglasses to her head.
“Yes, I am,” he said still holding the door open.
“Are you really a wizard?” she asked with an inquiring look.
“Yes.”
“Oh!” in a voice of satisfaction as she finally walked inside.
Collapsing on a couch she said, “You have to help me! I have no where left to go. My doctor said I am fine but…”
“How ‘bout I make tea while you calm down?” asked Harry.
“O-okay, thank you." She said in a kind of embarrassed voice
*I hope I can get hired before Murphy comes to take me to the crime scene* Harry thought while glancing at the clock and putting his tea in front of him. “Here’s yours.”
“Thanks.” said the girl.
“What's that you’re working on?”
“It is my character sheet,” holding it out so Harry could look at it. “She just leveled up, so I was picking her new spells. My friends an’ I play D&D once a month.” Harry glanced at the sheet, uninterested.
“So, what's your name?”
“Jennifer.” she replied, putting her sheet and the Players Hand Book away in her backpack.
“Jennifer, huh. So, Jennifer, what is the …” at that moment Murphy came busting through the door, interrupting Harry, “All right let’s go Harry! Hey, who's that?”
“ A soon-to-be client.” said Harry, making a palm-down, hushing motion.
“I should go.” declared Jennifer.
“No, don’t go!” interjected Harry. “Wait here, I’ll be right back. Murphy let me get my coat and we’ll go.” said Harry as he headed to the backroom. “Bob!” Harry called, but not so loudly that the people in the front could hear.
“Yes?” replied Bob in a voice dripping with sarcasm.
“Look I need to go with Murphy, but I don’t want to lose my client.”
“ You have a client?” interrupted Bob.
“Yes, just make sure that she doesn't do any thing stupid while I'm gone.”
“But Harry,” but it was too late, Harry had already left.
Jenifer was sitting alone on the couch *Maybe I should leave.* she thought, but when she tried the door, it was locked. “I guess not.” she said out loud and decided to do her homework while she waited. Thirty minuets later she was done and decided to explore the stuff in the front of the shop. She was going to smell the contents of a bottle when she saw something glinting in the air. To her bewilderment it was a sentence floating in the air. It read: 'I wouldn't do that if I were you.'
“Ho!” she said in surprise and instantly put the bottle down. She examined the words clearly. “Um, so he is a wizard. Nice warning system.” She mumbled to herself she walked back to the couch. “Hey, I wonder if I can find his staff...” she mumbled to herself.
*This can only be trouble.* thought Bob, who was still invisible.
