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(crit.) could you rate this art piece, please?

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fullmoonie

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:06 am


I drew this two a couple of weeks ago.
However, I don't really like them that much..
There is something missing.
Can someone tell me what?

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the colouring of the second one is really bad, I am still working on it..
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 1:37 pm


not too bad

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PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 5:12 pm


Try to make the clothes more eye catching. Your facial expressions are so vivid, but the clothes go.....bleh. plain. So.....that's my suggestion 3nodding You can only draw the way you can draw. Everyone has their own style.
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 12:32 pm


wow thanks ^.^
that really helped me
now you said this i noticed.. and I am working on it right now XD

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