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jceaz

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 8:18 pm


wahmbulance Callout: Yung Vicious

6 bars (O_O)
1...ONE Round (had to make clarify, these B'ham ppl are some dumb niggas)

No feeding
No biting

No recycling
No Capricious ghostwriting

And...Since I'm ******** "mediocre"
Tongue Kisses goes first.
wahmbulance
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 11:10 pm


damn, you are so ******** predictable you seriously take the fun out of making fun of you. man i havent done a battle in a while i'll holla dont worry it wont take 5 months

Vicious_da_Cannibal


Niji no Jojishi

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:18 am


jceaz

No Capricious ghostwriting

Note to self: If I'm supposedly worse than him, why doesn't he want me to ghostwrite for Vicious? I mean... that would mean Ceaz would win automatically wouldn't it, if he believes he is superior. confused

Something doesn't add up lol
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:10 am


Ya enthymeme is irrelevant/ your implicity is simplicity
Claims in vain you aint talkin to V you must be recitin a soliloquy
You an actor with a mic that aint even yours/ you borrow skill
Ceaz is like having sex wit dykes there are holes he'll never fill
I'm like angus/ Ceaz is a quarter pounder he dont know who he ******** wit
This a**s calls me fat cause I eat like a king/but I'm lovin it
Happy meal mc’s cant come after my staments/I’m complicated like trig
I’ll make you a cancer patient like the erradicated kid on spyda’s sig
Chemo cant save you I’m in ya system like Virus/ my skin cells rape you
You generic as bare feet/no wonder teez made you change shoes
Ya audios releases more static than my hair follicles formatted to mp3
They are a bit behind the class it’s like I’m watchin LDTV

sorry bout that OG i didnt have room to throw you a diss but i aint forgot about you. you still my b***h, b***h

Vicious_da_Cannibal


Syllvurr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 12:36 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 12:42 pm


Stop the ********. I will do something not nice.

Oh and somebody write me hooks for these:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=561063&songID=4159977

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=561063&songID=4188798

I write great verses, but horrible hooks. Help!

Overlord Makairo


Syllvurr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:18 pm


Wait...Did Vicious just call me a Cancer patient?

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:31 pm


SilverSpyder
Wait...Did Vicious just call me a Cancer patient?

neutral
he was talking about your old pic... he thought you looked sick like you had cancer lol

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Syllvurr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:34 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:43 pm


SilverSpyder
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That's a dope ******** pic in your sig. If that ***** in there was in a better pose it would be like some art s**t.

Overlord Makairo


Syllvurr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:48 pm


"That *****"
Is me...And,I got one where my face is visible...I'll upload it later but...Vicious disappoints me

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 2:48 pm


SilverSpyder
"That *****"
Is me...And,I got one where my face is visible...I'll upload it later but...Vicious disappoints me

neutral

good

oh yeah mak i got ya on the hooks

Vicious_da_Cannibal


Syllvurr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:04 pm


Yung_Vicious
SilverSpyder
"That *****"
Is me...And,I got one where my face is visible...I'll upload it later but...Vicious disappoints me

neutral

good

oh yeah mak i got ya on the hooks


Alright.

Ceaz, Finish him
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 11:49 pm


Props for the Intellectual material.


Vicous...Far left, ((according to his desciption.))

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=5310156

Anyway....

I’m checkin ya verse, kinda sad I’m not seein no punchlines
From ya pic, It seems like you only get vicious at lunchtime

Already scared? Look at you, on your knees, you f*****t
Cause he ain’t touchin me , Like my name was Ceazer salad

This v****a creampuff, always tryna seem tough
You think you fly cause your bra’s a designer D cup?

Teezy’s walking sillouette, that’s enough to wanna-die
Teez’ll never be in Vicous’ shadow….except for the summertime

No pulse, the kid is dead, don’t bother getting a surgeon
I knocked the <********> outta him!!! No wait…he was already a virgin

You got killed by a cop,guess I ain’t as bad as ya thought
After hours of tryna draw ya outline, I ******** ran outta chalk mad

No offense to overweight people...Except for Vicious of course.

jceaz


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 12:05 am


Lol. I actually liked Ceaz verse.

Punchlines, easily flowable, creativity, and more.

Vicious, you fell victim to trying to be too sophisticated. I have that problem too sometimes. When you do that, your insults come off weak. It's a battle, so don't be afraid to be a little bit immature with it, just not TOO immature, feel me?

I've gotta give this to Ceaz.
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