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 Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:50 pm
This Story Is Still In The Making!!
Please Tell Me What Should I Work On And Such Like That
I Would Really Love It
+++ M I L K z +++
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:51 pm
мσvεмєиţ 1; ßỈѓтђ Өƒ Ǎŋ Ǿβşεşşĩǿʼn
The screams of a mother giving birth had echoed the home in which she lived happily with her husband. The couple had hired a Midwife in order to give birth naturally in their home. " Push, woman....I can almost see the head," the Midwife had ordered to the mother. " Don't worry, everything will be alright.." Her husband tried to encourage. " Good for you two to say! You aren't having your hips split apart for this baby of ours, Tennkah!!" the mother had yelled, squeezing her husband's hand. The husband, being now known as Tennkah, had grunted in pain in attempt to loosen her grip on his hand. " Kiska, it will be alright.." he tried to reassure. Screams of pain and happiness had started to echo through the quiet village. " Here she is," The Midwife yelled after countless of moments in this horrifying labor scene. She held up a female child, wrapped in a cloth and covered in membrane. The Midwife handed the child to the mother named Kiska and disappeared out of the door. " What is her name..?" Tennkah whispered to his lovely wife, his cheek resting at the top of her head, rubbing her shoulders. Kiska grunted, her hips going back into place before she shrugged. " I really have no idea actually..I thought we were going to have a boy.." Kiska whispered, "But..I'll call her Seiko.." The two nodded in agreement. This new female child was now identified as Seiko. Little did they know, the rhapsody of this child had begun.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:53 pm
мσvεмєиţ 2; βǎζζǻđ †ǿ Ŧħέ ßəǻǜŧƒŭĮ
"I hear she's blonde cause they left her out in the sun too long!" Seiko heard behind her. She didn't dare turn around. This five-year-old was not going to be tempted to stand up to those bullies that were constantly teasing her of her blonde hair. Not that she was the only blonde in their whole town, that both of her parents had dark hair and eyes, but she had blue eyes and blonde hair. The young girl was walking home as she desperately tried to make it in a hurry. This town, the town of most French speakers and criminals. Lies and secrets along every street, down every alley, behind every door. "She's got blonde hair cause her family's ashamed of her! They wanted to say she was adopted!" another yelled." Her hair is the color of cold Spaghetti!!" Those boys were following her and so she decided to turn and face them. They were her same age, but since she was of small frame, they were much bigger than her. "My parents are not ashamed of me," Seiko had tried to explain. The boys had only laughed and pushed her. Seiko stumbled a bit before regaining her balance, with a gentle grunt. Seiko didn't want to handle this anymore, she turned on her heel to begin running, but she bumped into someone. A man. Looking up, she noticed it was her father,Tennkah, tears started to fill in her eyes as she hugged onto him, or well...his legs. "Pere!!" she had cried out. Tennkah tried to calm the hysterical child and picked her up into his arms. He cradled her and began walking away, Seiko felt so safe. ¦ Ā ¥ëąř ζǻţεř ¦ Seiko was six and she had coaxed her parents to let her stay after to hang out with the other children at the TownSquare during the afternoon. Everything was going nicely until Seiko decided to sit down. She had her eyes closed and her head rested in her hands. Suddenly, she felt something on her head, cold and mushy. It ran down her back, upon further inspection, she found that it was Spaghetti sauce! She let out a high cry and shook her head in attempt to rid her hair of the sauce. She saw a group of boys and girls, not much older than her, with a large pot that was dripping with the sauce. " Someone get a fork," a girl yelled, the others laughing. Seiko was put to shame that day, walking home covered in sauce and a tear-stained face. ¦ Ā ¥ëąř ζǻţεř ¦ Seiko was much bigger now that she was seven, but her hair was longer and blonder than ever. Her blue eyes twinkled. After that Spaghetti sauce incident, she has been left alone. People were her friends now. They weren't mean or anything. Even so, girls were telling Seiko how much a boy had liked her. She was so eager knowing that the boy she had the biggest crush on actually liked her and she was going to meet up with him, those girls told her. One day, she had met the girls and a few of her other friends at the TownSquare. She was dressed beautifully and noticed those girls where whispering and giggling statements to each other. Asking what was so funny, the girls shook their heads and said it was something she couldn't understand, since she was so young. The boy had met the girls in the TownSquare. Seiko went up to him and confessed herself. The other, not knowing what was going on, had pushed her out of the way and went back home, Muttering." And they said she was a pretty girl.." Those children laughed and pointed at the heartbroken Seiko before going off to frolic with each other through the town. It rained the rest of the day, Seiko just stood there, she spent that whole night out in the rain before going home the next day. Since that day, she knew that someday..in that rain...all of those people were going to pay for what they've done to her. Something will make them regret.Suddenly, there was something on her head. That godforsaken sauce again!? But, this was dry.. She had felt her head being rubbed furiously with a dry towel, which was becoming wet. Her head swayed at this furious motion, but was stopped as the other had shown his face. Their eyes had met for a brief moment before he had continued with the drying motion, which wasn't helping since the towel was soaked."Even the prettiest flowers need some rain," The other had exclaimed, with a loud laugh. Seiko had nodded slowly, trying to ignore the other but was ended as their shared another gaze. With a wide grin, he patted her head before dashing off. "Pretty flower..?" Seiko had mumbled, throwing the towel off her head and walking back to her home.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:54 pm
Рαѓїǻħ Өғ мү Эуё :::: Ŧξẵґş ǓЛШЄΡ†
As soon as she left home the next day, she had gotten a change of clothes and stared out her bedroom window. "Seiko...why don't you go get me something.." Kiska muttered to her daughter. Seiko sighed and nodded, making her way out the door and off to the TownSquare where she was told to go pick up a package from a store that was known for beautiful dresses and rich people. As she was walking, someone had begun walking beside her. Her head tilted to look at the other and it was a boy. His hair was of a teal and his eyes were a crystal blue. It was the same boy who had given her a towel when she was sitting in the rain. " Hi!!" The boy had exclaimed to Seiko. He draped an arm over her shoulders but she removed it from herself. "Awww...c'mon..most girls like that. Anyway..I'm Scott!" he pointed to himself. "Who are you?!". Seiko only looked at him with a pleading look in her eyes and sighed as she continued to walk. "C'mon...at least you can tell me where you are going!" Scott tried to get a word from Seiko, but she only remained quiet. It was getting very aggrivating and it was annoying. " Seiko..my mom is sending me out to pick up something for her.." Seiko had replied, hoping this would be the end of their conversation. " Good to meet you Seiko, I'll help you get that package of yours," Scott had grabbed her hand as he said this and pulled him with her.¦момзй†ѕ ζάтεя ¦ " You look absolutely beautiful, Seiko!!" Scott had yelled through the store. The package was of a dress that Seiko just had to try on. Seiko twirled around and stared at herself in the mirror with a wide grin on her face. She looked so beautiful in the white dress, her blonde hair falling down her back. The shopkeepers laughed and watched the strutting Seiko. Scott had clapped his hands and laughed loudly, going up and clinging himself teasingly to the Seiko. " Look at the cute couple!" The Shopkeeper exclaimed, rather loudly. Seiko had reddened and clung herself back to him with a laugh. "Seiko could win in a beauty pagent with only herself and a mirror!" Scott encouraged. She felt so proud witht this new friend of hers. Knowing that she could be friends with him for a long time. Nobody could be this nice and it be a joke, right? She knew this would last....
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:55 pm
мσvεмєиţ 4; ТнЗ вяδĸέи Sσииεт
It was three years after Seiko had met Scott, and he was the only friend that she had.Seiko was now ten years of age, Scott being a year younger. He would protect her from the bullies that she had and would cheer her up whenever she was down. He challenged her into almost any game ever possible and as always, she lost. Every single game the two played, she lost. Seiko's parents had favored the boy and allowed him to stay over anytime they wanted. Coming up was Seiko's birthday, Scott had thought hard on what to get Seiko. He remembered all the beautiful presents she had given him on his birthdays so he had studied her hard to see what she would like. Whenever he went to her house, she was always watching movies of some woman. What was her name? Marilyn Monroe. Yes! Seiko loved how beautiful that woman was and she had acted out her own scenes of movies she had seen. Something had to be for her. 'Let me think,' Scott said. 'She likes looking beautiful..and she always plays with her mom's breeded cats.....beautiful....cat....Aha!' Scott had jumped in the air as he had thought of the perfect present..well...presents. " Maybe she could like a mirror...and maybe a stuffed animal...like a stuffed cat!" ¦Ŧħē Рǻяŧу¦ "Mère....when will Père get here?" Seiko asked her mother. " He will be home soon..you know he has to leave town alot because of this place." Kiska replied to her daughter. "I hope he will be here! Him and Scott! " Seiko exclaimed, twirling around. ¦Ѕςδŧŧ¦ Scott was hopelessly carrying a large vanity mirror in both hands and the stuffed cat, which was tied in a blue bow, with his teeth. The thing was heavier than he thought. ' I'm almost there though..' he thought. Seiko has always had horrible birthdays. This birthday will change Seiko's feelings about her birthday! And it would be all because of him!! Scott felt so proud. ¦Ŧħē Рǻяŧу¦ Scott had finally made it to Seiko's house, he had to hide the present though..he had felt hard wind blowing at his back, so he decided to inch around the back of her house and lean the mirror and hide the kitten at the back of the house. Going back to the front, he walked through the door. " I'm here!" Scott yelled. The two females had greeted him. Hours had passed and the trio had enjoyed themselves happily. Seiko had spent her time staring out the window for her father. "He'll show up, Seiko." Kiska had reassured. Seiko nodded and Scott had suddenly stood up. " Hey Seiko! Want your present?!" Seiko nodded and he had grabbed her hand, pulling Seiko outside and behind her home. He had walked to where he had hid the mirror and noticed it had disappeared. The wind was stronger and the two were almost able to be blown away if it wasn't for Kiska holding onto them. Searching for the present, they gasped. Scott, heartbroken, had saw the mirror laying on the ground, glass shattered everywhere. And the stuffed cat had been pierced by the broken mirror. Stuffing almost everywhere. " This wind must have blown it.." Kiska explained. Scott looked pleadingly to Seiko, where her face was buried in her mother's skirt. Her father had not shown up, the weather was horrible, and her presents were destroyed. " I'm sorry.." Scott pleaded, a hand going to her shoulder. Seiko had shrugged him off. Kiska had sighed. " This weather is getting horrible, let's go inside until this clears off..we'll clean this up later." The three went back into the house. Seiko had locked herself in her room and Scott was knocking at the door repeatedly, trying to get her to come out. Kiska had ignored those two, hoping the mood will be lightened if her husband would show up. The wind was picking up, getting stronger and louder. "Seiko...I didn't mean to disappoint you..now..let me in." Scott said, quietly. Seiko had unlocked the door and crawled back on her bed, laying on her tear-stained pillow. Scott had tried to cheer her up. " Look Seiko..I will never disappoint you, okay?!" He grinned, pouncing ontop of her repeatedly. "C'mon...be happy...." Seiko, could resist this gesture and remained curled in a tight ball. Scott had only sighed and laid ontop of her in the ball. The two had spent her birthday in this sorrowful mood, Scott tried to cheer Seiko up..but couldn't. Nothing could..
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:56 pm
мσvεмєиţ 5;ТнЗ Čяǖѕh
Seiko was thirteen and beautiful. Her curves filling our beautifully. Puberty causing that hourglass figure being brought to herself, her bust growing, hips widening, her face was radiant and gorgeous. Although she wasn't as quick in movement as most girls her age, she made slow and graceful movements. She earned two friends at this age. Still having Scott, she made a new friend named Ai. Ai was a harsh and outspoken girl, two years older than herself. Ai had a hard habit of smoking, but was an elegant dancer. The female of black hair had taught Seiko how to dance and with the support of her family and Scott, she was almost as good as Ai. It was also when Seiko had accepted her first crush. She had no idea who the boy was, but he wasn't that much older than her, he was different than others, yet gorgeous and mysterious. Yet, Scott was always the only guy in her life. She was older than him, but couldn't help to get a secure feeling everytime she was around him. He had protected her from the bullies, encouraged her dancing, did anything in his way to please him. And it made her feel special, as of a Princess. No mysterious of beautiful boy could reach Scott's godly standards. Perhaps it was the hormones, but was she actually so infatuated with her lifetime friend? In the privacy of her room, and Scott locked out (Which he was banging heavily on the door), Seiko decided to ask Ai. " Oi, relax M'love..it's natural feelings.." Ai said, patting her head gently, taking a drag from her cigarette and blowing the smoke from the window. Seiko had only nodded. " It's hormones...just get over them..okay? You're a pretty girl..it doesn't matter if he rejects you or not," Ai had added. Indeed, Seiko was a pretty girl, the boys that had teased her had tried to court her, asking her out, but she had turned them all down. Ai offered Seiko a quick wink before she had climbed out of the window and walked off, after kissing Seiko on her forehead. Seiko, getting pretty annoyed of Scott's banging, had unlocked and opened her door. He jumped in and literally threw himself on her bed, where he squirmed to get comfortable. " What's wrong?" he had asked her. Seiko only strugged her shoulders and climbed back on the bed to look at him. Scott scanned her perfectly and his smile had widened. " Nothing is wrong, okay..? I've just been thinking," Seiko replied, quietly, inching herself to him and leaning into him. Scott had reddened and stroked the top of Seiko's head. It was only a matter of time before Seiko's fierce lips were pressed against Scotts, either because of the hormones or the situation, she had yet to pull away. It was what seemed like hours before she had pulled away. The two smiled at each other, but Seiko immediately felt guilty. She had called him out so she could think. Scott waited outside her door for nearly an hour before Seiko emerged. Holding out her slowly. " Friends..?" he asked. "Friends.." She nodded. Scott taking her hand before they embraced in a casual manner. Ai had snuck back into Seiko's room and watched the two, an understanding nod coming from her head. No hormones, puberty, or gorgeous strangers could tear the trio apart.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:57 pm
мσvεмєиţ 6; †ợợ Рέяƒəςť
Seiko's birthday was steadily coming. She was only one day away and nothing could ruin it, she was positive. No bad weather, presents were bought, and going to be safely hidden, her father was on his way home this second, and she would be turning fourteen! Sadly, their town crime rate was going up. There were alot more murders, rapes, muggings, theft, and random shootouts. The trio of Ai, Scott, and Seiko were busy planning her party when Kiska had came in, a big smile on her face. " Seiko, your father should be home by the time your presents will be opened," Kiska said, slightly above a whisper. Seiko squealed and jumped on her bed, laughing loudly " He is really going to be here, mother?!" Kiska only nodded and exited the room. Ai had laughed and Scott jumped around with her. It was such a happy new start for Seiko. She would have the best birthday party and it would foreshadow the rest of her birthdays for the rest of her life. Love, Family, Happiness. Now don't get me wrong, disappointment and heartache has not been thought of.........yet.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:57 pm
мσvεмєиţ 7; †ħè Pǎяţү
It was time. Seiko's fourteenth birthday. She woke up to the sweet smell of her mother cooking famous dishes that was known throughout the town. Kiska had also had all of her cats ( She bred Full-Blood Persian cats for rich men to give to their wives.) laying peacefully on the floor, sleeping. Ķŋőςĸ Ķŋőςĸ was heard at Seiko's window. She rubbed her sleepy eyes and yawned, stretching. Turning to the window that was over her bed, she opened the dark curtains, and an explosion of light had entered her room, nearly blinding her. As her eyes adjusted, she saw it was Ai, who was dressed in her family's Gypsy dress. It exposed most of the teenager's midsection and it was gorgeous. A wide smile of excitement filled Seiko's face as she unlocked the window and pushed it open, Ai crawling in and landing on the bed. " 'Appy Birthday, darlin' ," Ai said, in her beautiful English accent. Seiko gave her thanks and gasped as she saw the large package that was given to her from Ai. " Oh thank you!!" Seiko exlaimed, clinging tightly to Ai. " No..no problem.." Ai replied, gasping for air. " Seiko, honey..someone's here for you.." Kiska said, bringing Scott into the room.." Oh..hello Aida-Amberjille..uhmm..you know you don't have to go through the window.." Kiska said, Ai laughed nervously and rubbed the back of her head. " Mrs. Evangeline..please..It's Ai..and..I'm used to going through this way." Kiska only shrugged her shoulders and left the room. Scott was holding a large package, he set it next to the bed. Seiko had jumped from her bed and tackled onto him. " Well..Hello to you too..and Happy birthday!" Scott exclaimed, rather loudly. "What did you get me?!" Seiko asked the two, they only shrugged their shoulders " You'll find out. " They said in unison. Seiko whined but ran to her mother when she was summoned from the other room. " Yes, mother?" Seko asked. Kiska handed her daughter a small box. " Happy birthday, my daughter" Kiska said, with a soft giggle. "Now..get your friends and we can have breakfast." Seiko nodded and ran off to go get Ai and Scott. Kiska sighed and stared out the kitchen window, sighing softly. ' Come on Tennkah..you really need to be here..' she thought..what could be taking her husband so long? ¦ мϋςн Ľåŧəя ¦ Seiko had opened her presents and everything was close to perfect. Her mother had gotten her a pearl necklace. Ai, gave her a Gypsy dress like she was wearing. Scott, had gotten her a brand new vanity mirror, unbroken. But, her father still didn't show up. The trio had looked around outside and Kiska allowed them to stay within the town limits to find him. ¦ Øи Тнє Тοшй ¦ "Tennkah!!" "Mr. Evangeline!!!" "FATHER!!!" the quiet town echoed. They desperately tried to search for Seiko's father, Kiska had also searched aroundto find her husband. Seiko felt hurt, why wouldn't he come to her parties? Any holidays, actually. Kiska was suspicious, she thought her husband could be cheating, possibly another family. She was furious. Ruin her own life, fine, but don't ruin Seiko's life! Suddenly, a loud scream was heard, it belonged to Seiko. Kiska ran in the direction that she heard the scream, it was followed by screams from the same person. Possibly Seiko. Finding the origin of the scream, Kiska gasped. Her eyes widened. Kiska was shocked, Seiko was lying helplessly next to her father, crying. Her father was bloody and beaten. A large gash in his back. Kiska felt so guilty, accusing her husband of such devilish things. Kiska picked up her crying daughter and began walking. Telling her friends that they should leave or come with her. Ai, had thought of something that could cheer up Seiko, had made her way home. Scott quickly followed behind the two. Seiko's tear stained face being hidden by her mother's shoulder. Seiko made this a promise..no more birthday parties for her.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:58 pm
мσvεмєиţ 8; Ðéąŧħ ǾŋĮŷ Μǻкєѕ Тнэ Ңә♥ят дсђз
Funerals always show how much people beg for attention. There are the flamboyant dressers, wearing wild black outfits. The loud cryers, who show up at every funeral, and then there are the people who pay respects to others that they don't even know. Kiska sat in the front row, her eyes red and puffy with tears. Seiko was next to her mother, not a single tear came from this teenager's eyes She was so shocked to see her father dead. The funeral was rather large, even though people did not know them. Kiska had repeatedly wiped her face with her gloved hand, sniffles coming from her every few moments. How could he just die like this?! Kiska had thought. The time they need him, he died. They were going to be horrible without him. Seiko, seeing her mouther hurt, felt a painful jolt in her chest. She held onto her chest and winced, her eyes glanced towards the coffin that her father lay in. Another painful jolt. Flashes appeared in her eyes, she felt dizzy. A jolt surged through her body. She let out a loud cry and fell to the ground and blacked out. -+-+ That was the day Seiko was diagnosed with Epilepsy. She woke up in her bed, her head hurting. Seiko did not remember anything at first, but when the horrible facts of her father's death, her mother crying, the worst possible factor in her life, she felt sick. She sat up and paled, sticking her head out of her open window and vomiting harshly. Kiska ran to the helpless Seiko, but felt horrible that she couldn't help her. Could only watch her depressed daughter vomit out of her own window. This would be the turning point. But not of joys. But of pains.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:59 pm
мσvεмєиţ 9; ßéηέǎтн Тħé Рǻſє мǿǿпļîĝĥ†
It was a year after Tennkah's death. Seiko's seizures had worsened, just as her chronic nightmares had. She would wake up to an empty home. Her mother was never home anymore, she did not allow her friends to come over. As much as Scott had wanted to help, she only rejected him. Seiko's pains had worsened and she was vomiting much more. Seiko was neglected, she had nobody.She wanted nobody. In between her violent seizures and vomit sessions, she would pray for something good to happen to her. She was going to do something with her life. Become famous. Get rid of her horrid life and do something. Once her mother was home,she would tell her of her dreams. Their future riches. The two woman hated Tennkah for leaving them like this. Beginning their hard poverty, Seiko's horrible mental illness.And it seemed almost as if she was becoming more dependant of her mother. Seiko cried all night for her mother, as if this illness that she had gotten was slowly destroying her intelligence and independant responsibilities. It overwhelemed the two women, they had no idea what to do. But, they would not soil Tennkah like this, but only dream of better things. A better life, a better future, a better past. Sadly, Kiska was taking it the hardest. She strived to work to support the two. Hardly any days for sleep. Long and hard hours. She couldn't stand it.All through her head, she could only think " Let me die.." but she didn't want to leave her young daughter alone in the world. Something had to be done. -+-+- Taking a sick day from work, Kiska went into a neighboring town, she searched long and hard for someone. A woman to take care of her baby. The way the two were living, she couldn't be able to care for Seiko forever. There was one woman. A strict woman in her fourties. She was gorgeous, but seemed bitter. She had long jet-black hair that was tied back in a tight bun. Her lovely French Victorian outfit making her stand out. " So you want me to take care of her..?" the woman asked. Kiska nodded. " I may not have enough money for your services...but I hope you can take her," Kiska replied, trying to be as polite as possible. The woman glared at Kiska, but nodded. " When she becomes in her Sixteenth year, you must bring her to me, I will keep her for two years. I will teach her. And that means I have the permission to punish and teach her anyway I want." the woman ordered. Shocked, Kiska nodded furiously. -+-+- "Mama..." Seiko said, walking into her mother's bedroom in the middle of the night. "Yes, Seiko..?" Kiska answered, half yawning. " There is a fullmoon tonight..." Seiko said. Kiska crawled out of her bed and walked outside, Seiko following close behind. The two women stared happily into the brightness of the moon. " Seiko, my daughter..I need to tell you something, " Kiska said. Seiko rasied her shoulders, showing that she was listening. " In one year..Seiko..you will be leaving me," Kiska replied, sadly. "But..why!?" Seiko exclaimed. " I cannot take care of you by the way we are living..you are going to stay with a woman, she will teach you to be a lady. To be proper, Seiko. Relax..you will only be there for two years and then you can do anything you want!" Kiska replied. Seiko felt a painful jolt in her chest, leave her mother. She ran into her mother's arms, holding onto her." Don't worry, Mother. As soon as those two years are up...I'm going to be famous and we will get out of this place and we will be rich!" Kiska nodded at her daughter's dreams. And, under their first FullMoon watch, this was a solemn promise for a better future. And it would all be because of Seiko. But, will Seiko actually be able to spend her future with the only family member she had?
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:01 pm
I know
It isn't as good as some things around here
But tell me how I can improve!
heart heart heart heart
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