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Bleeding Red Tears

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:19 pm


HISTORY:
There once was an Ruler. Everyone knew who the Ruler was and everyone respected the Ruler. One day, the Ruler came out from the castle..and revealed a deep dark secret to the people. The Ruler...was FEMALE?!
The people cried out. Females were not allowed to rule back then, and they were not allowed to even speak to a man without permission first.
The Ruler was quickly rushed back inside of the castle as her people, who loved her so much and respected her, cried out in rage. They had been tricked. What else was she hiding from them they demanded.


The Ruler was inside her hiding room in her castle as one of her closest friends and followers came to her. "Your majesty, we need to get you away from her before they come and kill you. Please come!"
She looked at her and sighed with tears in her eyes. ''My father has been disgraced. I should have stayed in hiding without telling them I was not a man. You are all I have left aside from the few followers that are here.'' She got up and her pale blue eyes glisened as the light hit them. ''Let's go quickly..but where to?"
Jewel looked at her and took her hand. ''To my Father's kingdom far away. Let a fellow follower that lives here with you handle the kingdom here for you. Please my Queen?''
Mortisha smilled. ''I would have never made it this far without you.'' She summond Philip and told him of her leaving and that he was now the King her kingdom. Philip bowed deeply and kneeled infront of her. ''Thank you so much your Majesty. You will not be dishonored with your choice. Leave now before it's to late. I will send you updates every so often madam.''
Mortisha smiled and pulled him to her feet. ''Go now and tell the people that you have slain me and that you are now the King.'' You could see the ache in her eyes as she said it. "Right away.'' Philip left to tell the people.
''Let us go now Jewel.'' They both ran to waiting horses. ''My Queen, do you still know how to ride?'' Jewel asked in a mocking voice. ''Well of course. I taught you not too long ago.'' Mortisha jumped on the horse and speed off with Jewel right behind her.


That was the last anyone ever say of the Queen and Jewel in tha tkingdom.
Philip had other plans for the kingdom though. He had ben planing on taking over soon enough anyways, so it worked out for him.
Philip walked out on to the announcement balcony and raised his hands and with a booming voice that reached every ear around him and below him. ''People of Iri, I am now your King!!'' The crowd below him gasped and then cheered. They had seen philip before. Guarding the Queen as they rode from the Castle to the outskirts of town to do shoping. He was a tall lean figure. He had the smile that could charm any woman, and yes, even some men. Men dreamed to be him, and women dreamed of BEING with him. His grey sparkling eyes peirced through anything. And his smile got him everything he wanted.

He smiled as the croud shushed and he continued. ''I have slain the Queen. She is no more!'' At this the croud cried out with happiness. Philip smiled and waved goodbye.
Now for him to start working on his new kingdom. As the years went bye, the people started getting poorer and poorer and they didn't understand. The beautiful gaurdens that surround the kingdom started to die and no one took care of anything. Soon, Philip was hated. He would take the oldest female child out of the houses and into his castle for them to be his 'ladies in waiting.' It seemed like the Gods were displeased with Philip because the sun never showed.
Then one day, the Gods had had enough and casted the kingdom into forever darkness and hate. The once beautiful place and the most caring place was evil and there were fights and deaths EVERYDAY.
Philip didn't care. He had gotten everything he wanted and more.

Soon after the casting into the evil realm as the people came to know it as, the homes and castle turned black and evil looking.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:44 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:22 pm


I enjoyed reading that.
You should write more, if you haven't already. :]
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:41 pm


..stsirw ym tils I]

I have some update..but I might try and change some of it. xP

[.llaf sraet der eht chtaw dna..

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Allleex
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:13 pm


Just a bit of advice first of all if someone is talking you use ". Also I wouldn't underline when someone is speaking.

Also maybe be a bit more descriptive. What do these people look like? Especially the main characters.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 9:13 pm


Allleex
Just a bit of advice first of all if someone is talking you use ". Also I wouldn't underline when someone is speaking.

Also maybe be a bit more descriptive. What do these people look like? Especially the main characters.
I was dealing with retarded people when I wrote it. LOL.

That comes in with the today part. Because how they looked then, has changed over the..years..Edits the underlining and "" parts. sweatdrop I'm a work in progress. cool

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:57 am


I wanna know what happens next.
O=
PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 1:43 pm


Im with tony!
surprised

Nice story
cool

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Bleeding Red Tears

PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:49 pm


..stsirw ym tils I]

I'll work on it in a little while. <3

[.llaf sraet der eht chtaw dna..
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