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Grimkiler

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 10:47 pm


There will be profanity and gore further along in the story.

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Part 1:THERAPY!!!

Dr. Iero sat down in one of the big seats by the fire place. He waited as his client came out of the kitchen. She was cleaning up after the morning’s meal. She walked into the room wiping her hands on her pants. She sat down in the chair across from her therapist.
“How are you today, Miss Eboni?”
“I’m not sure. I think it’s getting worse.”
“What’s worse?”
“My condition. I think I’m paranoid.”
“Why would you need to be paranoid?”
“There’s a guy. He walks around the house.”
“Can you describe what he looks like?”
“Um… a bit taller than me. Long black hair.”
“Anything else?”
“No, that’s about all I remember.”
“Does he say anything to you?”
“No, he just walks around. I think it was the same guy that murdered my family.”
“That was almost two years ago now, Eboni. Why would he be back?”
“I think he wants to kill me,” she whispered as if someone was listening.
“I’m sure you’re perfectly safe. They caught the bad guy last time, remember?”
“I think they got the wrong the guy,” Eboni whispered.
“Maybe you should leave the house every once in a while. Being locked in her isn’t helping your mental health,” Dr. Iero said.
“I’m perfectly fine!” Eboni screamed standing up and running up the stairs.
Dr. Iero sat there and let her calm down. Until he heard a scream come from above. He soon rushed up the stairs after her.
“Eboni!”
She was lying on her bedroom floor. A knife next to her. The window was open. As if someone jumped out. Dr. Iero looked out the window and found no one there. He quickly shut and locked it. He got on his phone calling for help to make sure his client didn’t die.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 11:57 am


Tee Hee, Frankie is a therapist! I like the story so far, keep going!

Punk vs Emo


[x] Natasha [x]

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 11:59 am


Oh wow! This seems very interesting.

Update soon!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 4:49 pm


Can't wait for the update! Haha, that rhymed...

moon_child_27


Grimkiler

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:52 pm


Part 2: The Incident...



Eboni was rushed to the hospital. Once they arrived, Dr. Iero waited patiently while they furiously worked to get blood back into her body. After twenty minutes of pacing in the waiting room, Dr. Iero was called by a nurse telling him that it was okay to see her now.

“Good to see you again, Frank,” the doctor in the room said.

“Hello, Daniel,” Frank mumbled.

“How’s being a therapist treating you?”

“It pays the bills.”

“Yah, I love my job though,” Daniel said as he put the clipboard back on the edge of the bed.

“Yah, I would think you would.”

“So what brings you here?”

“I was in a session with Eboni when she ran upstairs. I found her like that.”

“Oh, well she has suffered from multiple stab wounds to her abdomen area. I would expect her to be in the hospital for a while.”

“Okay, well I just have to make sure she is okay and then I can be on my way.”

“She’ll be fine, but could you stick around a bit so I can talk to you?”

“Um, sure,” Frank said as he started to walk out the door.

The stepped outside. Daniel put his arm around Frank.

“What ever happened to staying friends?”

“Compettion.”

“But why did we always have to see who would be on top?” Daniel asked.

“It’s a way of life. Now, I’m sorry I can’t ******** around. But I gotta go.”

“Yah call me sometime. We can meet up for some drinks.”

“Sure,” Frank said walking off.

“I’ll just call you,” Daniel said not sure if Frank heard him.

Frank was in a stressed out for the rest of the day.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 2:14 pm


Keep going!

Punk vs Emo


rainb0wpuke_

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:50 am


Frank is a theRAPIST. :]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:24 am


Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja

[x] Natasha [x]


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:36 am


[x] Natasha [x]
Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja


You are very strange.... *poke, poke*
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 9:22 am


BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja


You are very strange.... *poke, poke*

Haha, I know. xd

[x] Natasha [x]


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 9:36 am


[x] Natasha [x]
BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja


You are very strange.... *poke, poke*

Haha, I know. xd


*poke*
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:09 pm


BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja


You are very strange.... *poke, poke*

Haha, I know. xd


*poke*

*Giggles* Stop poking me! It tickles! xd

[x] Natasha [x]


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:11 pm


[x] Natasha [x]
BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
BREAK_down_CHILD
[x] Natasha [x]
Yupdate soon.

Yes, I meant to say yupdate. ninja


You are very strange.... *poke, poke*

Haha, I know. xd


*poke*

*Giggles* Stop poking me! It tickles! xd


*poke* *poke* *poke* *poke* (woah deja vu from Be my saviour)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:45 pm


ohh i likey, more!!!

stephy777


Grimkiler

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:48 pm


Part 3:The Betrayal

Dr. Harter (aka Daniel) calls his long time friend Frank he hadn’t seen in years and had just came by at the hospital.
“Hey Frank are you ready for tonight.”

“Well yah I guess…”

“I’ll be over in about 20 minutes to pick you up”

“Alright I’ll be waiting”

Daniel quickly rushes out the door grabbing his car keys on the way out. He arrives at Frank’s house and rushes up to the door and rings the door bell.

“Well you’re here earlier than I thought” says Frank surprised to see him.

“Well I said around 20 minutes”

“It’s been 12.”

“How am I supposed to know how long it takes me to drive to your house?”

“Well I dunno” he laughs a bit and grabs his jacket.

“Hop in to the car,” Daniel says nodding his head sideways.

Frank walks out with his coat and heads to the car.

“So what bar are we going to tonight?”

“Oh, it’s a new place that just opened up called 3 Cheers For No Last Call.”

“It sounds alright I guess?”

They pull up to the bar get out of Daniel’s car and head inside. A song started to play and Daniel quickly recognizes it.
“I know this song it’s that one song by The Harbor.”

“Oh, I haven’t heard that band before” Frank says listening to the music.

[[2 hours later and 14 beers later.]]
“Hey Frank” Daniel says nudging his arm with his elbow. “Check that girl out over there.”

Frank turns around and examines the girl and smirks a bit, “Heh.”

As Frank was turned around Daniel slips some knock out medication into Frank’s beer.

“Well,” Daniel says stretching his arms out. “I think its time for us to start heading home.”

“Yah, your right I’m so wasted I probably cant even make it to the car,” Frank laughs.

They head out to the car and they both step in as they started to pull away about a mile down the road Frank passes out in the passenger seat. Daniel drives toward the top of Mt. Charleston. He parks the car at the very top of the mountain right next to a massive cliff. He walks to the cliff and swigs the rest of his beer and throws the can off the cliff.

“Well if I’m going to do it I better do it here and now.”

Daniel heads back to the car and opens up the trunk and drags out a cinder block and places it next to the driver door. He walks over to Frank picks him up and places him in the drivers seat. He starts the car up and puts it in drive and tosses the brick into the car on the gas pedal. The car screeches forward and flies off the cliff.
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