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shouroux

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:08 pm



I hope you all like it!!

You are a broken boat sailing through the sea beyond my heart
I am your sail catching all the hopes and dreams the love,the tears and the cracks in between and helping you move on .
I am the wheel you brush your hands against my tender skin you feel my pain like you feel the wind I wish we could begin again but its too late.
I am the storm that will break the boards that stand between the hopeless fanasty and beautiful dream of us.

its not very long but i thought it waz kinda cute razz heart whee
it displays originality and it sounds so peaceful and calming when you say it slowly and pronounce evry word as passionetly as if you wrote it your self
pleases tell me what you think~!~ thank you from -shouroux
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:11 pm


shouroux

I hope you all like it!!

You are a broken boat sailing through the sea beyond my heart
I am your sail catching all the hopes and dreams the love,the tears and the cracks in between and helping you move on .
I am the wheel you brush your hands against my tender skin you feel my pain like you feel the wind I wish we could begin again but its too late.
I am the storm that will break the boards that stand between the hopeless fanasty and beautiful dream of us.

its not very long but i thought it waz kinda cute razz heart whee
it displays originality and it sounds so peaceful and calming when you say it slowly and pronounce evry word as passionetly as if you wrote it your self
pleases tell me what you think~!~ thank you from -shouroux




i really really love that cute short poem...its awesome it does show originality and it feels peaceful wen you read it i really like the part that says sea beyond my heart

~Maris la Traviesa~

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