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Zaber Blade

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:16 pm


I'm decided that, since everyone loved Code ANGEL so much, I'm going to write another epic serial of the series. The new series is in no way related to Code ANGEL (no Zaber character at all). It will be called Code SPIRAL, and will be a cross-over between the Code LYOKO series and an obscure, but awesome anime called "Spiral".

But I can't take all the credit for the storyline. Much of the story will be lifted directly from the storyline of Spiral, but cleverly adapted into the Lyoko universe. Seven new characters will join the cast... but Yumi, Ulrich, and Odd have moved away at the time of the story, leaving just Jeremy and Aelita.

But... if you assume those seven new characters will be on their side... you may be dead wrong...

Unlike Code ANGEL, I will post everything I write as soon as I write it. So rather than get one, big episode a week, you'll get three or four partial episodes across each week. This should help people who always were driven mad by my cliffhangers.

~CHAPTER INDEX~

4/15/07 ~~~ 01 - the spiral of destiny [Part 1] (Page 1, Post 2)
4/16/07 ~~~ 01 - the spiral of destiny [Part 2] (Page 1, Post 3)
4/22/07 ~~~ 02 - endless net [Part 1] (Page 1, Post 9)
5/03/07 ~~~ 02 - endless net [Part 2] (Page 2, Post 6)
5/03/07 ~~~ 03 - cursed children [Part 1] (Page 2, Post 7)
5/09/07 ~~~ 03 - cursed children [Part 2] (Page 2, Post 14)
5/12/07 ~~~ 03 - cursed children [Part 3] (Page 3, Post 5)
5/22/07 ~~~ 04 - those who believe [Part 1] (Page 4, Post 1)
5/24/07 ~~~ 04 - those who believe [Part 2] (Page 4, Post 7)
5/25/07 ~~~ 04 - those who believe [Part 3] (Page 4, Post 8 )
6/01/07 ~~~ 05 - misty gallows [Part 1] (Page 5, Post 5)
6/03/07 ~~~ 05 - misty gallows [Part 2] (Page 5, Post 9)
6/05/07 ~~~ 06 - blind spot [Full Episode] (Page 6, Post 2)
6/08/07 ~~~ 07 - nonbeliever [Full Epsiode] (Page 6, Post 8 )
6/12/07 ~~~ 08 - disarming fate [Full Episode] (Page 8, Post 5)
6/12/07 ~~~ 09 - the hunters [Full Episode] (Page 8, Post 6)
6/17/07 ~~~ 10 - overture [Full Episode] (Page 9, Post 9)
7/31/07 ~~~ 12 - moving targets [Full Episode] (Page 12, Post 5)
7/31/07 ~~~ 13 - maze of death [Full Episode] (Page 12, Post 6)
7/31/07 ~~~ 14 - lamenting angel [Full Episode] (Page 12, Post 7)


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~UPDATES~

6/12/07 - Posted Episode 8 & 9
6/8/07 - Posted Episode 7
6/5/07 - Posted Episode 6
6/4/07 - Added Screenshots on Page 5
6/3/07 - Posted Episode 5.2
6/1/07 - Posted Episode 5.1
5/25/07 - Posted Episode 4.3
5/24/07 - Posted Episode 4.2
5/22/07 - Posted Episode 4.1
5/12/07 - Posted Episode 3.3
5/9/07 - Posted Episode 3.2
5/3/07 - Posted Episode 2.2, Episode 3.1
4/22/07 - Posted Episode 2.1
4/16/07 - Posted Episode 1.2
4/15/07 - Established Thread, Posted Episode 1.1
PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:20 pm


01 - spiral of destiny [Part 1]

The new school year was beginning. It was now their Junior year, and much had changed. For one reason or another, the group has been split. Yumi, Ulrich, and Odd had either moved or been transferred to other schools. It was just Jeremy and Aelita now, and things were far more difficult. Aelita had changed most drastically... she had begun to grow her hair long, and it now stretched to slightly below her shoulders. She had also found herself near sighted, and now wore glasses strictly for reading and the like. Xana's attacks had become no less frequent, but they seemed less intense, as if Xana was for some strange reason compensating for their lack of numbers.

On the first day of school, Jeremy sat at the breakfast table. Many unfamiliar students were present in the cafeteria. A school in the next town over had burned down over the summer, and many of the students had been temporarily transfrerred to Catic. One had spiky red hair, yellow tinted sunglasses, and wore a long-sleeve shirt colored both dark green and black. He was not eating, and simply sat there, idly playing with a deck of cards stitting on the table in front of him. A freshman girl sat at the far end of their own table, her silver pigtails flailing as she eagerly chomped into a piece of watermelon. About a dozen others he didn't recognize dotted the room. Jeremy glanced at the clock on his computer. It was 7:58. If Aelita didn't get here soon, she would have no time to get any breakfast. Little did he know, breakfast was the least of Aelita's worries.

Aelita wasn't the only student missing from the cafeteria. One of the new
transfer students was taking a nap on the open roof of the science
building. He had eratic brown hair, and wore a pair of blue pants and a
blue jacket/blazer, with a cream color shirt beneath it. He snored gently,
but was awoken when an alarm went off on his watch. It was 8:00, and he figured he should probably go and get some breakfast. His name was Ayumu Narumi, and he was a junior at the academy as of today... having come from the burned school. He had a thing for rooftops... he found sleeping on top of them quiet and peaceful... and no one bothered him there. He made his way to the edge of the building, intending to take the small ladder down from the roof to the third floor landing.

Aelita hurried up the stairs of the science building towards the third
floor landing. She panted as she quickned her pace even more... she was
late, a small piece of paper clenched tightly in her hand. She arrived on
the third floor landing, she said, "OK Jeremy! I'm here!" But found
herself alone on the landing. She looked around confused... she hadn't
expected Jeremy to skip out on something like this... She stared off into
the distance, but could not see it clearly without her glasses. She pulled her glasses case from her hoody pocket...

As Ayumu stepped onto the last rung of the short ladder, he heard a scream from nearby.
"Huh?" He exclaimed as he stepped onto the floor and quickly rounded the
corner. The landing was empty... the guard rail missing. "That's dangerous..." He muttered as he stepped towards the edge and looked over it. A delivery truck was parked below, a large dent had appeared on the edge opposite the building. A small crowd was encircling the small area from around the truck, and someone screamed. Jim stood there, crouched over a pink haired girl Ayumu didn't know, who had apparently fallen. Shattered fragments of her glasses had flown several yards... and the guard rail lay a few feet away from her. Jim looked up from Aelita, who was completely unconcious, up to the landing upon which Ayumu stood.
"YOU! DID YOU DO THIS?!?! DID YOU PUSH HER OFF THERE?!?!" Jim screamed up at him, and every eye and acusatory finger in the crowd shot towards Ayumu, who simply stared down in shock.

Zaber Blade


Zaber Blade

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:08 pm


01 - spiral of destiny [Part 2]

Nearly a half-hour later, Ayumu sat in the principal's office. He had been detained by Jim almost immediately after the incident, and Aelita had been carried by ambulance to the hospital. The truck below had acted as a cushion, and for the most part, her injuries were minor. She was unconcious, but the doctors said she would be fine. Jim stood in the corner, glaring at him, as the principal sat inside his office, conversing with the police. Ayumu groaned. He hadn't done anything, but he knew that it didn't look good for him. Another police officer arrived, with Jeremy in tow. Jeremy had learned of Aelita's accident mere minutes after it had happened, but had for some reason been detained by the police, and wasn't allowed to go with Aelita to the hospital. Jeremy glared at Ayumu. As far as Jeremy was concerned, Ayumu HAD pushed Aelita... and the first opportunity he had alone with the guy, things were going to get violent. The officer who had brought Jeremy stepped into the office, conversed with the principal for a breif moment, and then two officer stepped out, gesturing for Jeremy and Ayumu to enter as the flanked the door. Jim followed them in and shut the door behind them. The officer who had brought Jeremy sat at one end of the principals table with a tablet, ready to take notes. The prinicpal sat grimly with his arms crossed as Jeremy and Ayumu sat down at the two chairs, and there was an awkward silence.

"Well..." The principal said. "I have no clue where to begin here." The principal stood up and closed the blinds of the large picture window behind his desk. "You two are crazy to think you would get away with this."
"Pardon me?" Jeremy asked.
"The two of you planned this." The principal said. "He pushed her while you lured her onto the balcony with this." The principal passed him a piece of paper that had been found on Aelita.

Aelita... meet me on the fifth floor landing of the Science building at 8:00. I have a surprise for you. Love, Jeremy

Jeremy stared at the note.
"I... I didn't write this!!!" Jeremy exclaimed angrilly.
"DO NOT RAISE YOUR VOICE!" Jim shouted at him as he nudged the back of Jeremy's chair violently. Jim was unusually grim and serious.
"I had nothing to do with this either." Ayumu said with his arms crossed and his eyes closed.
"Who the hell do you think you're fooling!?!?" Jim said as he stepped in front of Ayumu's chair and gripped him on the shoulders, shaking him. "I saw everything!"
"Jim!" The principal rose out of his seat. "Calm yourself!" Jim relaxed slightly and released his grip on Ayumu. The principal sighed. "Ayumu Narumi, yes?" The principal asked his name.
"That's me." Ayumu muttered. "I just transferred here."
"That's why I can't understand it. You didn't even know her, so why did you try to kill her?"
"I didn't. I was taking a nap on the roof and I was on my way down when I heard a scream, so I ran to see what had happen and then I found the empty landing with the guard rail missing."
"You claim you were the only one on the landing?" The principal asked him suspiciously.
"I was the only one. It was only me." Ayumu said non-chalantly.
"Then is had to have been you!" Jeremy shouted at him.
"Well?" The principal offered Ayumu a chance to respond.
"I was the only one who could have pushed her." Ayumu said.
"Ah ha! A confession!" Jim exclaimed.
"No. I'm just saying I'm the only who could have PUSHED her."
"So... wait... are you saying she just... fell?" Jim said, confused.
"Brilliant deduction... you get a cookie." Ayumu shot at him sarcastically.
"Why you little!!!" Jim stepped towards Ayumu menacingly.
"Jim! Why don't you just go stand outside? You're a little bit too worked up over this..." The principal ordered him, and Jim stepped out of the room with a grunt of dissent.

"Even if you didn't push her, that still leaves the matter of the note." The principal turned to Jeremy. "I'll admit it was a bit premature of me to jump to the conclusion that you wrote the note. I'll ask the police to run a handwriting comparrison between the note and some of your papers, and if you're telling the truth it will come up negative. Samantha did tell me you were very close to Aelita, so I was a bit suspicous of a motive in you anyway. Is there anyone you can think of that might want to do this to her?" The principal asked him. Jeremy knew of one perfect candiate... Xana. And to be honest, the specs made sense... a dissapearing murderer, luring Aelita up to the landing... Jeremy suddenedly realized that Ayumu was most likely telling the truth, and was just a bystander in all of this. But he coulnd't tell anyone who the real culprit was.
"No sir. No one." Jeremy answered.
"Then I'm afraid you, Mr. Narumi... are the prime suspect." The principal turned from Jeremy to Ayumu.
"I don't know how many time you want me to say it. I didn't do it." Ayumu mutterred. "And you don't have any concrete proof to have me arrested either." The police officer, who had been transcribing the entire conversation, glanced up at him with a glare. Ayumu had hit the nail on the head. The principal folded his arms.
"If that's all you have to say... then fine. When Aelita regains conciousness, we will know what really happened." The principal gestured them towards the door. "For now you are both free to go." Ayumu and Jeremy stood up and walked out of the room, passing a mutterring Jim who was sitting in the waiting room, his arms crossed.

Jeremy immediately made his way to the hospital. The incident had prompted the delay of the school year until the next day. When he arrived, he found Aelita resting peacefully. The nurses refused to allow him to wake her, but assured him she was fine. As Jeremy sat at the bedside, he pulled out his laptop. To his surprise, he found that no tower had been activated. Xana's lack of involvement was distubring to Jeremy. It could only mean one thing... Ayumu has to be involved. He remained with Aelita for about half-an-hour, and then made his way back to the school. He located Ayumu's dorm room, which was located in the old room of Odd and Ulrich. He knocked on the door, and Ayumu answered it, opening the door only a crack.
"What do you want?" Ayumu asked him.
"I want to talk to you." Jeremy said calmly. Ayumu opened the door the rest of the way.
"Alright, what?"
"I was checking up on another lead about what happened to her, and it came up empty. You're the only suspect I have left." Jeremy said, trying to stay calm and resisting the urge to deck the guy.
"I told you before, I didn't do it."
"Why should I believe you?"
"Look... will you get off my case if I help you figure this thing out?" Ayumu offered. "Fighting amongst ourselves isn't going to do anything. Jeremy stared at him suspicously.
"Fine." Jeremy stepped out of the room, and Ayumu followed him, shutting the door. "What do you think you'll find anyway?"
"We're going to go back and examine the scene more closely... maybe we can find something the police missed." Ayumu muttered. "The question is time. If someone actually pushed her, they would have to have reached the bottom of the staircase before she hit the ground. That's physically in possible unless they jumped down the five stories safely without anyone seeing them." Jeremy suddenedly froze in his tracks, slapping himself on the forehead. Time. Of course. All he had to do was launch a return to the past and Aelita wouldn't get injured at all, and they could lay a trap for her attacker. But, as if to respond to his thoughts, his laptop alarm went off. Jeremy ripped it off his shoulders and flipped it open, revealing the super-scan displaying an activated tower. His mind emmitted an explative. He couldn't launch a return without deactivating the tower. He couldn't deactivate the tower without Aelita, who was currently detained at the hospital. Jeremy grimmaced at the dire actions Xana could carry out with that tower while he could do nothing.
"Hey! Are you coming or not?" Ayumu called to him from the end of the hall. Jeremy shook himself out of it and shut his laptop as he hurried down the hall. There was simply nothing he could do about the tower, but he could still further investigate Aelita's "accident".

Jeremy walked up to the third floor landing from which Aelita had fallen, where Ayumu was already standing, surverying the area. Jeremy had been examining things closely down below. He had only found the shards of Aelita's glasses lying about. He had expected to perhaps find some clues, but he found nothing else out of the ordinary. Ayumu turned to him from the missing guard rail.
"Well?" Ayumu asked him.
"Nothing." Jeremy replied. Ayumu shut his eyes and groaned.
"Can you think of anything else out of the ordinary?" He asked. Jeremy pondered this for a moment. He stuck his hands in his pockets, which brushed against the plastic bag in which he was sealed the glass shards he had recovered.
"Well... when she fell, she was wearing her glasses. She hates wearing them... she only puts them on when she needs to see something far away..." Jeremy said quitely as he continued to think. "But what was she trying to see from up here?" Ayumu and Jeremy both stared at the ground below, but Ayumu was suddenedly struck with a realization.
"That's it." He said quietely as he turned and walked back down the stairs. Jeremy followed him with surprise.
"What do you mean?"
"The notes of truth are starting to play. Call the principal... I've solved this crime."

An hour later, Ayumu and Jeremy stood in the principal's office. Jim and the police officer from earlier stood behind him, the sun beginning to set through the large picture window behind his desk.
"OK... what is this about boys?" The principal asked them.
"I've solved this crime." Ayumu said.
"We solved this crime." Jeremy added.
"No, I solved it. You just ran a chemical test to verify something." Ayumu shot back. "The point is... we know who is really responsible for this attempted murder."
"So you've come to confess?!?!" Jim said as he stepped up to the desk.
"Not today." Ayumu smiled. "Jeremy, if you'd care to begin..."
"We know that Aelita wasn't pushed... she fell." Jeremy picked up.
"You've got some strange theories..." The policeman responded.
"Because what happened was unique..." Ayumu answered. "And behind every unique occurance is something so normal that most people don't see it." Ayumu drew a pair of sunglasses out of his pocket. "This is the trick the criminal used. The invisible hands that were used to push Aelita off that landing." He placed the glasses on his face.
"What are you talking about?" The principal questioned him.
"It all began with the note." Ayumu ignored him.
"The criminal forged the note from me and had it reach Aelita." Jeremy broke in. "That got her to the scene of the crime. But when she got there, she was expecting to meet me, but there was no one there."
"But then she saw someone waving up to her three stories below. She couldn't tell who it was." Ayumu picked up. "She's near-sighted, so to see who it was off in the distance, she pulled out her glasses and put them on. That's the trick."
"What?" Jim asked. "You're not making any sense."
"Imagine what would happen if you switched out a near-sighted girl's glasses with a far-sighted prescription... it can be incredibly disorienting." Ayumu explained.
"Aelita lost her balance because of it, so she grabbed the nearest thing by instinct, which was the railing." Jeremy continued.
"But the would-be-killer moddified the railing beforehand... making it no sturdier than a leaf in the breeze." Ayumu finished.
"But that still doesn't explain who did it! It could have been anyone at that point!" The policeman exclaimed. "And what proof do you have?"
"Jeremy's analysis shows that glass shards found at the seen match the far-sighted prescription." Ayumu explained.
"And I found Aelita's real glasses intact in her hoody pocket, even though her glasses shattered when she fell.
"But that was the criminal's one mistake. After she fell, he tried to switch the doctored glasses with her usual pair." Ayumu pulled the glasses off and put them back in his pocket. "There was only one person who was close enough to her after she fell to make the switch." Ayumu glanced at Jim, who was standing in the corner, hands in his pockets. "And I noticed when you dragged Jeremy in earlier..." Ayumu grabbed Jim by the wrist and wrenched his hand out of his pocket, holding it up for all to see. All his fingers but the thumb and pinky had fresh bandages. "You cut your fingers on the shattered glass!" Jim girtted his teeth as he ripped his arm away from Ayumu as the principal and the police officer bolted upright.
"As a plus, he was in a perfect position to plant the note during his nighttime patrols." Ayumu said as he placed his own hands in his pockets and walked towards the door. Jeremy was still stunned. Although Ayumu had explained everything to him over the phone while he had run the analysis, it still blew his mind. But there was still one, critical piece missing from the puzzle. But before Jeremy could ask it, the principal beat him to the punch.
"But Jim... why?!?!" The principle exclaimed in disbelief as the policeman approached Jim with handcuffs. Jim closed his eyes for an instant, still gitting his teeth. When his eyes opened, Jeremy scarcely had time to glimpse the Xana-marks in his eyes before Jim thrust himself through the large window, which shattered with ease. Jim bolted across the grounds as the policeman pulled his gun and fired at him, but every shot missed. The principal, officer, and Ayumu stared with awe. Jeremy was not nearly as surprised... he had seen this before... but it was still an unexpected turn of events. The officer was the first to shake himself from the shock, pulling out a walkie-talkie.
"Calling all cars, this is an all-points bulletin. Subject is Jim Morales, wanted for assault and attempted murder." The officer spoke into the device as he hurried out of the room. "Physical description... an overweight, middle-aged man in a red t-shirt and blue shorts with brown hair. Subject is dangerous and may be armed. Approach with caution." The officer's voice faded away as he went down the hall. The principal fell backwards into his chair, breathless. Ayumu turned towards Jeremy.
"What the hell was that?" Ayumu tried to ask him, but Jeremy had slipped out of the room before the officer had.

Jeremy sat in his room, worriedly keying on his computer. It was simple... Xana had found a hole in the super-scan. There had been an activated tower since last night, and it's appearence on the super-scan had been delayed. That meant that Xana had controlled Jim throughout the entire thing, and that the real Jim had no part in this but as a puppet. Jeremy patched the hole, but it was no good. Aelita wouldn't be able to go to Lyoko to deactiavte the tower until she was let out of the hospital in two days. And by that time, the window in which they could launch a return to the past would have expired. Xana had beaten them.

Jim stood, hunched over in a phone booth several miles away in the next town over, having evaded the police with his Xanafied powers. A strong, steady rain had begun. Jim dialed a number, and the phone rang thrice before it was picked up.
"Hello?" A male voice spoke in a slight British accent.
"I am looking for... the blade children." Jim spoke, his voice twisted by possession.
"Are you a hunter?" The voice responded
"No... my name is Xana. I require your... assistance. Your organization specializes in making people... dissapear."
"And why should we help you?"
"I know you are in sore need of funding... but that's not all. I also have information."
"Regarding what?"
"Kiyotaka's brother... and more importantly... Franz Hopper." Jim said with a grin. The voice on the other end of the line gasped slightly, but then quickly regained his composure.
"Very well." The voice responded. "What are the details?"
"There are three targets... two boys and a girl... at Catic Academy..."
"It will be easy... three of our number are already present at that school."
"You need not worry about police involvement... I will assist you in that respect. I have... resources."
"I do not understand why you require OUR assistance..." The voice muttered. "If you are indeed the Xana of which Hopper spoke of... something so simple should be easy for you."
"I will contact you again when it is time to carry out the job. I shall explain at length then. When the job is done... you will get your information."
"Very well. We... the blade children... will carry out your will." The connection died, as the other side of the line hung up the phone. Jim grinned as he hung up the phone, then walked out of the phone booth into the torrential rains... dissapearing into the mist and spray.

To be continued...
PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 6:08 pm


You make the most god-damn annoying cliffhangers. The only more annoying ones are in the Pendragon series. A climactic point occurs but it's the end of his journel.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:46 pm


i dont really watch spiral that much... but i can kind of follow along. i like it. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:27 pm


that was nice to read a half hour before bedtime... if i get any nightmares i'm gonna blame you! oh well.. i like scary dreams

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Zaber Blade

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 5:39 pm


krapolaonastick
that was nice to read a half hour before bedtime... if i get any nightmares i'm gonna blame you! oh well.. i like scary dreams


Sorry about that... I'm going to write a ton more tonight. I lucked out when I went to a flea market...

- 4 DVD's of Spiral for $7.00 each (Regular Price: $19.99 each)
- 2 PS2 Skins for $1.00 each (Regular Price: $10.00 each)
- Yugioh! World Championship 2007 for $20.00 (Regular Price: $29.99)
- Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion for $10 (Regular Price: $49.99)

HAHAHAHA! I am a FREAKING genius when it comes to finding bargains! Anyways, those are why I've been so deleayed at writing Code SPIRAL episode 2. I'll tell you the titles though...

02 - perfect net
03 - cursed children
04 - those who believe
05 - deception
06 - hole in the web
07 - rebound
08 - disarming fate
09 - melody of logic
10 - the hunted
11 - moving targets
12 - sharpening wit
13 - lamenting angel
14 - whispering shadows
15 - shooting fallen starts
16 - within his shadow
17 - schorched fate
18 - clarity
19 - desperation
20 - redemption
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:47 pm


YAY!!! more.... krap... if i get addicted to this i am blameing canada and my little brother

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:50 am


Code SPIRAL 02 - endless net [Part 1]

Two days later, Jeremy eagerly walked into Aelita's hospital room with a box of chocolates behind his back, and a smile on his face. Jeremy had spent the last two days in a near constant panic. At any time, he knew that Xana could release his hold on Jim and put the activated tower to far more devious use. Yet for some reason, Xana did not. As far as Jeremy could tell, Xana was still in possession of Jim, who was seemingly just sitting in hiding somewhere. The extended time that Jeremy had been able to observe and analyze the tower had proven to be extremely useful... Jeremy had gathered a large amount of data that he suspected he could use down the road. Aelita had finally recovered enough to be released from the hospital. As soon as they were clear, he and Aelita were going straight to the factory to shut down the tower.
"Good morning!" Jeremy exclaimed enthusiastically to Aelita as he passed her the box of chocolates. She smiled.
"Thank you." She replied as she sat the box down next to her on the bed. Even after recovering in the hospital, she was still shaken by her brush with death two days prior. "Has Jim resurfaced at all?"
"I'm afraid not... and that's probably best. Even if we launch a return to the past, it's way too late. After he's free, I'm sure Jim will probably just show up at the school, having no clue what happened... then he'll just be arrested and charged with trying to kill you." Jeremy replied mellowly. "But I fixed the hole in the super-scan... Xana won't be able to pull this stunt again."
"That's good..." Aelita sighed as she slid out of the hospital bed. "Did you take care of the paperwork?"
"Yeah... a quick call from "Mrs. Stones" in Canada, and you're cleared to leave." Jeremy said simply. "Are you ready?"
"Yes." Aelita answered, opening the box of chocolates as they walked out of the room.

Half an hour later, Aelita effortlessly deactivated the tower. Jeremy stared at the terminal nervously.
"That was... too easy..." He muttered.
"It's like he wanted us to take out this tower." Aelita added from inside the tower on Lyoko. "Do you think he was simply done with it?"
"That's what it looks like to me." Jeremy answered her. "He certainly got a point on us that time... maybe if I were to amplify the power surge to the return program I could extend the length of the jump..."
"Jeremy, if you do that, Xana would become so much more powerful... I thought of that too, so I ran some caculations." Aelita said as she interfaced with a window. "There's a 50% chance that if we do that, Code LYOKO won't work anymore. We can't risk that." Jeremy sighed. "Alright... I'm bringing you in."

Jeremy dropped Aelita off at her room, made sure she was still OK, and then took the stairs up to the boys dormotories. He rounded the corner only to see Ayumu, lying limp in the hall, slumped agains the wall with a newspaper draped over his face. Jeremy assumed that something must have happened... there was no real explanation for why he'd be sitting in the hall like that. Jeremy rushed over to him, pulling the newspaper away.
"Ayumu! Ayumu, are you OK? What happened?" Jeremy shook him as he shouted. Ayumu, who had had a content look on his face, frowned as his eyes opened.
"What now?" He asked, irritated.
"Huh..." Jeremy stammered, confused. "What... why are you sleeping out in the hall?"
"I have a thing for sleeping weird places, OK? Rooftops, hallways, closets..."
"I... I just thought that something had happened to you..."
"Nope." Ayumu stood up and opened the door to his room a few feet away. "Sorry to dissapoint you." Ayumu closed the door, and Jeremy heard a distinct clicking sound from the door. Jeremy simply walked down to his room, somewhat bewildered. As he opened his door, he saw the answering machine on his desk was blinking. He hit the button as he sat down and booted up his computer.

"You have 2 new messages. Message 1... Hey Jeremy!" Jeremy heard Ulrich's voice coming from the machine. "I heard Aelita got hurt pretty bad a few days ago... I don't know what I can do to help... but it'd be
nice if you would keep us a bit more up to date. Yumi, Odd and I are really worried... call me back when you get this message if you're not to busy..." Jeremy sighed. Even though the three of them had moved away, they still occassionaly kept in contact, and the few global scale Xana attacks they had to deal with still affected them as well. Jeremy decided he'd call Ulrich back later when he heard the second message.

"Massage 2... Jeremy, it's me." Jeremy was startled to hear his father's voice. His father didn't call that often, and not without good reason. "I wanted to let you know, you'll be seeing a lot more of me. I got the call yesterday, I'm being transferred. I'll be working at the Catic city police department now. It'll be great... we can finally spend some time with eachother and such. I'll be swinging by to visit you later today after I get my breifing at the station. I'll see you around five o'clock then. Bye." The messages ended. Jeremy felt a mixture of emotions. His father being close by and spending more time with him would be nice... but having a close-by parent to deal with would make dealing with Xana a bit tougher.

"Mr. Belpois... do you know why you were transferred here?" Said the police chief as he breifed Jeremy's father in his office.
"No sir... it wasn't clearly explained to me..." He replied as he sat on the other side of the desk, arms crossed.
"Your skills as an investigator have gotten you a reputation... and we have a few problems we need you to solve..." The police cheif said grimly. "Two days ago... a respected teacher at Catic Academy tried to
murder a student. The suspect is Jim Morales, and he is at large. We need to find him... but that's not all."
"What do you mean by that?"
"The girl he tried to kill... her name is Aelita Stones. When she was hospitalized, as a matter of course, the school hander her records over to the hospital and police. I was trying to determine the motive, so I did some investigating myself. Do you know what I found?"
"What?"
"Nothing. Her passport... medical records... birth certificate... all FORGED. It is as if she simply appeared from nowhere a few years ago. I have no clue how to proceed... I want you to investigate into the girl's origins and why Morales tried to kill her. Understand?" The chief finished. Jeremy's father nodded . This was certainly quite the puzzle. But he would deal with it at length later. It had been nearly a year since he had seen his son, and he didn't want to be late.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 9:03 pm


yay! more! this is getting really good

krapolaonastick


Zaber Blade

PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 4:54 pm


A few notes...

- In the series, it's never revealed what Jeremy's father actualy does. For story purposes, I decided to make him a police inspector. The reason for this is releated to the SPIRAL storyline.
- Come on... you all knew it was only a matter of time before Jeremy and Aelita got busted.
- Yumi, Odd, and Ulrich will pop up on occassion, although they won't be part of the action. They appear mainly in phone conversations or messages, like in 2.1.
- A major character will die. I refuse to tell you who for now...
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 7:50 pm


is sissy gonna die? i want that to happen

krapolaonastick


Zaber Blade

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 4:43 pm


krapolaonastick
is sissy gonna die? i want that to happen


Hm... I never consider Sissy a "main character". Try someone who's already playing a role in Code SPIRAL.

twisted I love making people guess.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:20 pm


You know. Your storyline is practically boosted from Spiral. I don't think that you would kill off Aelita. You've done that before. It could possibly be Jeremy. Or Ayumu. Or XANA. I've only watched up to episode six of Spiral so I can think of only three Blade Children.

Bard of Lore


krapolaonastick

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:36 pm


will... jim die?
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