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 Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:18 pm
Alrighty. I was in my first car wreck today. Needless to say it HAD to happen on Friday the 13th... Not to mention I JUST got my driver's liscence today... >_> I was in tears you guys. I felt like such an amateur behind the wheel, like one of those dumb teenagers you hear eldery folks complaining should stay off the road. crying crying crying It's just not fair!!! Why'd I have to crash my BRAND NEW CAR that I've only had for TWO WEEKS on FRIDAY THE THIRTEENTH ON THE FREAKIN' DAY I GOT MY FREAKIN' LICSENCE?!?!?!?! gonk scream crying burning_eyes evil stare gonk crying scream I'm not even supersticious... however you spell that... Ahhhh well. At least no one was hurt... BUT STILL!!!!
Needless to say, I was in a very depressing dark mood after my Fasha had taken me home... So... I wrote what I think is one of my darkest poems ever written. Read the whole poem, including the lines in parenthesis first, then the poem without the lines in parenthesis and then just the lines in the parenthesis... Then, maybe you will understand the poem a bit better like I have. 3nodding Well... Enjoy.
Die In Me
I feel like a monster
All torn up inside
A hideous beast
But you don’t need to hide
(My sanity slowly breaks apart)
I feel a desperate need
To sit atop a hill
Regain my strength
To once again kill
(If my heart stops beating…)
Angry and forgotten
Running from the pain
Ridding horrid thoughts
Yet all in vain
(Will it revive your heart?)
Carelessly dying
The forest is chilly
The sight of your dead body
Is comically silly
(I know even now that you can speak)
Laugh to the stars
Who needs to feel?
These pains I know
Can’t possibly be real
(Even in the heavens)
Closing my eyes
I will return
But until then
In hell you will burn
(We were always weak)
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:35 pm
Truly dark and electrifying words you write upon this page! I Love this! I can't wait to see what else you're going to write! ^_^
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 3:32 pm
if i had a third hand, id give u three thumbs up
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:03 am
I Love The Poem! Lots Of Feeling In It. Keep Writing!!!!
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:55 pm
Love it.
Love it, love it, love it!
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 6:59 am
That was seriously... awesome. I think I'm gonna go read it again now xd
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