Hi, I'm new, and I'm Zilithandria Kitty! My favourite colour is blue, I'm sixteen years old, and although I never finish anything I like to write stories and poems!

Example 1:

"Touch the sky and fall,
Touch the earth and fly,
Death's beauty,
And life's deformation;
And so in Hell,
Shall I see your Sinner's form,
For in this is the essence within The Dark Rose."

Example 2:

"She ran accross the bridge, barely gancing down at the water below rushing through the gorge, nor up at the twilight sky and the moon lighting her with kindly worry, trying to help by showing as much of the footing as possible. She knew that if she slipped just once on the rickety old bridge, never again would she be seen on the face of this earth, for she would be swept away forever in the ever running current, and yet she could risk standing still. The man that chased her with evil intent was not far behind, and even at that moment she worried that he might cut the ropes ending in her death. As she peered over her shoulder to see how far ahead she was, and saw that she had yet to remove herself from the sight of that mad man, she felt a gentle breeze caress her cheek as if attempting to comfort."

So anywayz please tell me what you think (Example 2 I made up on the spot biggrin biggrin ) of the two examples?
OKay well I dunno what to say now so I'll just post this thing and begone smile