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 Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:48 am
Ello, This is my first attempt at makign a thread. I love poetry and I wanted to make a thread that allowed everyone to enjoy it too. Feel free to post your poems or song lryics here. I don't have many rules but I'm sure that will change.
Rules
1. Kept it pg-13. Yuki's rule so follow it!
2. I don't care what your work is about as long as it's not exteremly sexual, or too graphic.
3. Expect critizism, I will not tolerate arguing and fighting!
exclaim WARNING:I was depressed when I wrote these poems if you are offened I'm sorry. Yuki or Mods, if you dislike anything I post on here tell me and I will remove it.
This is an edit from Yuki ^_^ Don't worry about if we dislike anything. It's your work and you can keep it here. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 5:59 pm
ohh i got a few deppreing and deep ones i've written 3nodding whee
now i just gotta find em gonk
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 6:01 pm
In the darkness
is where I dwell
in the darkest
pits of hell
I'll steal your soul
I'll make you mine
play with your mind
and make you crazy with time
for I am your master
you are my slave
you'll do as I say
till I'm dead in my grave
forever you'll be
under my own command
for you are my own
your soul has been damned.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:58 am
xTierx In the darkness is where I dwell in the darkest pits of hell I'll steal your soul I'll make you mine play with your mind and make you crazy with time for I am your master you are my slave you'll do as I say till I'm dead in my grave forever you'll be under my own command for you are my own your soul has been damned. *snaps fingers* good poem! i respect poets alot! good job...i like your style...has a baby goth feel to it
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 4:18 am
This world is full of love and wonder
But today i've stopped to think and ponder
Every soul has something to hide
A secret, a demon, trapped inside
The light withers, the darkness grows
Why this happens? No-one knows
The once beautiful world, all the love and light
got dragged away, into the night
This world is full of love and wonder
And now i will question this world no longer.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:36 am
exclaim Warning: This next poem is long and will contain graphic protrays of rape. exclaim
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:48 am
I make myself
close my eyes
and drift away
to the hell in my mind
In the dark
I see myself
tears splash down
into a puddle of red
Straped, restrained
gagged till I'm mute
eye looking feverishly
for the one who did this
No one in sight
untill suddenly
two red dots
appear before me
A row of teeth
flash through the dark
in what I make out
to be a wicked grin
A hand reaches out
and is placed on my breast
my muted screams and struggles
won't put this to rest
the hand moves down
just like the tears
and then I dream of
one of my worst fears
the red eyed figure
starts to laugh
and turns my head
with one quick slap
and after that
I realized
that this one fear
has come to life
with one quick thrust
he penetrated
and all that was sacred
had just been taken
with every struggle
harder it went
so I looked away
and silently wept
the worst was over
or so I thought
until he laughed again
then went the first cut
he cut my flesh
until he saw fit
and left my naked body
in a drak bloody pit
left alone in the dark
I see my myself
tears splash down
into a sea of red
I wake up
in a cold swear
gasping for air
I clinch my chest
The third time
the image in my mind
has haunted my dreams
and disrupted my sleep
I live alone now
but I no longer cry
I live alone
with the color red in my eyes.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:53 am
"Lies" by: me
The world around us
its nothing but a lie
hidden from us
there lies, the truth
hidden in darkness
and consumbed with evil
It lies between us
us and the truth...that is kept from us
we might not see it
but its there
Twisted with the darkness within
Evil for how it is
How we act
How we are
What comes apon us
From the shadows
At night
When the clock striks midnight
Its there
It always had been
But it was kept from us
hidden in the shodows
Concelded in darkness
and hidden from us
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:58 am
*bows*clap*Beautiful poem! Had a slight mistake in one line but good none the less xp
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:59 am
My Love
Words exchanged
and feelings known
but you don't care
you raise your fist
and scream that i'm wasting your time
the fourth time
in two weeks
that hand has struck my face
i cry at night
both for and against you
and hope you'll listen in time
but now no more
these are my last words to you
maybe if i shed all my blood
you'll stop trying so hard to
remember the hospital
when the doctor asked what happened
"she got pushed down the stairs" you said
now tell that to your child
the one that was never born
the two-month old in my stomach
you kicked eleven times
i tried to tell you that day
but you yelled at hit my down
well when you read this poem
i won't be getting up
you can find me in the bathroom
in the tub overflowing with blood
i've goen to join our child
good-bye my only love.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 1:32 pm
i'd post some of mine, but they.... suck sad
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 1:33 pm
*strangles gaia* dammit stop giving me sushi! i don't like it! scream
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:21 pm
meek guess not many people here like wrting poetry xp oh well i at least tried xp
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:31 pm
figured i'd post a haiku dedicated to all mothers:
Children playing games
Noisy and loud, all day long
Sex tonight? Fat chance...
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:33 pm
Ninjara figured i'd post a haiku dedicated to all mothers: Children playing games Noisy and loud, all day long Sex tonight? Fat chance... i think i shall too... Smurfs and Whipped Creami hate giant smurfs
without onions i would die
please kill me right now. xp and here's some neato lymrics i made up! there once was a girl named kyla pratt
who liked to sit on a hill with her cat
one time late at night
she got such a fright
and fell off the hill with a splatreynold gregory woad
ate til he bulged like a toad
one day he bought twenty
stale pies for a penny
and the twentieth made him explodethere once was a fisher named Fisher
who liked to fish for fish in the fissure
a fish snagged his pole
and he fell in the hole
now they're searching the fissure for Fisher
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