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RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:27 pm




Welcome to my [Lab 305] Semi-Custom Raevan Quest! This is my first time questing for a breedable as well as just participating in such a fascinating area of Gaia.

I first came to notice the Lab when my Xiao shop buddy Shuura came prancing in with Vyn. I have been interested ever since and am pursuing a spot within the Lab role play!

Update:

2.11.09 - Working out some things...

- Grey wolf it is. >8D Maybe I'll just be retarded (or slick) and insert some myth into the raevan. That makes me more happy. XD After the con I am expecting to rewrite portions of this quest and redo some of the banners. D: SO old!

On 6.8.08 I asked what I should explore more and the sast Poll says:
Io's Powers: 4
Io's Alpha Male Complex: 3
Io's Blindess: 1
My Writing Style: 1

I'll be focusing on those and try to get something up on them soon.




[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:28 pm


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Fel Essence
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Perhaps you have often stopped to admire the moon's reflection off darkened waters or enjoyed the tranquil evenings illuminated by the light of the moon. Its brilliant glow tints everything in a silvery tint creating and destroying shadows like the brightest of days. However, Kyou stumbles upon a puddle of water reflecting the silvery moonlight even on the brightest of days, one wonders is it the light of the moon or its forgotten tears?


[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]

RoChan

Celestial Pirate


RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:33 pm


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User ImageThe Gray Wolf is a beautiful creature that helps to maintain its fragile ecosystem by being one of the primary predators. Once abundant over much of North America, Euroasia, and the Middle East, the wolf has been eradicated from much of its habitat due to humans. Wide spread hunting and destruction of habitat out of fear or misunderstanding has reduced the range of the wolf as well as driven the creature to extinction and near extinction. Recently in Idaho and Wyoming the penalty for killing wolves has been reduced to less than ten dollars creating a huge setback in the reintroduction of the animals.

Wolves function as social predators, hunting in packs according to strict, rank-orientated hierarchies. A pack is lead by the Alpha pair who have the greatest amount of social freedom. “The social hierarchy of a pack is well-established and constantly reinforced through gestures and postures.“

A wolf’s color can vary from white to black and can be anywhere from 5 to 7 feet long weighing up to 175 pounds. “At birth, wolf pups tend to have darker fur and blue eyes that will change to a yellow-gold or orange color when the pups are 8 to 16 weeks old. Though extremely unusual, it is possible for an adult wolf to retain its blue-colored eyes."

"Wolves are built for stamina, possessing features ideal for long-distance travel. Their narrow chests and powerful backs and legs facilitate efficient locomotion. They are capable of covering several miles trotting at about a pace of 6 mph, and have been known to reach speeds approaching 40 mph during a chase. While sprinting, wolves can cover up to 16 ft per bound.” Wolves can also travel easily on a variety of different terrains because of their body structure.

User ImageWolves communicate through body language, growling, and most of all howling. Howling allows pack members to keep in touch within thickly forested areas or over great distances, and to call a pack to specific location. It can also serve as a declaration of territory to other rival packs and can be heard up to 10 miles away depending on weather conditions.

“Wolves will also howl for communal reasons. Some scientists speculate that such group sessions strengthen the wolves' social bonds and camaraderie— similar to community singing among humans. During such choral sessions, wolves will howl at different tones and varying pitches, making it difficult to estimate the number of wolves involved. This confusion of numbers makes a listening rival pack wary of what action to take.”


[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:38 pm


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User ImageName: Io ((named after one of the moons of Jupiter))
Gender: Female

Personality: Loyal, honest, intelligent, and straightforward, Io, proves herself to be more towards her soul with her strong sense of justice. She is easily upset and shocked as well as stubborn and a bit difficult but a social person who is sensitive to others and empathizes with them. She does not, however, tolerate weakness and can be overly critical of others. Despite her behavior at times, she thinks family and friends are important and will defend them wholeheartedly.

Incidentally, because of her soul, Io has an Alpha Male complex, causing her to wish to be the best "male" in her pack. This creates a tomboyish quality making her become a handsome girl.

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Thesis: Because the essence is of moonlight the raevan herself is essentially blind to sun light and can only see by the light of the moon. Even artificial light that takes from the sun does not illuminate the world for the raevan. This visual impairment can cause for a great number of interesting possibilities between interaction and character development as well as create a personal challenge for a person who is a visual artist.

Hearing, smell, touch because much more important to the raevan as she tries to "see" the world around her. Therefore, combining the soul of a wolf enhances the other senses to a dramatic effect creating a compensation for the affliction caused by the essence. By enhancing these additional senses, the raevan will be able to experience the world around her differently. Also the traits of a wolf and the zodiac dog creates for a personal challenge in character development.

Also, in trying to not be too overly political, touching the subject of extinction can be used to further develop the character.

Appearance: Given that this is a semi custom, I have no particular choice in how the raevan will look. However, I do have a small want in her appearance, mainly that she be a Handsome Girl. Thus the sketch is more for information than anything definite. I am highly curious as to what Kyou will bring to the character through her image as clothing and appearance can give a new dimension to what the character's traits are.

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Gifts, Sacrifice, Generosity, Charity, Honor, Bonding, Loyalty, relationships, Forgiveness.

Gebo(yee-boe) is the rune which represents the importance of our relationships with other people, of love, loyalty and good partnerships. It may also signify an offering of some kind, spiritual or material, wherein there is a price of personal sacrifice, and you are given the choice to receive it or not. However, this rune has a positive connotation, ensuring us that whatever the price may be, the rewards will be great.


[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]

RoChan

Celestial Pirate


RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:42 pm


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Name: RoChan
Age: In her late 20's Really Old
Gender: Female!
Race: Human
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Blue
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 165lbs
Occupation: Runs a magical antique shop with her sister.
Likes: Children, reading, sweet things, shiny things
Dislikes: Spiders, cold, bitter things, pink
Appearance: Piccu coming soon...
Bio: update later lulz
Personality: STUPID |D
Family: RoChan has one younger sibling, Ranko.


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The Great Design

The magical antique shop runs on the concept of a Wish store. Wish stores are often created by magical beings such as Sorcerers or Sorceresses who pose enough magic to conjure up or come to possession of the items of which they sell. While ‘The Great Design’ doesn’t grant wishes its purpose is to provide the item of what the shopper wants or wishes to have. The shop boasts to “have what you are looking for” before one enters it thus only a select few may ever enter the shop, mostly by invitation only. Most Wish shops also exist on the idea of the Monkey’s Paw, while the shop may harbor some items that would cause this phenomenon not all its items fall to that theory. However, the price to pay for the desire object may prove to be greater than mere gold.

The shop itself is a living thing that can mostly maintain itself except for stocking, cleaning, and of course, servicing potential customers. It “tells” RoChan what to it desires through thought, while not all requests are followed, she complies with the demands if it should perk her interests. In turn, the shop provides RoChan with housing and access to the items letting her fulfill her curiosity of the many strange things on the shelves.

She does have a cat and raven whom she has duped into working for her. Upon entering the store they both take on a human form. They don’t do much but keep RoChan entertained and the store running. Gato is a white tabby, is loud, short tempered and has proclaimed himself to be RoChan’s rival while she merely ignores most of his tantrums. Raven is a raven that is quite and generally the opposite of Gato, keeps the peace within the shop through her strangeness.


[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:43 pm


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Brief Bio
I am more an avid artist than a writer so you may notice my grammar and spelling tend to fluctuate from bad to good. I would blame it on the duel language barrier but I doubt that would sound reasonable here. *laughs* In any case, I am an old fart with a love for a good role play to help relieve some stress and foster a creative environment mentally.

RP Experice
My Role playing experience is quite extensive and ranges from being a simple player to being a creator. Previously I was in a historical anime RP that lasted for two years. I also manned and co-moded that RP for quite some time. In total, I have played in roughly about seven or eight RPGs out of which I have owned three and acted as a moderator in two. I am hoping to stay a player in [Lab305] as it has been a while since I just played! I also tend to be a loyalist, going down with the game up until the very end.

As for playing style, I am an aggressive player honed from years of being a moderator where game play was often initiated by me. I have also played more males than females because of my assertiveness and most often than not I lean more towards being an antagonist. I like to create complicated conflict with my characters as well as cunning plots. Most often than not, players feel that if I am unwatched plots will explode and the game will burn down. I am not menacing player though! 8D

I follow standard RP etiquette.


Writing Style
As far as Point-of-Views are concerned, I am more comfortable writing in First Person than Third Person. Also writing in Present tense is easier for me than Past tense, so please forgive me if I switch my tenses around a bit.

I also like a more 'vivid' story telling. As an artist I am always more concerned on how things look more than what purpose it has to the story. I want to know what color hair, type of material, etc. something is. I consider this a positive and yet faulty writing style as it tends to be more babble then content.


Writing Samples
LJ Rurouni Kenshin Character RP
This was an RP that I played a total of 3 characters: Yamazaki Susumu, Saitou Hajime, and Sayo (from the 3rd filler arc) it was also the one where I was a mod at. I am posting my favorite scenes from that RP. A lot of these scenes people gave me permission without knowing what was going to happen till the end. Some circumstances were discussed via email or instant messenger, but on whole I love to give people surprises. XD Fortunately they loved to get them too!

Yamazaki Susumu Journal
Saitou Hajime Journal
Sayo / Magdalia Journal

Susumu is Betrayed Part I
Susumu is Betrayed Part II
Susumu is Betrayed Part III

The Yamazakis Raid the Oniwabanshu

Susumu loves Squid Part I
Susumu loves Squid Part II

Karou Gets Kidnapped

Kenshin vs Susumu
Okita vs Saitou
Sano vs Saitou

At the Jade House part I
At the Jade House part II


Summer FS Entery
It is said that there are things that only certain people can do. Things that only they are destined to accomplish. Like the labors of Hercules or Odysseus’ sea voyage. However, these instants never come with any warning. They merely come quietly, whispering in the ear of their chosen that they were born for something far greater. And so like many other tales, our story begins with an unaware Iliad, a reaven whose fel essence, Manifested Imagination, and soul, the Greek muse of epic poetry Calliope, created her tale of destiny.

It was a day like any other for Iliad. She awoke to the sounds of her guardian quarreling with her apprentice, their loud voices echoing within the corridors of the magical shop. The boisterous yells and sounds of their bickering seemed more prominent today than any other and that caused the dark eyed raevan to become curious. Rising from her bed, the curly haired girl floated down to the main part of the shop to see what had caused such a discord.

“I told you to leave it alone! Now look what you’ve done!”

“You were the one who dropped it!”


Iliad stared at the cat and dragon that were currently glaring at each other across a shattered wooden box. Upon inquiring from the ever silent raven, Iliad learned that a scared treasure had been broken and the only way to fix it was to seek out an item unlike any other. However, it was carefully guarded by a monstrous creature. Thus the whisper came into her ear.

“I can do it.” Iliad’s soft voice spoke above the others. “I will go and bring it back.” Her guardian, a wise old dragon, regarded the small floating creature for a moment before disappearing into one of the rooms in the back. Iliad did not have to wait long before the blue dragon appeared again holding out a small pack for Iliad to take.

“Take this and be careful.” Iliad’s small fingers wrapped around the object as the dragon gave a stern warning as a farewell. “And don’t wander off!” Iliad nodded once before she left the shop with a small wave.

It wasn’t a long trip and she kept to her path as she had been told, reaching her destination rather quickly. A small cottage, away from the prying eyes of others, lay beyond a small wooden bridge that crossed over a wide river. As Iliad began to cross it, an ugly troll suddenly appeared before her! The hideous face was contorted into a wild grin, yellowed and broken teeth bared. Thousands of warts covered the scaly skin and thin stringy hair sprouted from the top of a misshapen head. Iliad had heard about trolls from her guardian and how they were mean spirited creatures that loved to eat children as well as other lovely things. However, she also knew about their stupidity and inability to swim.

A hungry look came over the troll’s features and Iliad slowly lowered herself at the edge of the bridge, her hands touching the ground searching for something while her mind worked quickly to invent a scheme.

“Surely you do not wish to eat me, madam troll. I lack legs and a middle to fully fill you.”
The soft spoken raevan calmly explained as her thin hands closed around a rock. She concentrated her powers into imagining the rock into a large dumpling, larger than any ordinary one ever before! “I have something that is much more satisfying. Here catch it!” She threw the imagined dumpling over the bridge, watching as it sank quickly below the waters. The troll vaulted its grotesque body over the side of the bridge after the rock, its shriek deafening as it fell into the running waters disappearing into its depths.

Hastily, Iliad crossed the bridge and came to the cottage where a warm old man welcomed her. He explained to her that the troll had been living there for some time and had caused him more trouble than he had ever imagined. He handed Iliad the item she sought in exchange for the package that the dragon had given Iliad previously. The raevan's dark eyes shone with a sense of accomplishment of her first task alone and returned home without further trouble.

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RoChan stared at the raevan with a blank look as Iliad’s retelling came to an end. The air around the curly haired creature shimmered slightly as the residue of the imagined scenes faded back into nothingness leaving behind only a memory of what they once were. Iliad’s expectant eyes sparkled as they roamed over her audience searching for a word of praise at the wondrous telling of her brief adventure. But there were none to be given except perhaps a forth coming reprimand.

It had been a simple errand really, nothing more than going to the hardware store across the street and purchasing a hammer to repair the broken display case. But once again Iliad had managed to weave a tale out of nothing and used her essence powers to create a believable reality.

With a sigh, the dragon pinched the bridge of her nose between two slim fingers. “I’ll be right back.” She informed the other two shop helpers as she began to untie her apron.

Gato and Raven nodded in unison, unsurprised by the blue haired woman’s actions. It wasn’t the first time that they had encountered a similar scene since Iliad began to live with them. Even the most mundane of things would become a grandiose story if left to be told by the muse. So it wasn’t hard for them to know RoChan was going across the street to apologize to the shop owner’s wife for Iliad’s mischief (turning her garden into a bridge, her features into a troll, and then throwing a rock at her). Still they could not deny that they had enjoyed the tall tale.


Vix Moria Entry
Guardian Name: Elliot Jenkins nickname: Eli
Guardian Info: Elliot is the middle son of a regular poor family. Current age is 27 and not doing anything with his life, much to the displeasure of his parents and brothers. A jack of all trades and willing to do just about anything for a little love, money, or a meal he lives his life just as if it was a whim.
Preferred Feather: Perfection [Name: Iris, Stage: Fledling]


Though the Vix Moria mansion was vast and large, there were times where the immense space became suppressing and claustrophobic. People were every where listening and watching every movement, every second. Even going to the bathroom was seldom a private moment! It was enough to drive Elliot insane wishing for a small dark place, as long as it meant there would be no one else there. Luckily on one midnight snack attack he had located and secured such a place within the expansive kitchen. It was a place where the silence was overwhelming in the twilight hours and where no one dared venture… a broom closet in the far corner of the kitchen away from most eyes.

Elliot gave a curse as he shifted his weight and his head hit the back of the closet. He sat for a moment rubbing the injured area a bit before concentrating on what had woken him up. He waited a few moments before the soft knocking began again with a light tap tap tap. It wasn’t hard to figure out what was causing that noise, considering that earlier they had previously had a fight. Reaching out, his long arms turned the knob and pushed the door open carefully as not to hit the small child behind it.

Iris stood beyond the door frame, glowing ethereally with the low lighting. Her pink little lips pouting as her pale blue eyes shimmered with unshed tears. She was barefoot in her nightgown and seemed to shrink within the white linen as her white folded wings drooped behind her bowed head. Her figure was a perfect example of a scolded child frightened by the expectancy of punishment.

Eli sighed and passed a large hand across his face in exasperation. When he had accepted the position of taking care of such a small creature he had no idea he would get so infuriated with it from time to time. Iris was perfect, from head to toe. Not a hair on her head was ever out of place, not a feather unclean. She was practically raising her self which really made Eli’s life easier. His bachelor life style had taken a blow when he realized that he was going to be raising a child but Iris was so easy to take care of it was almost as if… she wasn’t really there.

Though when she did make herself known it was enough to drive a knife into one’s skull. Elliot smoked much to the displeasure of the perfect child and her delicate senses. He also didn’t care much about how he looked as long as he wore clothes and possibly shoes. His ruffled, unkempt demeanor often caused Iris to complain in her perfect tone and glare down at him through the bridge of her perfect nose. Her complaints overwhelming, and sounding eerily like those of his parents, caused the black haired male to seek the solace of the kitchen broom closet. Iris’ company would instantly become perfectly unbearable but he couldn’t really blame her for being the way she was.

Iris on the other hand had no where to go when she offended someone with her scrutiny and comments. It wasn’t as if she had meant to be mean, just that she couldn’t stand anything that was less than perfect. That caused the other Aethios to avoid her and the staff to become angry at her. Even her own guardian would rather keep himself within a filthy broom closet than to stay with her. It hurt. Her perfect little heart would ache at the thought. She could be perfectly charming and perfectly annoying all at once making her perfectly lonely. She stifled a sob that threatened to come out instead making it sound like a prefect mix between a sniffle and a cough.

Eli still said nothing to her instead staring at her with his clear blue eyes from the depths of the darkened closet. It caused her to fidget with her hands clasped before her and her bare toes wiggling from the cold floor. Her chest heaved a few times before a perfect sob slipped by and a perfect tear passed down her porcelain like skin.

“I’m sorry.” Iris perfectly spoke though her tears and hiccups. “I’m so sorry. I don’t want to be alone.”

Eli felt as if a knife was being repeatedly stabbed into his heart each time the fledling spoke, her tone not to hoarse, not too soft, just the right wrenching sound that tore his resolution to utter nothingness. “Look, Iris… Stop crying ok? Look at me. I’m not,” Eli gave a deep sigh. “I’m not angry.”

Iris tried to stop crying but all she could do was heave for air within short gasps. “No. You don’t want me.”

Scratching his head Elliot beckoned the young girl into the room with a wave of his free hand. “Come here. I never said that did I?” Iris shook her head, her blond tresses falling back into place perfectly. “Then come here.” Iris took a hesitant step forward before rushing towards her guardian and climbing up onto his lap. Eli closed the door behind her leaving them both in the dark.

“This is my secret place and now it’s yours too.” He patted her head softly before stroking the silken locks. “We can share this place when we’re angry or sad. We can also come here when we want to have a place away from everyone else. It’ll be our secret, ok?” The Aeithos finally calmed down and nodded her head into the folds of his shirt curling herself to rest in his embrace. They stayed that way for a while in silence before Eli voiced the curious thought that passed his mind.

“How did you find me by the way?”

“You were snoring.” Came Iris’ reply causing a perfect laugh escape Elliot’s lips.


[ o1. Welcome || o2. The Fel Essence || o3. The Soul || o4. The Raevan || o5. The Guardian ]
[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]

RoChan

Celestial Pirate


RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:45 pm


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Rejected Fel Essences & Soul Combinations

Failed Experiment 001
Phoenix Ashe
Legend has it that a phoenix will rise from its ashes but what if this phoenix never rose again and remained simply as ashes?

Soul Chinese Dragon
The direct opposite of a phoenix

Failed Experiment 002
Misenchanted Frog Legs
This frog had promised if I kissed him he would turn into a prince! A slimy kiss afterwards and still no prince! At least he was a tasty lunch!

Soul White Crane
A predator of the frog.


Failed Experiment 003
Manifested Imagination
When people say that someone has vivid imagination they usually don't mean that their imagination actually becomes so real that it's tangible. However, this fel essence physically creates whatever the person imagines into something physical that can be touched and viewed by anyone.

Soul Greek muse of epic poetry, Calliope


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[ o6. The Player || o7. The Trash bin || o8. The Questions || o9. The Financials || 1o. The Credits ]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:48 pm


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Question o1
I have noticed that the RP play here is different that what I am used to in regards to actions. What RP etiquette is being followed here?


Question o2
Do Raevans bathe? 8D


I am sure that you have some for me too! 8D Please feel free to ask away!


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RoChan

Celestial Pirate


RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:50 pm


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T__T omg! I am so poor!


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 6:02 pm


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Raevans and Fel Essences created by Kyoupiruchi

Banners and Art created by RoChan

Information gathered from Wikipedia, The Nature Conservancy, and Smithsonian: National Museum of Natural History.



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RoChan

Celestial Pirate


Shuura

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:42 pm


Oohhh, purtty thread graphics! Nice going Ro~~~ I'm so happy to see you set up a quest thread too biggrin

Well here goes my critique I suppose! Sadly I personally think that the fel essence is kinda a lil too much like Laz's fel essence (phoenix ash). From what I gather at least Kyou likes to have all the fel essence remain pretty distinct from each other so that each Raevan can be a lot more original. Additionally I think Kyou has said before that semi customs with concepts that are original and interesting have a much higher chance of getting chosne.
Sooooo my critique would be that your fel essence may be a bit too similar to an already existing one! and actually the soul choice of the Chinese dragon is pretty much like the Kirin which was already used for a soul too T___T although for an NPC'd Raevan (Sisay), and Sisay was neither male nor female also~

On the other hand your guardian character has an interesting background! The idea of working in a magical shop is really fun biggrin <3
PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:48 pm


TAT I didn't realize everything was so similar to other Raevans! *tosses thread and pulls up other ideas* I thought that the ash and Laz might be to similar but I wasn't sure since Laz is fire and though a phoenix is fire I was concentrating more on the ashy part... As for Sisay o__o Probably because it was never active that I didn't think of it. D: Thanks for the critique though cause now I can start over!

I got what 1 out of 3 things right? XD Well just goes to show that I should have just gone with my first idea! *goes back to the drawing board*

RoChan

Celestial Pirate


Revanica

PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 2:16 pm


Good luck. I'm sure you'll think of something totally unique! heart
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:34 am


RoChan
TAT I didn't realize everything was so similar to other Raevans! *tosses thread and pulls up other ideas* I thought that the ash and Laz might be to similar but I wasn't sure since Laz is fire and though a phoenix is fire I was concentrating more on the ashy part... As for Sisay o__o Probably because it was never active that I didn't think of it. D: Thanks for the critique though cause now I can start over!

I got what 1 out of 3 things right? XD Well just goes to show that I should have just gone with my first idea! *goes back to the drawing board*

EDIT: actually, you're right, I'm wrong. Laz's fel essence is eternal flame, which is kind of related to your fel essence in that phoenix....fire...etc, but is different enough from each other to stand alone as seperate fel essences.

What I was originally referring and got mixed up with wasn't Laz (oopsies!!! Sorry) but of the unnamed Raevan that takes up one of the tanks; it was made from the fel essence Phoenix Ash, ashes from a dying phoenix that didn't give birth to a new phoenix but remained as ashes. This Raevan was the first "Raevan" so to speak, but it didn't have a soul, so it wasn't complete. It remains occupied in one of the three Raevan tanks, and is an NPC of sorts (see Kyou's Experiment Diary).

However the effect this has IC-ly is that there does exist a fel essence of phoenix ash and it has already been used.

On another note, I read through the lunar heat quester that you mentioned, and I think your original idea is sufficiently different from it. While they're both related to the moon, yours is concerned with the moonlight while the lunar heat one is actually more concerned with an actual physical chunk of the moon involving minerals and magma and whatnot. IMO that essence would be more earth-elemented, physically-based and heat-related while yours is more abstract, light-elemented and cool (temperature wise, I hope that makes sense kinda) so in my opinion the two can be considered quite different from each other. I doubt anyone would think either of you were trying to copy the other, in any case, so thar's me additional $0.02!
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Shuura


RoChan

Celestial Pirate

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 7:24 pm


*laughs* It's okay. Like I said, I should have just gone with my first instincts and used the fel essence that I thought of the first time around. :[

*takes the 0.02 and adds it to her 0.98* Wee! I can go to Wendy's and buy a baked potatoe with this! XD Hee hee~ Thanks for comparing the two ideas hon! 8D I didn't want to offend her! >w<
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