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 Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:25 pm
Yeah, I did the outline on thick drawing paper. domokun Feel free to rag on me about the lines, I know, I know. emo
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:08 am
I really love the look of the face, although I feel the nose could be just a teeny bit more defined.
I also favour the subdued colours and the stretched anatomy, it looks so elegant.
The fingers aren't perfect but what a horribly difficult pose to draw them in!
cute bird.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:19 am
I think this drawing would be vastly improved by a slightly smaller head.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:21 am
I think if the background was a different color, this picture would improve 100%.
And she is in kindov' an unnatural position. Her head is straight on, and her body is turned off to the side. I don't know, it just looks wrong to me.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:24 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:17 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:43 am
THIS NAME IS QUITE SMART I think if the background was a different color, this picture would improve 100%. I agree with this. you should clean it up sigh
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 11:42 am
Thirding wut Parade said thar about BG
it would make the figure jump out more.
.....missing arm bothers me immensely
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:24 pm
i'm really not into that plane-less nose, but the hand is beautiful stuff
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 8:48 pm
her right shoulder is weird esp. compared t her left shoulder, thats me only major concern.......... um ya pretty piece overall
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 2:32 pm
The Iconoclast I think this drawing would be vastly improved by a slightly smaller head.
But I agree with everyone on the background, I'll get on that
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 3:32 pm
qfe @ everyone about the background.
the right arm missing bothers me, as well.
but i really like her hand, i'm sure it was hard to draw and you pulled it off very nicely.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:11 am
I think using references for the bird would help a lot. At the moment it's kind of lacking in anatomy, which isn't great for an element that people are likely to be looking at a fair bit.
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