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 Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:40 pm
 Welcome to the journal of Anna and Azurai. As is true of most journals, this one is private and should only be written in by Anna, Azurai, and their designated friends.
If you would like to house your own interplanetary criminal, please visit us at the ICRS.
Interplanetary Criminal's Name: Kizuri Mwaasi
Crime: Armed robbery of an interplanetary bank
Date of Sentencing: 4/9/07
Guardian: Azurai Lockheart
Stage: Baby
Gender: Female
Approximate Height: Baby-sized
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Blue
Skin Color: Olive
Other Distinguishing Features: Slightly pointed ears, feathers around her left eye.
Likes: ???
Dislikes: ???
Significant Other: ???
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:03 pm
 Table of Contents...1. Archie's Post
2. ToC
3. Updates
4. Kizuri
5. Anna
6. Landing
7. Photos
8. Friends/Enemies
9. Reserved
10. Reserved
11. Reserved
12. Reserved
13. Reserved
14. Reserved
15. Credits
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:05 pm
Archie Saturn 04.04.07 - Kizuri's comin'. HIDE YOUR DEF LEPPARD SHIRTS
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:08 pm
ICRS Concept Contest Thread
Above is where I originally put all this information during the contest. 3nodding
Three words that describe this character
Cocky, arrogant, caring. The Basics Character's full name:
Kizuri Mwaasi
(pronounced: "Kee-zoo-ree Mah-wah-see")
Reason for or meaning of name
Kind. Kizuri's parents were hoping for a kind, gentle little girl. Instead they got a rambunctious, rebellious daughter.
Nickname
Ki
Approximate human-equivalent age at sentencing
17
Approximate height at sentencing
5'11
Hair color/texture/style (or hair equivalent)
Short, just about pixie-cut hair with soft bangs in front. Bright, firetruck red. Naturally, of course. Her hair is extremely soft and always smells softly of coconuts, which is rather odd because it's very contrasting to her personality.
Skin color
Light blue with an occasional spot of navy, especially around the wrist and palms.
Eye color
Emerald green
General build
Very tall, very slender - 0 body fat kind of figure. Her legs are extremely long, and her figure is very graceful looking.
Distinguishing marks (scars, tattoos, general markings)
Other distinguishing features
Kizuri has a long, snaking scar in an S shape on her neck. It's best not to ask. The Past Crime
Armed robbery of an interplanetary bank. Kizuri stole the equivalent of 1 million dollars, and further hid it in a secret location. Police have not been able to recover the money yet, and because Kizuri won't cooperate, have no leads. Also, withholding information on the whereabouts of her family who are suspects in the case of the missing million.
Name of Home Planet
Ardhi
Description of home planet
Ardhi is a mostly green planet with a climate similar to that of earth. About 4/5 of the planet is forest, interrupted by large oceans and a few grasslands. It is very rare that you can find any kind of land that isn't lush, save for the small patch of mountains towards the northern pole of the planet. The towns are mainly dispersed in the forests, although with minimal deforestation. The largest city, Mbuto, is where Kizuri is from.
Generally the people of Ardhi are extremely kind, and well-known for their benevolent nature. They welcome foreigners warmly, often offering their own homes for lodging to travelers, however risky it may be. Crime is seldom in most parts of Ardhi. They also have strange ruins in several locations on their planet. They look like Atlanta-esque and seem like remnants of an ancient civilization, but so far scientists haven't made any conclusive discoveries. Favorite/Least Favorite Things Color
Red
Least favorite color
Blue
Music
Our equivalent of rock and country.
Least favorite music
Our equivalent of pop.
Food
Finas (similar to french fries, and equally as popular in cheap restaurants).
Least favorite food
Slugs (no special words for that xD).
Literature
The Earth-works of Jane Austen.
Least favorite literature
Any kind of girly, pre-teen book.
Mode of transportation
A crappy, ancient version of the modern hovercraft. Habits Hobbies
Weesi (like a guitar but...different), driving, drawing.
How does character spend a rainy day? (Or rain equivalent)
Kizuri loves to write. She can only write when there's nothing else to do, so rainy days (which are common on her Ardhi) are ideal. Family Mother
Penda Mwaasi
Relationship with her
Pretty good. Her mom hit a rough spot when their dad mysteriously went missing, and while there is some distance between them sometimes, Kizuri still loves her, perhaps more than when their dad was home.
Father
Thamini Mwaasi
Relationship with him
He's gone, not much of a relationship there.
Siblings
One brother, Kidogo
Birth order
Kizuri, then Kidogo
Relationship with each
Kizuri adores her little brother. She doesn't baby him or anything, but she lets him tag along with her most of the time, and is nice to him instead of being harsh (like she is with everyone else).
Children of siblings
N/A, not old enough
Children
N/A
Extended family
One cousin, Dugu, and an aunt and uncle, Maji and Kunde, respectively
Close?
Semi. Kizuri always feels like they're trying to steal Kidogo from her, but her mom loves her sister and Kizuri and Kidogo both like Dugu. Attitude Greatest fear
Indecisiveness
What is the worst thing that could happen to him/her?
Having her brother and mother taken away.
What single event would most throw character's life in complete turmoil? Why?
Being taken away from home. There is nothing Kizuri wouldn't do for the sake of her family, partially because of her love for her brother and mother, but also partially because she feels a satisfactory defiance of her father, even though he's gone.
Most at ease when
Playing guitar or hanging out with her brother.
Most ill at ease when
Around a large group of people. Priorities How s/he feels about self
Seemingly confident but inside somewhat insecure. She puts on an air of arrogance to fend off anyone she deems untrustworthy...which is basically anyone.
If granted one wish, what would it be?
To be able to give her brother and mom a big house and a solid income for the rest of their lives. Personality Greatest source of strength in character's personality (whether s/he sees it as such or not)
In tight situations, Ki is very smart and good in a tight situation. She can think fast and come up with a good solution that often either escapes certain consequences or pleases most parties. In this way, she is extremely helpful in a tight spot.
Greatest source of weakness in character's personality (whether s/he sees it as such or not)
She is often very unintentionally cold to the ones she holds dear. Sometimes this can result in hurt feelings, which Ki doesn't understand because she doesn't get how she's been harsh.
Biggest vulnerability
Her family - anyone who so much as insults her family is subject to a life-long grudge, according to Ki. Traits Optimist or pessimist (Why?)
Pessimist. Ki believes that everything in her life has gone wrong and that life has been very cruel and unfair to her family.
Introvert or extrovert (Why?)
Introvert. Ki generally prefers to be solitary then to have company, although she won't admit that occasionally misery has enough company, and she feels lonely.
Talents
Quite talented singer/songwriter. Also has a talent for math (it makes sense to her).
Mannerisms
Tends to chew on toothpicks when thinking, cracks her knuckles when bored, and gets a little tick in her eye when she's nervous. Problems/Crisis How character reacts in a crisis
She immediately comes up with an ideal solution to whatever the problem is. Quite convenient, actually.
How character reacts to change
Ki denies the change until it is too obvious and blatant to avoid. Then she angrily accepts it, sulks, and eventually moves on, although bitterly. General Favorite clothing
Generally a band t-shirt and distressed jeans, although occasionally opts for a printed tee or a cardigan when feeling preppy.
Jewelry and other accessories
Generally wears oversized jet or faux-diamond earrings. She also likes to wear extra-long chains with a large pendant on the end (like a locket or a medallion). Also occasionally she likes to wear her pair of pink plastic hoops. She also always wears a sailor's bracelet her brother gave her as a gift for her 10th birthday.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:12 pm
  Anna is shy, quiet, and completely oblivious to her past life...
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:41 pm
 Azurai awoke with a large thunk. She rolled over and grunted, ignoring it. Stuff was always going bump in the night around her house. But not this time. This time it went bump twice. Rai propped herself up in bed and slowly opened her eyes, peering around her dark room. Bump! a third time. She sat up in bed and threw her covers off, stumbling out of bed and to the door. It suddenly occurred to her that someone might be inside the house. Her heart skipped a beat and her body tensed. She took a few deep breathes and grabbed the largest thing nearest her which was...a lamp. She shrugged and unplugged it, stepping out of her room and creeping down the hallway. Rai peeked tentatively into each of her kids' rooms, and seeing each of them safe, she took a few more deep breathes and crepy downstairs. She heard a few thumps from the left. It was coming from the kitchen. Her heart was pounding in her ears, she was sure that the burglar would here it and find her and...No, she thought, and forced the fear out of her mind. 1, 2, 3!! she thought, and on 3 leapt into the kitchen, lamp raised, and was confronted with the last thing she expected. A chair had been pushed over to the counter and sitting innocently eating a roll from a bag of bread. Outside the window Rai saw a large, metallic green lumpy thing smoldering in her yard.
What the crap?
The toddler turned to look over her shoulder, the roll still hanging halfway out of her mouth, her wide eyes startled. Immediately her face crumpled, and Rai shook her head.
"Noooonononono don't cry everyone's sleeeeeeeping!" she cooed softly, but tears were welling in the toddler's eyes. "Uhhhh, here, look, it's Mr. Lampy!! Don't cry, look at Mr. Lampy!" Rai attempted feebly, shaking the ugly Hula girl lamp her family had begged her not to buy at the toddler. The little girl still let out a whimper. "Aww, c'mon!" Rai said, raising her hands up in a shrug. As her hands went up, though, the lamp smacked her in the head. Rai fell over with the same dumb expression set on her face. In spite of the throbbing pain in her head, Rai was quite relieved to hear the baby girl giggle at her, the roll falling into her lap. Rai stood up and set the lamp a safe distance away on the counter. "Okay baby, I don't know who you belong to, but we're gonna find out," Rai said, and reached for the little girl. But before she could get her hands on the baby, she dropped the bag of rolls on the ground. Rai grumbled and bent down to pick them up, but when she looked up, no baby. Not on the counter, not...anywhere? Rai whirled around. "Baby?!" she called, as though expecting it to respond. She heard mad giggling coming from the other room and ran into the front room. The baby was reaching up for a large vase on a small table in the living room which was teetering dangerously off the edge. "Nonononono!" she cried and dove over the little girl, snatching the vase before it tottered and fell on the baby and crashing into the ground. "Ow," she croaked as she lay there, a broken vase clutched in her grasp. When she looked up, though, yet again the baby was gone. "What the-?!" she said, and grunted as she stood up, carefully placing the vase pieces up on the mantel.
Once again it was the giggling that gave the baby away. "Baby, where are you?" Rai said in a harsh whisper, remembering that there were others in her house that she didn't want to wake. She heard giggling from the bathroom, and she jogged silently across the floor, making sure her footfalls wouldn't be heard. When she arrived at the bathroom door she flicked on the light, only to see the baby teetering at the edge of the sink about to fall to the ground. "Wah!!" she cried and scooped up the little girl in her arms as she began to fall. "Jeez," she said, and set her on the ground again, turning away to flick off the light. But she hadn't learned, and so the baby was (as you undoubtedly guessed) gone again by the time she turned around. She groaned loudly, more annoyed than respectful of her other kids at the moment. "Babyyyyyyyy, c'mon, cut it out." She heard a delighted screech come from the other room and ran to it before the baby girl no doubt fell off a high place or got crushed under something large and expensive.
Lying down in a pile of magazines Rai had earlier unearthed was the little girl. Rai frowned at the baby.
"How'd you move so fast?" she asked, and scooped the baby up in her arms. The little blue-haired girl smiled, and Rai felt her heart soften. "Where's your mother?" she asked quietly. "And why did she leave you?" The baby girl stared innocently up at her, blinking those wide, green eyes. But then Rai noticed something. She frowned and stared at the baby for a few moments. How did she not notice that before? The baby wasn't a regular human baby, it was a...green baby? More like olive-colored. And her hair was a deep azure color. Rai smiled warmly. "Just like mine..." she said, absentmindedly tucking a lock of her dyed brown hair behind her ear. The baby just stared with those wide green eyes. Rai sat down on the steps and cradled the baby. She noticed there was some funny little tufts of white stuff around the baby's eye. She gently tried to brush them away, but they wouldn't come off. She looked at the baby, puzzled. "Are those growing out of your face?" she asked, and the baby giggled as though understanding and finding that to be a silly question. Rai felt them, and they were soft...almost like...feathers?
"Oh well, doesn't matter," she said, and cradled the baby. The little girl yawned widely and Rai smiled. She began to sing in a quiet, high voice. "Hush little baby, don't you cry, momma's gonna sing you a lullaby..." she sang, and slowly the little girl's eyes began to close, until soon she was fast asleep. When the baby had drifted off, Rai felt quite sleepy as well, and crept silently into the living room, the baby in her arms. She lay down on the couch and, grabbing a blanket, set the baby next to her. She draped it over both of them, carefully tucking the soft, pale blue blanket up by the girl's ears. Only then did she notice a small necklace around the baby's neck. She took it off, fearing the baby's suffocation during the night, and saw it had a small red gem at the end of it, with a gold plate on the back. Engraved on it was the name, "Anna."
"Anna," Rai repeated softly. "Goodnight Anna," she whispered, and fell asleep next to her daughter.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:29 pm
  Mugshot of the criminal Kizuri.
AHHHHH Anna and she's so farking CUTE. biggrin heart My new bebbeh!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:30 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:32 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:37 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:57 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:58 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:01 pm
ICRS © Archie Saturn
Kizuri and Anna © me
No asking for Anna. If you want a criminal, go to the ICRS thread
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