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 Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 2:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 2:36 pm
post 1 of ur chibissdf kj okbye
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 3:00 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 3:32 pm
yaar i am the dr. v monster and i hate anime Okay here is my main criticism. A lot of your stuff looks disconnected. It's like there is a face and some hair which are individually fine but the way they sometimes connect doesn't work. I think you could benefit from thinking about your objects on the whole. Look at a head as an object with details instead of seeing it as sort of an area for things to be in. I don't know if that is very clear. also hi Apomix, welcome to the guild wink heart
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 3:37 pm
Dr. Valentine yaar i am the dr. v monster and i hate anime also hi Apomix, welcome to the guild wink heart well mebbe i'll try some realistic stuff just for yew~
and thanks ;}
edit: lol to your edit: yeah i get what you're saying.
i find that a lot of times i'll draw the head and then i don't know what to do with the rest of it XD
i'm working on looking at compositions as a whole, and i should probably sketch more than just doing things on the computer.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:33 pm
Your art's better than the last time I saw it. Dr. V covered some good stuff, but what stuck out to me (amongst other little problems like tiny anime feet) was that your characters have weird hair texture. Sometimes it looks okay even though it isn't drawn with a whole lot of skill, and other times it looks like their scalp is full of shapely wet noodles.
Think of hair as strands. It is less clumpy than this.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:51 pm
My only complaint is the bubbly looking coloring D:,
The marker ones are a lot better looking IMO, cause the coloring looks more natural, but on those ones, your lines are a bit thin and uncomplimetary to your style.
Otherwise, they're pretty decent. Your anatomy is okay and the drapery is decent (although I'd work a little on it, some of them look floaty), so I'd say you're on the right path :}
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:07 pm
thanks guys~
ya'll have such good criticisms, it's nice to get feedback for once.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:00 am
I love little people with big weapons.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:25 am
I would say my only real complaint is that everyone is SUPER shiny.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:47 pm
THIS NAME IS QUITE SMART I would say my only real complaint is that everyone is SUPER shiny. i like it actually, makes it look like new plastic.
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 3:29 pm
the curious miss rooo THIS NAME IS QUITE SMART I would say my only real complaint is that everyone is SUPER shiny. i like it actually, makes it look like new plastic. rofl
i'm glad you like it.
i'm still trying to learn how to cg properly, it's so hard.
so the super shiny is what i do now...hahaha....
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:56 pm
I lovelovelove your style
Especially the colors
But I think your lines need work as far as looking cleaner and less wiggly
I think that that would take it to the next level
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 9:24 pm
Tohomito I lovelovelove your style
Especially the colors
But I think your lines need work as far as looking cleaner and less wiggly
I think that that would take it to the next level De-wiggling lines is important. That is one of the things I'm working at.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 10:41 pm
♠The touchin' butts is the only one I like. I'm not an anime fan.♠
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