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 Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:07 pm
It Comes From the Dark
Death comes by dreams of suicide
Or so it seems it always hides.
Through the night in shadows as it lurks
You hear its whispers and its quirks.
Which steers the random touch of grim
That nears in light that is so dim.
The touch
The feel
As it passes on
No light is seen
Until you’re gone.
Death comes by
You’re not alone
All you see are
Undead souls in the dark
Goodbye death says
As it leaves
Goodbye it whispers quietly
Goodbye…
- jazzyb1
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 3:14 pm
Hmmm
Sounds....like every emo song I've heard inthe last 6 months.
Well you didnt whine about an ex.....
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 12:55 am
well this is the emo guild. what do you expect
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:09 am
A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects well this is the emo guild. what do you expect
Come on, you guys want to be so unique, how about TRYING for once?
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 10:57 am
I think it's great! Poetry is unique no matter if it sounds the same (or at least to me) Don't think I'm weird for thinking that (even if I am) It is a nice way to think instead of constantly judging people. It's not about if it sounds the same as every1 else, it's about how the writer thought when he or she wrote the poem. Great job! You should write more!
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:17 pm
Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:16 pm
JazzyB1 Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream Your hearts sucks.
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:52 pm
DaisukeOrDark JazzyB1 Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream Your hearts sucks. WTF!!!! Your such a........... emo
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:55 pm
JazzyB1 DaisukeOrDark JazzyB1 Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream Your hearts sucks. WTF!!!! Your such a........... emo
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:18 am
Mise en Garde A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects well this is the emo guild. what do you expect
Come on, you guys want to be so unique, how about TRYING for once?Emo?!? TRYING?!?!
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 5:27 am
Isel's a man b***h. We all know that much.
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