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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:48 pm


I wrote this fanfic a while back maybe 2 years ago so it might be a little childish since I have expanded my writing style since then. Well it's my first fanfic and I would really like to know your opinions. I know it might move a bit quickly at some points but if I have been known to start a story and not finish it ans since I thought it was going good I knew I had to finish it.

Please comment.

By the way, I actually have it posted up in a fanfic website, here..

Also, it might contain some punctuation errors since I copied and pasted it several times and once the periods were all gone. sweatdrop So sorry for that in advance.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:52 pm


I Promised
By E.G. Noguez


Disclaimers: The characters in this story are the property of Sony (I could never come up with such a great game and characters) and not mine. So please don't sue me I don't have any money, really!

Background: This fic is based on the PS game The Legend of Dragoon it takes place after the Dragon Campaign and is based on what I think would be Rose’s first experience as the Black Monster. I made this fic up out of my own head, although I used the basic information from the game, but what is presented in this story is my creation.

Author's Note: This is my first ever fan fic based on my favorite LOD character, Rose of course!

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:59 pm


Every one hundred and eight years, the Moon That Never Sets glows blood red and the moon child will descend upon the earth to give a holy blessing… So they say.

They have forgotten the true meaning but I haven't.


So now I am forever cursed to protect them.

Following orders I got out my dragon spirit and became a dragoon. The thick, heavy armor made each step even harder. I was not to think about it, to complete the mission, and most importantly not to leave anyone alive but how could I go through it I couldn't.

She almost ran away when a thought popped into her head, I promised everyone, I promised Zeig, Rose thought to try to motivate herself. It worked and she kept going.

At last she arrived at the little town. She looked up at the blood-red moon, the Moon that Never Sets it was named; the sign that indicated the Moon Child had been born. Somewhat hesitant, she walked into town. Her shoes made no noise but her heart thumped so quickly that Rose was almost afraid it would give her away.

~*~


The whole village had celebrated its birth the day before, the birth of what they had thought was their savior in reality their death. The Moon Child had been born to a young couple. They were very happy since it was their first child together. Rose had seen them from far away when she had been sent to look for the Moon Child. She was told it would be in that town. When she first saw the young couple together she was reminded of her and Zeig.

Zeig had once held her like that.

Zeig, the only love of her life now gone.

She had once felt love like that, had been held like that and had been kissed like that although for Rose it felt so far away now almost like a dream.
Rose shook her head and snapped out of her old memories; she had to focus on her mission.

~*~


As Rose walked into town she remembered the house on sight. It was a tiny cottage near a cornfield. In the day it had not looked like much and it did not look like much in the night either. The tiny little cottage did look very homely and inviting that Rose almost forgot why she was there. She shook off those thoughts and started to focus on her mission again.

Ok, let's get it over with.

She threw a Burn Out at the door to quickly burn it down. Paying no attention to the fire she slipped through where the door had once been and stepped inside the cottage. The fire from the burning door lit up the little cottage allowing Rose to see every corner of the cottage. A little table stood in one corner of the cottage, very old but still sturdy enough. As Rose looked around the room she noticed the young man come out of a little room in the back of the cottage. He was still in his sleepwear and was still trying to fully awake. He blinked and rubbed his eyes several times before he finally opened his eyes wide.

That was when she saw it, his eyes...

they were Zeig's eyes...blue and sparkling.

Zeig...


She had last looked into Zeig’s beautiful blue eyes when they had announced their engagement to Emperor Diaz. It was just before their last battle in the Dragon Campaign that Zeig had proposed to her. She could still remember how he had looked at her when he proposed his eyes were shining brilliantly, full of joy, happiness and love for her. Rose returned his gaze with her own love-filled look. All they had to do was win the Dragon Campaign and they would be able to get married unfortunately no one survived except for Rose

But Soa didn’t even allow me that. He took Zeig away from me in that battle, he took everyone from me.

Rose’s heart raced at the thought of Zeig. I have to get a hold of myself. With reluctance, Rose shook the image of Zeig’s eyes out of her mind; she had a mission to do.

I promised him I would.

Returning to the present Rose gazed at the young man in front of her. He stared back at her surprise and fear in his eyes as well as in his voice.

“Who are you?! What are you doing here?!?”

The time to act is now.

Quickly Rose ran towards the young man and slashed him across the chest with all her might. The young man was instantly knocked down; he crumpled before her like a piece of paper. Falling on his side, Rose could see that his chest was bleeding. His white sleepwear was stained with his blood. Not taking in any of this she continued into the room the young man had come out of. It was a tiny bedroom with a single bed and a drawer on the side of the bed, which held an oil lamp. She surveyed the room and saw the young woman sleeping peacefully on the bed. She held a tiny bundle of cloth close to her chest. This is it. Rose knew exactly what it held, inside that bundle was what she had been sent there to kill. The Moon Child.

Slowly, she uncovered the little bundle. As she uncovered the bundle she saw the Moonchild. When the Moon Child came to Earth it took the shape of a human, in this case a baby, but what was not known to those people was that this was the weapon of their demise if she failed they would all die.

Do it, it is your duty you promised them, are their deaths to be in vain?

No, I can’t let all their deaths be in vain. I must do it.


Yet as she looked at that tiny innocent body, with its chest moving up and down gently, her thoughts began to race, her conscience returned. She couldn’t bring herself to do it.

I can’t do it. I can’t take an innocent life even if it means we will all die.

But what about your friends and Zeig?
A tiny voice in her head said.

...Yes, for Zeig and the others I will.

Her hesitation caused the young woman to awake. She slowly opened her brilliant green eyes, and as she saw Rose she screamed. Surprised, Rose stumbled backwards and fell. Without a moments hesitation the young woman grabbed the little bundle and ran out the door.

Swiftly, Rose got up and headed for the young woman. She was stopped by the young man. He was still bleeding but he was determined to stop her.

“Whoever you are, I won’t let you harm my wife and child,” he said holding a broomstick like a staff. His blue eyes, though full of fright, glowed with courage and determination. Rose was taken aback by his look that she almost hesitated to fight him but them she remembered her promise. She cleared her mind and let the darkness guide her movements. Her hand was on the handle of her rapier, which she hastily unsheathed in one swift motion. She struck his throat and his chest. He fell to the floor, dead.

Rose’s mind was occupied by the direction in which the young woman had gone so that she did not look back at the young man with Zeig’s eyes.

~*~


Rose ran through the town until she came to its center. She did not know which way the young woman had gone. She heard footsteps behind her and quickly, she turned around and saw a mob of men wielding weapons. Apparently, the young woman’s scream had sounded the alarm. It didn’t matter to her; she knew she would have to kill them eventually. Stopping down, Rose got out many daggers and muttered the astral drain spell on them. She threw them at all the men who were in the front of the mob. She felt a great surge of power run through her entire body as she sucked the life out of the men. The remaining men she killed with her rapier. At the last man, she held him up by his throat.

“Where is the Moon Child?” she grumbled in a voice cold and desolate, too unlike herself.

“I don’t know what you are talking about,” he muttered. His eyes flickered with fear and something else, which Rose recognized as defiance.

Angered by his insolence, she spoke to him even more angrily and coldly than before, “Don’t play dumb, you know who I am talking about. The young woman who ran through here with her child.”

Even through his fright, he smirked at her smugly and answered, “She’s gone, and she made off with her daughter. Kill me, it won’t matter you’ll never find her. “

That was the last straw. Rose roughly threw him unto the ground got out her rapier. She slashed him repetitively until she knew for certain he was dead. She was standing in a ground completely full of dead bodies. Their blood was streaming on the ground and plenty of it had gotten on her armor.

~*~

Rose flew up to get an overhead view of the town. As she looked at the far end of the village she spotted the young woman running into a barn. Immediately, she swooped down to the barn’s entrance. She turned the barn’s handle but found that it was locked. Powerfully, she kicked open the barn door and stepped inside. It was a dark place, tiny and dank. Roses eyes flickered throughout the room for the young woman and the Moon Child. As she stepped past a horses stable she heard a soft whimper, she turned around and looked inside. In a corner, she saw many women, young and old, with children groping unto the women’s nightgowns. Letting her darkness-dragoon spirit consume her in its darkness, she took out her rapier and killed them all.

After the massacre she still could not find the Moon Child. Vigilantly, she searched the barn from top to bottom. She did not see her anywhere. When she got to the end of the barn she stumbled on something on the floor. She bent down and cleared the hay in the area. She felt something cold and hard, it was round and made of metal. A door handle. She pulled it upwards and opened it. It lead to a secret underground attic. She swiftly jumped inside and found herself in a dark room that reeked of moisture and animal feed. Her eyes searched every corner of the room until they rested upon the young woman who was still clutching her child as tightly as ever. She was in a corner, huddled up against it as if for protection. Her eyes were full of fright and her mouth was a little opened in her shock. She stared straight into Roses eyes as if pleading with her. She held her child tighter to her chest, and whimpered in her fright. Rose took out her rapier and raised it high above the young woman’s head. The young woman turned her shoulder towards Rose, one last attempt to protect that little bundle of life.

A vain effort she thought.

Just as Rose was about to strike her, the young woman looked straight into her eyes again and with her last second of life she asked, “Why?”


~*~

Rose had completed her duty. She slowly took off her dragoon armor and cleaned off all the blood and gore with water from the town’s water well. Panting from exhaustion, she took out lots of Burn Out and Gushing Magmas from her pouch and threw them in every building in the village. She walked to the entrance of what had once been a thriving town and stared while it burned to the ground.

At last her conscious self returned, and she saw all of their faces once again.

She couldn’t get them out of her head. She remembered the young maiden who had vainly tried to shield her own child from her attacks with her body, how her eyes had stared at her and how with her last breath of life she had asked her, why? She remembered the brave, young, man who fought her to the death for his wife and child though he was scared and defenseless.

He had blue eyes. Zeig's eyes...

She couldn’t take it anymore and she fell onto her knees and began to sob uncontrollably. All of actions were sinking in and she cried until she felt she had expelled all of the tears from her body and could no longer cry.

“Why? Why me Soa?!? Why didn’t I die along with everyone I cared about? Why was I spared? What sick plan do you have with me?!?” Rose screamed out at the top of her lungs, still on her knees she hit the ground as hard as she could. It helped, a bit, it took her pain off of her emotional pain and made her focus on physical pain, which she was knew how to heal. Rose looked at her fists, now bleeding from where she had hit the ground with all her strength. She also caught a glimpse of her rapier, which was now lying on the ground, crimson with innocent blood.

Life for me is not worth living. I lost my friends, my love and now I am forced to become a murderer.

Rose contemplated the action of killing herself as she held her rapier near her stomach it does not matter now. I have no family, no love as those that I killed did.

“No you can’t,” she heard a voice say behind her. Quickly she turned around. There in glowing white light was the beautiful figure of the white dragoon, Shirley. Her red hair made her white skin seem pale. Even in death she is still beautiful she thought.


“Shirley?” Rose said, her voice barely above a whisper.

“Yes Rose, it’s me. I know it hurts but you cannot kill yourself they need you everyone here needs you, you are their savior, their protector from Soa’s plan.”

“I am not their savior nor their protector, I am just a murderer.”

“No Rose, you are the only one who can do this duty.”

She sighed and put down her rapier on the ground beside her. “You are right. I must live to rescue them even if they hate me for it.” As she spoke she looked at her rapier, shining from Shirley’s light, the blood crimson red.

“Yes Rose.” Slowly Rose gazed up to look at the white dragoon, she saw her smiling and then she was gone.

“Look for me the temple where we will meet again,” Rose heard Shirley's voice in the wind.


~*~


Rose found herself lying on the ground on a hill overlooking the village, her sword next to her. It was only a dream…yet it felt so real.

Deep down Rose knew it was not just a dream. She looked out onto the hills, pink from dawn’s light. The breeze blew her raven black hair on front of her face, it feel cool against her face.

Slowly, she forced a smile, something she had not done since Zeig's death. Shirley, thank you.

She picked up her rapier and wiped the blood on the grass, as she finally, put it into its sheath. Gradually, Rose got up to her feet and walked away.

I promised them that their deaths would not be in vain, now I must fulfill that promise, even if I must lose my soul in the process.

I promised.


THE END
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 5:56 pm


First actually good and literate LOD fanfic I have read, anywhere. Kudos!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:45 pm


I must agree with Lord Drago, you are quite the good writer. Keep it up, don't let that talent go to waste!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 11:38 am


I really like it!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:32 am


Lord Drago
First actually good and literate LOD fanfic I have read, anywhere. Kudos!


redface Thanks a lot.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:34 am


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I must agree with Lord Drago, you are quite the good writer. Keep it up, don't let that talent go to waste!


Thank you redface . I have been trying to write more LOD fanfiction but I have been in a rut lately. xp

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:24 pm


Well keep writing and avoid that little pest known as writer's block! rofl I want to see more!
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 10:13 am


Ok I will try and overcome my writer's block. It's quite bad since I can only come up with beginnings or endings for my stories. I can't think of any transaction between the two. sweatdrop It's quite frustrating. stressed

Lately I've been working on trying to write a fanfic for the Dragon Campaign but I got stuck. Would anyone be interested in reading it so far?

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:25 pm


I'd love to, but I'm buried in reading and writing and I've got to get this huge book written this year.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:17 pm


Oh ok then. I might put it up later.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:57 pm


Okay!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 10:13 am


Hmmm....now is as good a time as ever. This fanfiction is about the Dragon Campaign (yes, I know it's been done sweatdrop ) and I know there will be errors in it since I am still working on it and I edit my fics after I am done.

Dragon Campaign


Prologue
When the world of Endiness was made Soa planted a single seed on the world. The seed grew rapidly and from it sprang the Divine Tree. The Divine Tree grew and grew; as it grew it bore seeds. These seeds would mature and become all the species that would one day fill the entire world of Endiness. Out of the 105th seed came the dragons. The dragons were creatures of great strength and power. Although they were extremely powerful they were not very intelligent. The 106th seed gave birth to the humans. The humans were intelligent and courageous creatures, although they were not as strong as the dragons and were made, by Soa, to guide and care for the mighty dragons. At last the newest seed, the 107th seed, brought forth the Winglies. The Winglies were similar to the humans except that they all had silver hair and maroon colored eyes. The Winglies had the ability of long life and they also possessed much wisdom and magical powers. It was this that caused a conflict in the world of Endiness. The Winglies, being the last seed of the Divine Tree thought themselves to be superior to the other 106 races, for this reason they enslaved all the other races and even drove some to extinction because they considered them ‘unworthy.’ The Winglies were led by Melbu Frahma. Melbu commanded everyone in the world, humans were made slaves as well. The condition continued for several years until at last the humans, led by their own Emperor Diaz, decided to declare war on the Winglies. This great war was to be called the Dragon Campaign. The humans fought some battles, though not very successful, and lost. Despaired, the humans tried to find a new way to win the upper hand in the Dragon Campaign…


Chapter One - A New Weapon


A young man, fully clad in a red cape and with a matching scarlet bandana, walked into a hall of a seemingly tiny house. He walked until he got to an old and worn-looking red door; he stepped inside to behold a man in his late forties sitting in a chair in behind a huge mahogany desk who was bent over a map writing rapidly. Intent on his work and not seeming to have heard or seen the young man at the door, the young man tapped on the door to attract his attention.

“Emperor,” he said as he made a bow of respect. The man looked up from his work to look at the blue-eyed and blonde haired the young man. Instantly, the Emperors’ face alighted with the sight of the handsome young man, the Emperor got up from his chair and made a small bow as well.

“Zeig, so glad you are here.” He addressed the young man, extending his hand, which the young man promptly took and shook.

“The honor is all mine, Emperor Diaz,” he bowed deeply again, his head level to the Emperor’s desk.

“Please take a seat,” he said pointing to a leather chair in front of his desk.

Zeig bowed again and walked to the leather chair and sat down. The Emperor also turned to his desk and sat down in his own chair. Emperor Diaz put his hands clasped together on the top of the map and papers he had previously been slumped over.

“So, what do I owe the pleasure of your visit to?”

“I just came to inform you of the movements of the Winglies, they seem to be heading north towards Vellweb.”

The Emperor seemed agitated by the news and repeatedly rubbed his temple with his fist. He gave a sigh and whispered to Zieg, “You are sure about this?”

“There is no mistaking it. The night watchmen I posted saw some thirty Winglies flying over there. As I said, there was no mistaking it.”

The man heaved a sigh, “It seems that we will have to find a way to stop the Winglies from gaining more ground than they already have.”

Zeig nodded, “Yes Emperor. What are your commands?”

“Not to sound pessimistic, but I fear that with our current number of forces we will not be able to achieve much success unless we can gain an upper hand on the Winglies,” Diaz said, the grim look on his face making him look older than his forty-something years.

The blue-eyed young man shook his head and hesitantly spoke, “Emperor, I believe that there may be indeed a way to accomplish this but as I have heard it would be quite dangerous.”

“Speak Zeig, we are going to need all the help we can get,” declared the Emperor.

He nodded and continued, “Yes, well do you remember the dragons?”

“Dragons? My boy you don’t mean—“ exclaimed the Emperor.

Zeig nodded once more, “Why yes I do. Emperor if you would give me the permission to go on a journey to slay the Red-Eyed Dragon and retrieve from him the Dragoon Spirit we may just be able to gain the weapon to winning this war.”

Diaz looked solemn, “But Zeig, you know how much danger there is involved in that. Many men have attempted to claim a Dragoon Spirit for themselves but all have failed in the attempts,” he shook his head, “including my dear younger brother.”

“But Emperor I know that this will be the only way we can defeat the Winglies and end our enslavement. I am fully prepared to complete this task for our future!”

The Emperor spoke sadly, “I understand, I believe it will not matter what I say you are already determined to do this. Very well, the least I could do is to give you my blessing and allow you to take as many men and equipment that you will need.” The Emperor smiled, “You remind me so much of my younger brother. May Soa be with you and may you be victorious.”

The young man respectfully bowed, “Thank you Emperor. I ensure you I will be successful in my journey!” Zeig stood up and left the room with a swish of his cape leaving the Emperor behind with a frown of worry on his face.


Chapter 2 - Preparation

Zeig walked from his meeting with the Emperor with his mind racing. They were finally going to be victorious against the Winglies! All that was needed from him was his strength and courage. Deep down, he had known this was ultimately going to be his mission, he had planned it all along. The Red-Eyed Dragon would be slain and he, Zeig, would become a Dragoon Knight defending the Human race from the oppression of the Winglies. He walked to into another house, on which was their armory was located. Zeig entered and was greeted by several soldiers who looked tired and sullen.

Zeig could not help but notice that the soldiers were sullen due to their lack of victories over the Winglies. ‘Indeed,’ he thought, ‘this war has been most discouraging. We may have won a few battle but our casualties are triple what the Winglies’ are and considering we have less men it seems like a hopeless fight. The morale of the troops is hard to keep up.’


The soldiers looked at him to which he flashed an encouraging smile as he began to speak,
“Men, we have been given an opportunity by our great Emperor to embark on a quest that will allow us to gain a weapon of immense power that will eventually lead us to victory against the Winglies once and for all. Now I must warn you that this quest may not be easy but it will not be in vain. We will slay the Red-Eyed Dragoon and thereon bring victory in the war! I will lead but I will need men who are willing to show courage, loyalty and strength to accompany me. Who is with me!?!”

The men looked at him as if they had been asked to kill themselves, their faces dropped and many looked away from the blonde-haired commander. Zeig felt disappointment creeping up on him, he would certainly need help, there were many obstacles that he would face and slaying a dragon would be no easy task that he could complete by himself. Just then he saw four soldiers stand up and one of them spoke, “Commander Zeig, we would be honored to accompany you on this great quest.” Zeig beamed and couldn’t help but grin, “Very well, we leave at dawn.”

~*~

Zeig awoke early the next morning just as the sun began to peek its head over the horizon and while dewdrops still clung to the leaves. Getting dressed for the long journey that was to come Zeig couldn’t help but feel anxiety and worry in the pit of his stomach. He remembered what the Emperor had told him just the day before, ‘Many men have attempted to claim a Dragoon Spirit for themselves but all have failed in the attempts…’ it crossed his mind making his stomach feel even more anxious than it already was. ‘But even if I am afraid I cannot act on it, I must be brave for us in order to be victorious in this war. I must put up a brave facade in front of my men…if I cannot show bravery how can I expect them to?’

Heaving a sigh, Zeig stepped opened the door and stepped out of the threshold of his room to meet the men that would accompany him on his journey. He met the soldiers in front of the armory, they all looked tired but content nonetheless.

“Alright, now that we are all here let us begin our journey,” Zeig spoke as he began to lead the way. The four soldiers nodded and began to follow their commander.

The journey towards the lava caves was a long and difficult one but it gave Zeig lots of time to think.

~*~

-Zeig’s memory-

“Well son you seem to be getting bigger and stronger every day now,” spoke a brown-haired, blue-eyed man as he placed his hand on a blonde-haired, blue-eyed boy who looked about 8 years old.

The boy looked up at the man with a big smile and responded, “Yup! One day I’ll be as strong as you dad!”

The man chuckled, amused at his son’s response, “Yep, just like your old man.” The 8 year old beamed again and ran outside.

A young woman with brown hair tied back was picking up a basket of wet clothes. The boy ran over to her.

“Sis, wanna play with me?” The young woman, with a set of beautiful emerald-green eyes, looked up at the little boy whom she smiled at tenderly.

“First I have to hang up this laundry to dry then we can play.”

“Sis, I can help! Dad says I’m bigger and stronger now!” he said smiling.

The girl smiled back, “Yes you are. Here take these clothespins.” She handed him the wooden pins and began to put up the clothes on the rope that was strung across from the house and a wooden pole. The boy awkwardly held the pins and handed them one by one as his sister extended her hand towards him. This continued on until all the clothes were hung up to dry in the warm sun. Zeig plopped down on the ground and wiped beads of sweat from his forehead, his sister observed him and smiled.

“Come Zeig, its almost time for dinner,” she said as she began to head inside the house. Zeig sniffed the air curiously and ran inside smelling the delicious scent of soup. He noticed a woman with a blue plaid dress standing near a stove stirring at a pot.

“My you got done fast today,” said the woman turning to look at her daughter.

“Why it was all because of Zeig here. He was a big help,” responded the young woman.

The boy beamed, “Yep! I helped sis with her chores today, now I’m hungry.”

The blonde-haired woman chuckled, “You’re growing up into such a strong young man. Dinner is almost done, why don’t you sit down while we set the table?”

Zeig smiled and took a seat in his usual chair next to the window. He looked out the window watching as the people passed by with their families and pets. He turned his azure eyes towards his mother who handed his sister the plates as she set the last one in place.

“Smells good, what’s for dinner today?” asked Zeig’s father coming up behind his wife in a hug.

Blushing, Zeig’s mom answered, “Why soup. I know how much you enjoy it.”

“Why you know me too well,” he replied letting out a hearty chuckle. He approached the table and took a seat in front of Zeig who looked at him wide-eyed. Zeig saw his mother ladling the soup into the bowls as his sister set each bowl carefully on the table. The smell was intoxicating making Zeig’s mouth water. He grabbed a spoon and began eating just as his mother took the seat next to his father and his sister sat next to him. Zeig looked up to see that all eyes were on him and, not minding the attention, he continued to eat. They all looked at him and began to laugh at which Zeig grinned broadly before returning to his soup.

~*~

Zeig opened his eyes and noticed that he was still walking on the dirt path next to two of his four soldiers, confused he paused for a second before looking up at his men as they all stared baffled at him. Giving them a nervous grin he motioned for them to keep on the path as he once again began to lead them.

It was the memory that had confused him. Why, of all the things to remember at this time, was it that one? He could not, for the life in him, answer that. He smiled, it was a nice memory, and he had forgotten that it had even existed due to the grief and sorrow he had bared the time when all was taken away from him. The day that changed his life forever…

~*~

Zeig rose from his bed, it was a day like any other uneventful one. His nose caught the scent of breakfast at which his stomach growled. He dressed quickly and hurried towards the kitchen and to his chair. His mother was in the kitchen as always, stirring a big pot of what smelled to Zeig as oatmeal. He grinned happily, he loved oatmeal; its sweet, cinnamony taste accompanied by a slice of buttery bread, just thinking of that made Zeig’s mouth water.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 10:15 am


If you guys think it needs anything or has something that doesn't fit into the story just let me know and I'll be happy to fix it. And yes, I know cinnamony is not a real word. sweatdrop No flaming please!
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