This is just a simple poem by me, but I'd like a little of your guys' feedback.

Pushing, pulling, ebb and flow,
From where do you come, and where do you go?
Floating, falling, wake and sleep
Reach onto land, then back to the deep.

Coming, going, life and death,
How do you breathe, and where is your breath?
Charging, fleeing, light and dark,
Shores filled with water is my mark.

Roaring, whispering, you and me,
Oh my companion, who can you be?
Forward, backward, windward and lee,
This is my voice, and I am the sea.


Just post some comments... no slashing, please. Even if you don't like it, it was a lot of work.