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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:16 am


|| M Y ... O W N E R ||
Zsolt x Laxis story

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Characters, story and comic is created by Hippori and me.
Do not steal. Do not post anywhere else.
Do not use for commercial.
ASK OUR PERMISSION AND GIVE US CREDIT
IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO USE OUR WORKS!


Thank you


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is created by Hippori and Ray Kitsune.
is original comic
Pencil sketch
Pairing : Zsolt x Laxis
Comic is shounen-ai, light yaoi, serious and drama.
Has some comedy part.
Also contains some violence, blood and a bit sadism.

If you can't bear boylove relationship, please leave.

AND
The language we use in comic is Thai language ne ^^

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THIS COMIC IS CONSIDERED AS DOUJINSHI.
Onsen Party was all done by Hippori. Both storyline and artworks.
It is doujinshi because some characters' personality are out of character (OOC). Especially Damien ^^;
Though it's for amusing biggrin We really hope you will enjoy reading! heart

WARNING
Some pages contain a hint of YAOI/SHOUNEN-AI, but it really doesn't mean any harm ^^; Please take it for fun only.


PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:20 am


Page 1

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Vendor: Congratulations!! you've won the First Prize!!
Zsolt: Huh?
Vendor: Our complimentary of 6 onsen passes values 50,000 golds is now yours!!!

Zsolt: (Onsen? .... not my interest... But...) *glance*

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:23 am


Page 2

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Zsolt: (Exactly....)

Laxis: Let's go, Zsolt!! Let's go to onsen. Go onsen. Go. Yeah! Yeah!
Zsolt: A... um.

Rance: Eh? Can't believe it's you asking.
Adriana: Zsolt?
Jereon: I have my research to...
Rance: You're coming, right? OK! OK! See ya! *hung up*
Jereon: ...
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:24 am


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Grant: Wow!! It's been a while!! Onsen!!
Laxis: Why are you here!?!
Grant: Don't be fuming. There're 6 passes... Relax, midget.
Laxis: Hwhat!!!

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:26 am


Page 4

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Zsolt: (It's hot... If not for free tickkets who's gonna go for onsen on such a hot day.)

???: Huhhhhhhhhh!!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:29 am


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Damien: I thought I've won free onsen pass and I'd have enjoyed my sight at this onsen!!
Damien: But why there's not a soul here!?! Where are those men in thongs!?!

*EMPTY*

Vermillion: Master, you'd rather work on your pending paperwork than loitering here...
Damien: What!?! Vermie!! You seriously want me to work my a** off back-breaking like a pathetic old cow with no male to feed my appetite!?!
Vermillion: Ouch!

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:31 am


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Damien: Tsk! so boring... Let's pack up...
Damien: Onsen without males is useless. My jagucci is better...

Damien: Huh?

Vermillion: So I'll go check-out...
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:33 am


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*WHAM! DONK!*

Adriana: What is it, Zsolt?
Zsolt: Nah... nothing. I think I saw something but never mind.

Damien: Th... That is...
Vermillion: .....

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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:35 am


Page 8

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*chats and laughters*

Grant: Ha Ha Ha!! See?! Here comes Grant the Crocodile of 7 seas. Hahaha!!!

Rance: Hey!! Grant!! I told ya don't swim in onsen pool!!
Grant: Ye can try, Bro!! This pool is really big. Hahaha!!!

Grant: Huh!?
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:38 am


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Laxis: Ha Ha! Today is the day, blond head!! Our 3000 years grudge will be sorted!!!

*SPLASH*

Grant: Damn you! Don't jump down here!! Ouch!! Cough!!

Rance: What a pity... Adriana must be lonely at the ladies' side...

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:40 am


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Jereon: Don't worry...
Rance: Eh?
Jereon: Because this is the public bath...

Rance: WHAT...?

Adriana: Sorry I'm late. Can't find the dresser...
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:41 am


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Grant: Bro, are you okay?

Vermillion: Master, this is a chance to get them.

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:43 am


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Damien: Absolutely, Vermillion... I can't let this chance slip thru my hand...

Damien: A 0.0001 chance that handsome guys gathering here and the mysterious new world under those tiny thongs waiting for me to discover!!
Damien: The trembling force!! The power of love is calling for me!!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:46 am


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Damien: Here I come~ Ho ho ho! heart

Rance: Hey! Zsolt.
Zsolt: Hmm?
Rance: I really wonder why you ask us to a place like onsen...
Zsolt: Told ya I got free tickets...
Rance: Really? Is it that simple?
Zsolt: What do you mean...

Ray Kitsune
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Ray Kitsune
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:51 am


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*TUD TUD*

Rance: Hey Zsolt. Can I have your towel to plug a hole in this bowl?
Zsolt: Huh? Can it help? But never mind...

*TUD TUD*

Zsolt: I can ask for a new one...

Damien: TAKE IT OFF!!
*TUD TUD*
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