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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:04 pm
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anita&jean-claude after the afterglow loll
it was a commision, just finished it today
tell me what you think
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:35 pm
Could stand room for improvment on the faces and body proportion,but I like other wise.
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 9:44 am
amazon_amanda Could stand room for improvment on the faces and body proportion,but I like other wise.
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 6:33 am
Uhm... Weeeeeeeellllllllllll...........
Truth be told, they look very scary. I dont understand whats going on with the chin thing, and I dont get why you can see Anitas belly button through a shirt................................
Moreover, they really shouldnt be able to stand all lopsided like that.......
BUT great effort!
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:54 am
I'd say you need to take some anatomy or figure courses. You don't have a solid grasp on the skeletal and muscular structures and until you do you're art isn't going to look its best. I had the same problem back in High School and didn't really start knowing how to fix it until I got into college bio then figure classes. You also need to draw hands. You can tell you're afraid to draw them because you made Anita's sleeves too long and instead of it looking like her hands are hidden by the sleeves it gives the impression that her arms are too long and very badly broken.
A great refrence source for bodies would be Bridgeman. He's THE authority on all things figure related, most colleges teach using his materials as refrence.
It's a great effort on the piece. I hope I didn't come off as too harsh or anything.
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