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Deny me, Defy you

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grotesquekreeple

PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:15 am


I gave you love
You ignored the signs
An ignorant black dove
Unaware that you are like bine
Always growing
But staying in the same place
Always flowing
With the same gentle face
You were so nervous
With my arm around you
When you returned the favor in what inspired “The Service”
You are in love with someone else and i am too
And like you may suspect she’s not a ho
I’ll hold on to her like i would have done too you
All those years ago
I could not deny you
With, be it may abstinence in your heart
I never thought to defy you
But now is the time that i start
PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:44 pm


Very nice. I especially liked the "An ignorant black dove" line.

Reese_Roper

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