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Song of Lament

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Reese_Roper

PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:10 pm


This is a song in Ambition. I like it. It's sad. surprised

“Your worldly suffering is over,
You time with us is done.
You candle has gone out,
You have gone to join the sun.

We mourn the loss of your earthly light
And the wholesome joys it brings.
But your star will shine forever more
And that is why I sing.

Fare thee well my friend.
Shine over the seas.
I know that your light
Will watch over me.”
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:53 pm


That is sad...

KirbyVictorious


grotesquekreeple

PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:02 am


From what i gather from this he is your sun, and of the time you took to write this he was your god, and is possibly your heart when ever you think of this.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:49 pm


Nope. xd It's her brother, and the song is supposed to be a general lament for dead loved ones.

Reese_Roper

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