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in a world full of misunderstandings

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is this peom ok?
  maybe...
  i think it really sucks
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Mitsuki Sweetblood

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:02 pm


the world is full of misunderstandings
it's so unforgivable
nothing is right
nothing solved
anyone
would fell so down
i cant really change it
but i no how it started
greed and selfishness
everyone wants the better
they cant live without it
but who ever thought
that this guy can change everything...

this is my first poem..
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:21 am


I think you need to go easy on yourself on that poll xd

the poem is fine, how was it writing it? biggrin

hardkoreUSMC
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mikistarchan

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:37 pm


I guess so... sweatdrop I suddenly wanted to write a poem.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:37 pm


oh ya, if dont know who who I am, that's my other account (heh)

mikistarchan

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