>.< I couldn't think of a clever title.
anyways here are all the poems i have on this omcputer. i'll keep updating. Feel free to comment, critisize, whatever... although i do expect all critiques to be logical, thought provoking, and useful... Don't just tell me they suck... tell me why they suck.

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You were perfect
A reflection of heaven itself
Lit my senses like ecstasy
And made my body melt
Like candle wax, pooling
Around your vibrant flame
A feeling so divine
It can hardly have a name
Emotion that’s so strong
That I never could regret
Memories so vivid
That I never could forget
And I remember just the way you taste
Still smell you on my pillowcase
I never could forget your touch
So overwhelming, yet it never was enough


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I've spent all this time
Thinking I hated you
For letting go of everything
And no longer caring about anything
Watching you let go so easy
While I struggled to hold on to everything, anything
And then I realized
That I don't hate you, I envy you
Because you can let go
You can shut out the noise
And be okay with the silence
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Shed my skin
Let Darkness in
and hope simmer through my flesh
just for a moment
lets try to believe
there's something of worth in all this mess
close your eyes
sit back, relax
tell yourself it's all a dream
prove to me, definitively
That I’ll know, someday, what it means
Give me proof
of heaven, of hell
that's more than just a feeling
because remember, once
you believed in love
but even that has lost all meaning
Give me something real to believe
something tangible, worth trying
who cares what happens, don't you see?
Even at this moment, we're dying

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It’s a problem
It’s a problem when you sleep in class
And miss half the notes you need
It’s a problem when you drink a bit too much a bit too fast
And everyone remembers you because you fell a bit too far away
It’s a problem when you can't find the words
For the things you so desperately need to say
It’s a problem when the words you say
Don’t mean a thing to you that way
It’s a problem when the one you love
Is far too gone to love you back
It’s a problem when the one you hate
Is the only one you seem to trust
It’s a problem when you wake up
After dreaming of their face
It’s a problem when you think you're ahead
When you only taken the wrong path
It’s a problem when you think you’re up
But you're really falling down
It’s a problem when the smiles you find
Are secretly disapproving frowns
It’s a problem when the things you do
Turn everyone away
It’s a problem when you say you don't care
But you're secretly afraid
It’s a problem when they think you're strong
But you're as brittle as broken glass
It’s a problem when they lean on you
When you yourself can't even stand
It’s a problem when you try to fly
But fear always makes you land

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