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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:25 pm
::I Was You::
So far from me
I can hear you sing
So far from me
I want to hear everything
Holding me down
I know it's no dream
Holding me down
"Please don't scream"
Waking my distant fears
I know why it's there
Waking my distant fears
I know that you don't care
So far from me
I now see the light
So far from me
I know something's not right
Holding me down
You laugh at what's inside
Holding me down
The pressure is enough to cry
Waking my distant fears
I toss them back at you
Waking my distant fears
I know that I was you
((comments are loved))
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:44 pm
Pretty good. I like the repeating of lines.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 7:39 am
. . .
I love it.
Kinda scared me at first. .
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:26 pm
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