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(Red_Paint)

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:10 pm


Turning Around


She had dark brown hair
Spotted with bright yellow
She was always happy and calm
She was always so mellow

She had issues
Like every normal teen girl
She always had her head in the clouds
She was always in her own world.

Who was this girl?
Everyone would ask
She would always leave the house
And hide behind a mask.

Her friends never seemed to notice
How unhappy she truly was
That she was always a failure
In everything she does.

She was always wondering
Who ever understood?
She never lived her life
She never thought she could.

She left her friends
The ones that were always by her side
She thought life was a dead game
She tried so hard to run and hide.

"You really should go back
Your true life didn't begin
I know how you feel.
As if you can never win."

A soft voice whispered to her
in the night of a new day
She was a refection or herself
heading in a separate way.

She listened to herself
Following herself into the night
She went back to the day
She lost her fight

Now ever since that day
She's been doing everything she could
She's always trying
Everything her mind would

This is really something to say
That you should never let yourself die
You should always face your fears
And you should always go out and try.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:14 pm


What an amazing and mystical poem! It flowed smoothly like a calm river on a summer day! :claps: ^_^

Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen

Halo Rising


Sanity Stops Here

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 3:37 pm


wow, i feel sad now. moving, yet i couldn't relate to the person in the story(but then again, im not always happy) one thumb up
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:18 pm


I thought that was a really good poem, and I especially liked the end. Keep up the good work! mrgreen

cool_cait


lovely-problems

PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:17 am


I can, in a way, relate to the girl in the poem (but with more anger and frustration), so I really like it, and the title fits well.
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