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 Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:58 pm
HEEEHEHEHEHEHEHHEE
HAHAHAHAHA
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
HAHAHAHAHAHHA
the voices come, I'm lost
the insects crawl, I'm lost
the walls close, I'm lost
the scabs crust, I'm lost
Fake insanity inside my
Fake reality inside my
Fake misery inside my
FAKE FANTASY!
It sucks I know but thats as far as it got writing wise, before one of my bands fell apart, it was meant to be like old school Faith no More on acid in terms of singing style, but in the end its just another incomplete work from me. So opinions of the first verses and should I finnish it?
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:10 pm
Rellik San HEEEHEHEHEHEHEHHEE HAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHHA the voices come, I'm lost the insects crawl, I'm lost the walls close, I'm lost the scabs crust, I'm lost Fake insanity inside my Fake reality inside my Fake misery inside my FAKE FANTASY! It sucks I know but thats as far as it got writing wise, before one of my bands fell apart, it was meant to be like old school Faith no More on acid in terms of singing style, but in the end its just another incomplete work from me. So opinions of the first verses and should I finnish it? I think you should finnish it. It seems very interesting, i'd like to see how the rest goes. :3
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:46 pm
Faith No More is very metaphor-based. Try that?
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