As the title says, please read my story. I have spent time and time again writing it and putting as much of my effort to make it into a nice story as much as possible. I would appreciate it if you could give me some constructive criticism for each chapter, or the story so far.

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Note: the story is NOT A FANFICTION I just used the picture as a banner and as a joke to advertise and get people to read it.

Thank you for you time

~S