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To Feel (Pain, Joy, Happiness, Depression)

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Blazingroze500

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:07 pm


To Feel

I can feel the blood pulsing through these veins
Heating my soul and fueling my anger
My sight is clouded by the crimson mist swirling about me
Born of the steam from my extinguished heart
I can feel the shadows rising forth from dark recesses
Seeping steadily into my lame muscles
A black depression slowly entwining itself with my soul
Dragging me down into the darkness
My can feel the light encroaching upon my slumber
Like a nuisance born on feathery white wings
Attempting to pierce through my subconsious thoughts
Hurting my mind with it's radiating light
These different feelings are opening the rusted locks
Trying to invade my inner being
Transforming my exterior to fit their selfish needs
But I can feel the new power rising forth
So stand in fear as you gaze upon my new form
A wing of white paired with a wing of black
A crimson mist swirling around this darkened soul inside
With dry tears, I slowly realize, that I no longer feel
...anything
PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 9:52 pm


I really like it ^_^

mikistarchan


Blazingroze500

PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 10:49 am


thank you.
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