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ms_dragonfire

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:45 pm


Poem number one.
Vampyre Kiss
As I kiss you softly on the cheek,

You look at me, mild and meak.

When you hold me nice and tight,

I think my heart may just take flight.

Our hearts start to soar,

As our jackets hit the floor.

My fangs start to grow,

You probably like it more than I know.

They sink into you,

You only know one thing to do.

You decide that you should stay,

Then you start to say;

"I am in ecstasy,

Now that you have set me free."




Poem number two. (The one that's published)

My Sister



Gee, my sister is neat.

She makes her own songs,

she paves her own way.

Some of her stories are rather long,

but they'remstill happy and gay!

She is very LOUD,

but she still is rather fun.

She gets into trouble alot...

yat she still manages to run.

She's a dancer and prancer,

and a pretty good one, too!

I love my sister,

but she hasn't a clue.


The others will be here shortly.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:49 pm


They're good. I love the first one though, it has that quality to it.....idk, I guess saying "fangs" gets my attention every time. Though, it was well-written, Vampyrism aside

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:49 pm


I like them both n.n :-3
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:56 pm


Thank you!! (the second one is almost a biography of my 6 year old sister)

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:58 pm


..I could just relate... My sister and I are the same way...
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:12 pm


lol. My sister and I couldn't be more different.

ms_dragonfire

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