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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:09 pm

And here she sits her wings wraped around my tender soul
Holding a rose, the one he gave me.
I look up into the sky, and soon the wind blows
Conestently changing directions, yet everything stays still

Two beautys uneffected by nature,
the pettles freeze and fall from the once beautiful flower
Tears roll down my cheeks
And my angel sings a song

A song of tender, one of love
Where a new rose is blossomed unharmed by the world
I do not believe her song and she sighs in distress
Slowly she gets up, offering a hand

Soon, the sounds of the owl and waterfall fill my ears
Overwhelming my skin and ears
"Soon my child" she whispers as i get off the ground
"You shall rejoin me."

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:16 pm

Wow....Babe...it's beautiful

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:27 pm

No its not, its just something that i wrote while typing, not even a draft. I'd throw it out if i could

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:28 pm

No. I love it.

And you know how I get when I fall in love with something.

Put it on your fictionpress, I really think it's beautiful. A few edits would make it a -little- better, but I love it.

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:37 pm

I don't care... Its s**t, i know

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:40 pm

No. It's not. You don't believe that I really love it?

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:48 pm

no i don't

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:50 pm

Good. Cuz I love it like I love.....my friends.

And I honestly think it's good. You're a good writer, no matter what
you want to believe on the subject.

I would know...I've seen your homework. razz

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:54 pm

Wow. I think it's a lovely poem!!

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:55 pm

ms_dragonfire

Wow. I think it's a lovely poem!!

See, Babe? I WIN!

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:57 pm

Um.. i was disputing you but umm okay? Thank you for your kindness but....

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:58 pm

*glares at Chris* Always have to turn other people's words to your side, do we? I was simply saying that I like it and it was well written.

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:59 pm

You were saying the same thing I was.

And she needed to hear it from someone other than me.

So..yeah.

But you're right, it is well written.

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:02 pm

-.-;;

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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:03 pm

Oh, you know you love me.

..heh...

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