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The Almighty Ali

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:47 pm


Welcome one and all, It is me...Ali.....the guy with the tentacles and s**t.
Now, alot of people often complain on how they feel inferior to those that write very long posts. So i'm here to give you all a few tips that you may or may not use in the future, it's entirely up too you.

Let's get started, shal we?

Ali's nice rules to not piss of the people behind the characters

1. Never God-mod, auto-hit or write L33t language when RP-ing
Vital reminder: Using logic and your opponents flaws in a battle is not god-moding, like water wins over fire attacks, Ice can be broken but it depends on the thickness and shadows are vulnerable to light. Also if opponent 1 punches towards opponent 2's face, opponent 2 can avoid and counter-attack. But everybody takes damage in a fight.

2. Never get too personal when Rp-ing, most aren't they way they are when RP-ing as they are in Real life. hate the character not the person behind it.

3. Keep in mind that children might be reading what you're writting, Any sexual oriented activities should be hidden behind metaphores or just avoid it all together.
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Read them, remember them.
I'll get angry if i see you violate the tips above after reading them.

Tips on how to become a better RP-er

1. Describe the environment, character and feelings they might have.
It doesn't have to be too fancy as most usualy falls asleep if you write half a page about what shade of blue your characters eyes are.

2. Typoes are frequent and if you don't even have English as your mother tounge then it's even worse, if there is a word that troubles you either find a dictionary or simply write (Sp?) behind the word.
For the love of good do not include it after every damn word

3. Be creative, i'm so sick of people walking around saying " I am the son of Satan, I am God incarnated, I have a overly sized melon up my rectum"
Think of something that hasn't been done for about 500.000 times before you, invent your own gods or something. I doubt the lord almighty will strike you down with lightning if you come up with a god named Earl.

4. Keep it realistic, difficult to do when Vampires and hybrid tentacles monsters roam around like lawyer on 5th avenue but atleast try to keep it logical.

5. Nobody Rp's the same way that you do, everybody has their own way and the amount to add into their posts. Respect that and eachother. Just because they don't do it like you doesn't mean it's wrong.
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Okay, that wasn't too difficult now was it?
As a bonus I will gave a small rating and a few pointers on any text you put inside the topic, Questions will also be answered to the best of my abillities.
Have fun Ya'll
PostPosted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 7:45 am


*Text inside topic*

Rate it bish domokun

DevilsAngel100


The Almighty Ali

PostPosted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 8:02 am


DevilsAngel100
*Text inside topic*

Rate it bish domokun
Har har rolleyes
PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:34 am


Dude i was being serious...

DevilsAngel100


Dark Pentacle

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 2:32 pm


take a book to burn in his fire place at home "yes this will last for a long time" run home with book in hand
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 3:27 pm


Dark Pentacle
take a book to burn in his fire place at home "yes this will last for a long time" run home with book in hand
3/10
Abit unstructured.
No capital letters.
No puncturation.
Somewhat dull to read.

To clear things out, I want you to write stories to the best of your abillities for me to rate and comment on. This isn't The Chatterbox. Be serious or refrain from posting all together.

The Almighty Ali


DevilsAngel100

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:00 am


Amara walked in slowly with a slight smile. She wore a long, strapless, navy blue satin gown that follow her slender and curvy figure right down to the floor where it hung around her feet and behind her a little as she walked. There was a large slit up one side, finishing just above her knee to allow her to walk with ease and she held a small navy blue satin bag which seemed to match her dress perfectly, encrusted with a large gem on the handle. Her pale blue hair was let loose, curley and dangling right down to the low of her back. She wore a silver head dress which weaved in with her hair, covered in silver leaves and newly formed plant pods waiting to form into a flower, each pod a different colour gem. Her long pointed ears were decorated with silver jewelry with blue jewels, chains that travelled from the point of the ear to the lobe, but, as soon as your eyes layed on her, you noticed the large emerald necklace she wore.

The necklace itself was silver, but a large emerald, almost the size of a babies fist, hung from it. Although it seemed completely out of place with her theme of blue tonight, it looks perfect as her great green eyes helped the colour to look in its place. Amara refused to go to a ball or any other special occasion without this pendant, for her mother gave it to her when she was young, and although it was impossible, whenever Amara placed the pendant around her neck, she felt as though the spirit of her mother was standing beside her.

She smiled and looked around the large ballroom in amazement, the decoration, the music, everthing seemed perfect, but the thing that caught her eye the most, were the people - everyone looked dazzling... so dazzling that she thought that she herself may have under dressed a little. She let out a small sigh and walked to a table and placed her bag on it before sitting firmly down.



That's from a Ballroom post in one of my other guilds.... I'm giving ya something to rate 4laugh
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:55 am


Devils Angel
9.4/10
I've always known you were a good RP-er but in that text you start of great and descriptive, the middle is also good but the ending i find alittle quick and much different the the other two parts. If you inclulde abit description of the table itself, some of the people that catches her eye and the room itself more. One of the things that often makes be abit irritated is when a Rp takes place in say in a small worn down hut and people reply with " oh such marvelous decoraction inside this lovely mansion."
Either their character is delerious or hyped up on Valium or something.

But all in all, great text but could use abit more description in the end.
Alternativly a quick "walkthrough" on how and what her mother looked like if the character remembers. 3nodding

The Almighty Ali


Dark Pentacle

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:10 pm


How about this we go to the Battle Field and i show you how well i can write. Not to show off our ego just to show you how i write.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:30 pm


Dark Pentacle
How about this we go to the Battle Field and i show you how well i can write. Not to show off our ego just to show you how i write.
Then there wouldn't be much use for this topic.
If your ego did take a hit by the rate then get over it.

I give the rating i think the stories deserve, If you don't like that then just don't post here.
I'm not forcing you with a pistol to be here and participate.

The Almighty Ali


DevilsAngel100

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 12:58 am


Aliator
Devils Angel
9.4/10
I've always known you were a good RP-er but in that text you start of great and descriptive, the middle is also good but the ending i find alittle quick and much different the the other two parts. If you inclulde abit description of the table itself, some of the people that catches her eye and the room itself more. One of the things that often makes be abit irritated is when a Rp takes place in say in a small worn down hut and people reply with " oh such marvelous decoraction inside this lovely mansion."
Either their character is delerious or hyped up on Valium or something.

But all in all, great text but could use abit more description in the end.
Alternativly a quick "walkthrough" on how and what her mother looked like if the character remembers. 3nodding
Hmmm... i see where ya coming from... thanks

;D heart
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