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 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 10:29 pm
Okay, like the name said, this is my first GazettE fanfic.
And I'm actually quite proud of what I have done...
But since this is my first fanfic, I need help with a few things. Such as title, bits and pieces of the story, and how much it grabs the reader's attention.
I'm a bit of a perfectionist, so I want it to be good.
So yeah.
Okay, so this is the basic plot that I had in mind(feel free to give your own opinion on how good this is, and just so you know I'm not exactly good at writing out my plots in plot form): Quote: Reita discovers a very mysterious author and starts reading her books and then meets her in a bookstore one day when he was hanging out with his bandmates in the shopping district(no duh). The mystrious author seems malicious and evil at first, but soon grows on the members of the GazettE. As they become closer friends they find out about her horrible past and her problems with trust and love. As she grows on him Ruki finds himself wondering if she could ever love someone again, and doesn't know why he's thinking these things.
so there's my basic storyline.
I'd like an opinion on that.
Also, tell me if you want an excerpt from the story that I have already.
so please!
honest opinions please!
If you think it sucks a** just tell me. sweatdrop
but if you do think it sucks a** then tell me what about it you think sucks, so that I may do surgery.
so yeah.
that's all I have for now.Woot!
Grinnie has the first two parts up!!
8D
And she decided to go with RoanokoDarkHeart's suggestion of Within These Pages!!
8D
yay!
arigatou!
~GrinnieIt's dead. =P domokun domokun domokun domokun
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:04 pm
I haven't read all of it...I don't have an opinion... XP
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:57 pm
ScotlandNeedsWerewolves I haven't read all of it...I don't have an opinion... XP I haven't finished it. That's why.
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 3:28 pm
Oh...:B That would explain it. I wanna read it. =D
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:02 am
I've gotten some good feedback from my minions...
Once I decide on a title then I'm going to put it on livejournal, and I'll put up a link.
but how does the plot sound? not too generic is it?
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 10:35 am
It has my favorite band it. Of course I'm going to think it's good. xD
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 6:29 pm
thank you.
and I've kind of stopped working on it as of last night.
Thanks to s**t going on in my life, but I will start up as soon as my life gets back on track.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:40 pm
I understand. ^^ I've just gone through some s**t myself. But...now that it's over, I feel much better! ^.^ I hope everything turns out okay.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 12:28 pm
I hope so too.
v.v
But I think that I might be able to write a little more today...
key words: I think.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:41 pm
You just take your time. I'm no rush. ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 2:57 am
Woo! I'm better!(kinda)
*glomps GazettE in fangirlish love*
Woot!
At least I'm getting miserable Ruki over with!
(sorry, it's just part of teh story)
and I'm happy enough to give Yumei her normal persona!
*dances*
Wow...
I read over what I wrote and I feel bad for poor little Ruki..
^^;
kinda.
*dodges bricks*
god. I'm already on page twenty!
^^
woot!
I just need to get my title confirmed and then BAM onto lj it goes!
8D
It's three in the ******** morning! I've been writing all night!
*insert unnatural giggling fit*
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 6:36 am
I'd have been asleep for three hours. I can't stay up that late. Although, early in the morning is about when good fic ideas come, isn't it? xD
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 9:08 am
yup!
^^
I almost cried when I wrote a paragraph in the fic.
must mean it's good.
^^
This is the second time I've been up all night.
The other time was the night before last.
But I wasn't on then, but last night I was downloading music, writing and posting on here.
8D
Life ish gewd, mate.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 1:39 pm
I've only ever cried twice while experiencing works of fiction. So, if I'm not bawling, it's not cause I'm a heartless monster, kay? :B
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:21 pm
that's okay~
I've always kinda been a softie....but then I'm also insane at times so...I have no clue. _-_
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