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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 1:49 pm
-Sorry I haven't written in a while. I truly hate that I couldn't post some more work I have had over the few days I haven't been on. I am moving and It makes it harder to get on lately. I hope you enjoy.. Thank-you.
Your words are gone
Without a clear distinction why
All my thoughts are lost
Withering
your infidelity creeps into my mind
Your lies course through my veins
My heart bleeds with all the pain
Because of you
It started out slow
But weak was my mind to believe
That the ones looking out for me were true
They told me you were bad
They told me I would get hurt
But my heart loved you
There is nothing I despise more
Than the facts I hold
After it all
I still love you
I couldn't let go
And I fear I never will
deteriorating my body and soul
I realize what you've done
As if I never mattered
You played your games
And you lost
Never to know what could have been
I regret nothing
Only that your with her now
And you will never know what could have been
To have someone truly love you as I do
To have someone care about you
With their heart pure
But you chose her
And Now I sit here to think
That I can find somone
Who will treat me how I once treated you
Who will love me unconditionally
I am threw with your infidelity
And everything you brought upon my heart
Crushing it to its lowest dungeons
I don't deserve your pain and disgrace
But I'll never let go
So in a matter
I'll always be in that one dungeon room
At the bottom of my mind
Because I loved you with all my heart
I never let go
And I never gave up
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:29 pm
Yeah, I can relate to this. Really great work. And no worries on the posting. It happens. And is understandable.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:33 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 6:53 pm
Very nice, it's has been a while hasn't it, lol, so how have you been? 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:45 pm
Very good poem. It reminds me a lot of myself. And just to let you know, in the line "I am threw with your infidelity," threw should be through. But other than that good job! mrgreen
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