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Oddnerd101
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 12:10 pm


I told this story to Bfox one day when i was bored... I found it saved on my computer... i was bored again. mad P
and i only know that i told it to Bfox because he was rude and talked while i was telling him a story!



OddNerd101: so this one time there was this little boy
OddNerd101: his name was Jack
OddNerd101: and he lives on London Ave.
Le_Newtype: o.o
OddNerd101: the ice cream man was going down London Ave. one afternoon
OddNerd101: and little Jack heard him coming and wanted an ice cream
OddNerd101: little Jack ran to his mommy and begged her to let him get ice cream form the ice cream man
OddNerd101: she eventually said yes
OddNerd101: so little Jack got his piggy bank money and ran outside and waited while the ice cream man was coming down the road
Le_Newtype: and he died
OddNerd101: when the ice cream man came little Jack waited online for his ice cream
OddNerd101: but the big kids kept pushing him more and more back until he was last in line
OddNerd101: once everyone else got their ice cream and went home only little Jack was left.
OddNerd101: he looked at the side of the truck and saw the normal chocolate and vanilla cone, but didn't want that. He wanted something new
OddNerd101: so he asked the ice cream man what he had that was new
OddNerd101: the ice cream man said "i have Tuesday surprise, only today though because it's Tuesday!"
OddNerd101: so little Jack said he'd have one Tuesday surprise.
Le_Newtype: ...
OddNerd101: he handed his money to the ice cream man and waited while the ice cream man went to get his ice cream
OddNerd101: the ice cream man came back with the little boy's money and receipt first
OddNerd101: on the receipt it said that little Jack had won the 1 millionth customer special
OddNerd101: he showed it to the ice cream man and handed it back
OddNerd101: the ice cream man read what the receipt said and replied "well your in for a surprise."
OddNerd101: "come around to the side of the truck and hop in"
Le_Newtype: @_@ where is this going?
OddNerd101: so little Jack went to the door and was about to hop in.
OddNerd101: but as he opened the door he was hit with a blast of cold air
OddNerd101: little Jack was frozen
OddNerd101: when little Jack woke up form his frozen nap he was in the Caribbean
OddNerd101: it was also year 2974 according to a newspaper next to him.
OddNerd101: little Jack was very scared.
OddNerd101: why and how did he get to the Caribbean with nothing but a newspaper...
OddNerd101: but then realized he was surrounded by Tuesday surprise ice cream cones.
OddNerd101: he was very happy then
OddNerd101: and live happily ever after... in year 2974
OddNerd101: the moral of this story is to never give a cat a muffin

xp


i like random-ness


that's one of my worser stories... i have ones where rocks scare you and paper clips take over the world... those are better.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 1:58 pm


Oddnerd101
I told this story to Bfox one day when i was bored... I found it saved on my computer... i was bored again. mad P
and i only know that i told it to Bfox because he was rude and talked while i was telling him a story!



OddNerd101: so this one time there was this little boy
OddNerd101: his name was Jack
OddNerd101: and he lives on London Ave.
Le_Newtype: o.o
OddNerd101: the ice cream man was going down London Ave. one afternoon
OddNerd101: and little Jack heard him coming and wanted an ice cream
OddNerd101: little Jack ran to his mommy and begged her to let him get ice cream form the ice cream man
OddNerd101: she eventually said yes
OddNerd101: so little Jack got his piggy bank money and ran outside and waited while the ice cream man was coming down the road
Le_Newtype: and he died
OddNerd101: when the ice cream man came little Jack waited online for his ice cream
OddNerd101: but the big kids kept pushing him more and more back until he was last in line
OddNerd101: once everyone else got their ice cream and went home only little Jack was left.
OddNerd101: he looked at the side of the truck and saw the normal chocolate and vanilla cone, but didn't want that. He wanted something new
OddNerd101: so he asked the ice cream man what he had that was new
OddNerd101: the ice cream man said "i have Tuesday surprise, only today though because it's Tuesday!"
OddNerd101: so little Jack said he'd have one Tuesday surprise.
Le_Newtype: ...
OddNerd101: he handed his money to the ice cream man and waited while the ice cream man went to get his ice cream
OddNerd101: the ice cream man came back with the little boy's money and receipt first
OddNerd101: on the receipt it said that little Jack had won the 1 millionth customer special
OddNerd101: he showed it to the ice cream man and handed it back
OddNerd101: the ice cream man read what the receipt said and replied "well your in for a surprise."
OddNerd101: "come around to the side of the truck and hop in"
Le_Newtype: @_@ where is this going?
OddNerd101: so little Jack went to the door and was about to hop in.
OddNerd101: but as he opened the door he was hit with a blast of cold air
OddNerd101: little Jack was frozen
OddNerd101: when little Jack woke up form his frozen nap he was in the Caribbean
OddNerd101: it was also year 2974 according to a newspaper next to him.
OddNerd101: little Jack was very scared.
OddNerd101: why and how did he get to the Caribbean with nothing but a newspaper...
OddNerd101: but then realized he was surrounded by Tuesday surprise ice cream cones.
OddNerd101: he was very happy then
OddNerd101: and live happily ever after... in year 2974
OddNerd101: the moral of this story is to never give a cat a muffin

xp


i like random-ness


that's one of my worser stories... i have ones where rocks scare you and paper clips take over the world... those are better.

So then tell one about rocks scaring me and paper clips taking over the world.

thatssofingers
Captain


Le_newtype
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:13 pm


xd !
PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 3:14 pm


So this is a different writing style your probably not used to. It's meant to be a meditation symbolism story. Where you sit in silence with your eyes closed... listening to only the story. The story is supposed to be told with a beat. The beat at times can be faster than others, which is supposed to make your heart race... while your mind is lost in the story. So obviously your not hearing the story the way it's meant to be told because your not listening to it... but hopefully that explains to you why it's written so strangely. You should still be able to pick out all the symbolism and points to the story though.





Ok, Your walking on a beach and find a nice spot to sit down. You feel the sand between your toes and turn to your right; you scoop up a handful of sand and let it run through your fingers. Once all the sand is gone a rock is still lying in your hand. You look at it and it reminds you of all the mistakes you've ever made in life. Why you don't know; you look up out into the ocean. You throw the rock ...you blink and soon your in the ocean. You go under water. The water doesn't effect you at all. You stay under watching the fish swim around in the coral reef. You decide to swim forward. You blink again and the fish and plants are gone...

You look all round... up and down... but all you see is water. No air... no surface... no bottom... no fish or plants. You swim forward. You keep going and going looking for something... anything. Just as your about to give up, you see something. You swim faster and faster towards it. It’s a small circle. You reach out for it with your right hand. In your hand you grasp the rock you had thrown. You look down at the rock. You blink again and your back on the beach...

You sit there, with the sand in your toes, and the rock still in your right hand. You look around. Your still alone. You see a bird flying around. You wonder what it would be like to fly... have no boundaries. You could go anywhere. You throw the rock that reminds you of all the mistakes you've ever had in life. Except this time up, and not into the ocean. You wait for it to come down, but it doesn’t. You jump up wondering what happened to the rock. Then, you notice that your not on the ground. Your flying. You fly over the ocean and all around. You wonder on where to go. You decide that where ever your heart takes you, you know you’ll love it...

You land in a rain forest. Not sure where but on a rain forest tree’s branch. You look around. Every where you see animals. All of them in their natural habitat. You sit and watch them from the tree limb. As you sit there you start to think. These animals are so lucky. All they need to do is find food and shelter to sleep in. No worries or stress. They do what needs to be done, and don't dally on the meaningless things that won't make a difference later on. Soon you decide you want a closer look, but stay where you are... not being sure what these animals might do if you intrude on their peace. You decide you should be returning to the beach again. You fly back to the deserted beach...

You lie flat on your back. Sand back on your toes and the rock in your right hand. How the rock came back to you, you don’t know. After awhile of relaxing you decide to get up and look around. You leave the rock. You don’t know why you’ve even been holding on to it for so long. The beach is empty. All you see is sand and water. You start walking. Still you see nothing. You start to jog. Still nothing. Your slowing down now. You see no point in jogging or going anywhere. There is nothing... nothing at all. Just sand and water. Just as you stop you see your house.. you start to walk towards it. Soon you realize it’s not getting any closer. So you jog still you notice nothing different about the distance of your house. You run and run and run... your sprinting! Your running out of breath so you slow down. Your at a jog again and now a walk. Your out of breath. You stop but you feel faint and take a step backwards. As you took that step backwards your house got closer. You take another step backwards. It comes even closer. You keep walking backwards not taking your eyes off of your house...

So you reach it. You reach for the door to go inside, but as you pull the knob something doesn’t feel right, and your instinct was correct. You’re not where you’re supposed to be. You see a room with plain walls, and 3 doors... one to the right, one to the left, and one in front. You’ve got the feeling that one of these doors leads you to your room. The only place you want to be right now. You decide to open the door in front. Your under water again you can breath easily; there is no bottom and no air above... nothing anywhere... just water. You swim backwards and your back in the room with the 3 doors. You chose the right one. You see your room. Your so happy everything is as you left it. You lay down on your bed. You’re very tired. You rest your head on your pillow. And something hurts. Your reach under the pillow. It’s the rock. The rock that reminds you of all the mistakes you've ever made in life. You hold it in your right hand, and fall into a nice relaxing sleep.

Oddnerd101
Crew


Oddnerd101
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:33 pm


ninja where is everyone?
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:20 am


Lost my patience around the birdy part...

thatssofingers
Captain


Oddnerd101
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 1:27 pm


haha xD yesh that one's boring... and well not good...

i need to dig up the ones i submitted in my schools Lit Mag...
but first someone else has to post a story for me to read. smile
PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 12:33 pm


Oddnerd101
I told this story to Bfox one day when i was bored... I found it saved on my computer... i was bored again. mad P
and i only know that i told it to Bfox because he was rude and talked while i was telling him a story!



OddNerd101: so this one time there was this little boy
OddNerd101: his name was Jack
OddNerd101: and he lives on London Ave.
Le_Newtype: o.o
OddNerd101: the ice cream man was going down London Ave. one afternoon
OddNerd101: and little Jack heard him coming and wanted an ice cream
OddNerd101: little Jack ran to his mommy and begged her to let him get ice cream form the ice cream man
OddNerd101: she eventually said yes
OddNerd101: so little Jack got his piggy bank money and ran outside and waited while the ice cream man was coming down the road
Le_Newtype: and he died
OddNerd101: when the ice cream man came little Jack waited online for his ice cream
OddNerd101: but the big kids kept pushing him more and more back until he was last in line
OddNerd101: once everyone else got their ice cream and went home only little Jack was left.
OddNerd101: he looked at the side of the truck and saw the normal chocolate and vanilla cone, but didn't want that. He wanted something new
OddNerd101: so he asked the ice cream man what he had that was new
OddNerd101: the ice cream man said "i have Tuesday surprise, only today though because it's Tuesday!"
OddNerd101: so little Jack said he'd have one Tuesday surprise.
Le_Newtype: ...
OddNerd101: he handed his money to the ice cream man and waited while the ice cream man went to get his ice cream
OddNerd101: the ice cream man came back with the little boy's money and receipt first
OddNerd101: on the receipt it said that little Jack had won the 1 millionth customer special
OddNerd101: he showed it to the ice cream man and handed it back
OddNerd101: the ice cream man read what the receipt said and replied "well your in for a surprise."
OddNerd101: "come around to the side of the truck and hop in"
Le_Newtype: @_@ where is this going?
OddNerd101: so little Jack went to the door and was about to hop in.
OddNerd101: but as he opened the door he was hit with a blast of cold air
OddNerd101: little Jack was frozen
OddNerd101: when little Jack woke up form his frozen nap he was in the Caribbean
OddNerd101: it was also year 2974 according to a newspaper next to him.
OddNerd101: little Jack was very scared.
OddNerd101: why and how did he get to the Caribbean with nothing but a newspaper...
OddNerd101: but then realized he was surrounded by Tuesday surprise ice cream cones.
OddNerd101: he was very happy then
OddNerd101: and live happily ever after... in year 2974
OddNerd101: the moral of this story is to never give a cat a muffin

xp


i like random-ness


that's one of my worser stories... i have ones where rocks scare you and paper clips take over the world... those are better.


*tear* Wow. That was such a beautiful story. emo

loversXrequiem


Grell

PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 1:01 pm


o.O
PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 1:02 pm


Cappy101
o.O
xd story of my life

Le_newtype
Vice Captain


Oddnerd101
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 1:59 pm


Le_newtype
Cappy101
o.O
xd story of my life
are you telling me you didn't like my story! gonk
I was bored that day, and decided to tell you a story, and you don't appreciate it crying your soo mean!
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