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Sonnet -- Heavens's Pure Love

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a soul of thunder

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:36 am


So this is a Shakesperian Sonnet, it has 14 lines and every other line rhymes with each other. For exmaple
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All lines with the same number rhyme with each other. Each line has 10 syllables exactly, and the last two lines rhyme with each other. (Is suppose to be indented but the Gaia layout won't let me do that.... crying )
Now you can comment all you want on it.



Heaven’s Pure Love


It’s sheer perfection, when you hold my hand,
Your soft touch makes my beating heart give chase.
Mind always gives in to the hearts demand,
My body is caught in your sweet embrace,
I’m trapped in the forever of your kiss.
Immortal nectar graces my chaste lip,
Forever lost in the eternal bliss.
From heaven’s cup, I stole away a sip,
All myself to your pure love I will give,
I can feel my pulsing heart screaming out,
Your unstained soul and heart calls me to live,
And I know you love me without a doubt.
When our souls had crossed, the fair heavens shined,
For evermore our hearts will be entwined.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:33 am


Good! 3nodding


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a soul of thunder

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:00 pm


Phanks! whee
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