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i was bored....

Miss G Baby

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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:07 am

here's a poem

STOP PLAYING

Do you believe in love at first sight?
Or even love at all?
Cause your breaking my heart making me wait..
Making me wait in the dark
I wish you knew how I felt
Instead of these jokes you play......

i know its stupid just post some comments about and some of your own poems.......

Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:35 am

'tis a good poem. 3nodding

sadly, i dont write poems... stare

Babies in the Oven

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The-helper-of-the-poor

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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:37 am

don't they have a sub-forum for this?

Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:13 am

Sakuto Uchiha

don't they have a sub-forum for this?

Yes... yes we do... MOVED!

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Placeo

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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:31 pm

Miss G Baby

here's a poem

STOP PLAYING

Do you believe in love at first sight?
Or even love at all?
'Cause you're breaking my heart making me wait..
Making me wait in the dark
I wish you knew how I felt
Instead of these jokes you play......

i know its stupid just post some comments about and some of your own poems.......

Well, you used a pretty overused theme. One that has about fifty-million other poems exactly like this one. But at least you have some kind of flow in your line, "Cause you're breaking my heart making me wait..
Making me wait in the dark."

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