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hey everyone! i'm new at this role playing thing so plz be nice crying any way ok here's the bio:
name: Sakura Granger
age: 14
b-day: v-day
bio: youngest sibling and only daughter of the Granger family. Finished college at age 13 in paris and just came back home to the granger dojo where she met kai and fell for ray but kai fell for her. (she has to end up with kai) BY THE WAY U GUYS CAN MAKE HENTAI FOR THIS!!! biggrin biggrin biggrin

((No we can't do hentai. Against guild And Gaia rules. PG-13. You might want to try and make an organised first post- like have a brief paragraph describing the story/setting separately from your character's bio. Then have a section for the Characters in the RP- so you can keep track of everyone. Sometimes it's an idea to separate the Original Characters from the canon ones- makes it easy for people to see if the canon character they want has been claimed.

Are you intending to play either Kai or Rei or do you want other people to play them? If that then you might want to put something in the title and then PM either Me, Lainy Wolf or K. Hiwatari and when the next newsletter comes out we'll stick in an ad calling people to come and help you out.

Please don't take this as me just being nasty and bitchy- just trying to help. I know that you're new to RPing and that's all good just having a bit of organisation in your posts generally makes more people interested in joining, okay? ^^

Did that help?))

ok um- Sakura usually wears gentle and light colors. I believe that the only one who can unfreeze kai's heart is with love and gentleness so...srry to burst any punk's, goth's, or emo's bubbles... sweatdrop

So far you just have your character info...whats the plot, setting, etc?

|[Well actually, I think Panda already gave you a great deal of help. ^^;]|

|[I'll be repeating Panda, sort of, but here's some tips on gettings started.
I understant when you're stating being new at roleplaying and I actually believe it was already a good step for you to make a profile for your character. However, your first post lacks organization.]|

[|What I mean by this is not that it's all wrong, I simply mean you should start out with a simple plot; for example, your character's bio is enough all by itself to make a simple plot, not really any development required.]|

|[You should add a small set of rules, either in the first post or in the next few in case you want to separate everything - even though it's mostly used for longer rp's and usually ends up filling part of the front page. Just some small literacy rules, mutual respect and no hentai. It's against the Gaiaonline Terms of Service, so unless the person you're roleplaying with wouldn't agree, you should take it to PMs.]|

|[Like Panda said, separating Original Characters from Canons is a good idea, as it's easier to figure out who is who and which original characters belong to who, as well as knowing when a profile ends and the other one starts. If you want, you can take a look at other rp's, see how they're set.]|

|[^^; I know I've sounded annoying so far, but please, I'm not censoring you. In the contrary, I am actually feeling quite happy now - though that might be because I'm nearly falling to the side with lack of sleep.]|

|[If you're going to allow other original characters, you might also want to make a general template; usually it helps out, because people have an idea of what to write. it doesn't have to be a gigantic list of questions; in fact, simple templates are often enough to give a good description. The one you used in the first post for once, if you add the appearance and a tad more descriptive bio/personality, people get to know your character a little better and vice-versa. - Sorry if I didn't much sense here.]|

|[I guess this is all I can help out with, at least without filling your first page with a text wall. ^^; I hope you didn't take me wrong; as I meantion, I don't mean to sound rude. If you have anymore questions or would like me to go a bit more into detail about RPs, feel free to contact me. I might take some time replying because of being busy with school and all, but I surely will.]|

Plot: (What's the plot?)


Characters:

Kai: RPed by?
Rei:
Max:
Tyson:
Etc on main characters...

Other characters:

Name:
Age:
Username:
Description:
Bit beast:


(Try something like this...)

Plot: hmm...let's see um- well we all know that kai's biggest rival is tyson. and he falls for tyson's sister but he doesn't figure out that she's tyson's sister until after he's about to tell her he loves her. and um- let's see...well kai's not really supposed to fall for anyone cause his grandfather might use them against him...u know where this is going...


Characters:
I need people to play the main characters plz...
Kai:
Ray:
Max:
Tyson:
Kenny:
Hilary: (oh by the way later on hilary dies MWAHAHAHAHAH!!!! (slightly jk))

Other characters:
name: Sakura Granger
age: 14
b-day: v-day
bio: youngest sibling and only daughter of the Granger family. Finished college at age 13 in paris and just came back home to the granger dojo where she met kai and fell for ray but kai fell for her. (she has to end up with kai)
appearace surprised k Sakura has medium lengthed light ice blue hair and deep sky blue eyes. she's nothing like her brother. she cooks and cleans and she barely eats. she's kind and gentle and usually never ever gets mad.
ok um- Sakura usually wears gentle and light colors. I believe that the only one who can unfreeze kai's heart is with love and gentleness so...srry to burst any punk's, goth's, or emo's bubbles...

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