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 Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:26 pm
~Forever and Always~
By Megan Moran
You are that sweet & steady note
In life's chaotic serenade.
Your love fills me up,
overflowing in crimson flame.
You've burned away dark memories,
The ones that make my blood run cold.
You're too good to be true,
Your perfection takes my breath away.
My heart is engulfed in white hot flames,
Thinking of you never felt so good.
Feels like you could kiss away the imperfections,
Forgive my every sin.
Put your hand in mine, never let go.
Take me away from my dark past.
I swear to you on everything that I am,
I'll stand right by your side forever and for always.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:27 pm
((this is copyrighted just so you know.))
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:17 pm
It was realy good! Very moving.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 9:13 am
*mouth remains agape as i stare at you blankly* i'm at a complete loss for words so i will say this..."WOW"
VERY GOOD
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:46 pm
thank you. it just came to me one day.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:15 pm
I just had to smile, as it was a very delightful poem, although I'm still trying to find the right words to describe it (Quite humourously, there are few: Awe.)
I must say, I'm one always with critique on both sides of the coin, and as usual, its no different, although this time, its so much on a grand scale.
The first stanza ryhmed, but the rest really didn't. I just had that in the back of my mind as I read on. That's all.
Great work!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:04 pm
It's more of a free style poem.
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